Fine In A Locked Up Tower

by Kiku Nakamura

This is a mashed up Fushigi Boshi No Futago Hime version of Rapunzel. I loved the fairytale theme and tried to write this one. Hope you like it! My second Fanfic!. BTW this is a FineXShade fanfic!

6. Chapter 5: Damsel in Distress

Chapter 5: Damsel in Distress
By: RiMa11

Author's Note:

Kiku again! Sorry for not updating in a long time. Really, really sorry me is here to write another chapter. I actually typed this up before but then it got deleted by accident so I'm writing it again.

Shade was waiting under a tree for the enchantress to leave. While waiting he had fallen asleep under the shade of the big tree.

When he woke back up the time of day was already evening. He looked up at the opening of the tower seeing Fine peer out the window like earlier that day.

'I must protect Fine' Shade thought. 'She is the one that I will only love. She is the damsel in distress, while I have to be her Prince Charming. I want to whisk her away with me back to the castle. Away to fairyland where all stories have a happy ending.

But then before I do that I must plan what I will do. I don't want to have one single mistake in what I do for Fine. One misleading step can leave to a failure. I will come back tomorrow. '

The next day Shade came back the same time he did before. He made note of the phrase the enchantress said to have Fine let down her hair.

"Fine, Fine let down your hair" the enchantress would shout.

Shade let himself sleep just like he did the day before and woke up around the afternoon. 'I now know that the way the enchantress let's Fine know to let down her hair. So I just have to wait for the perfect moment to strike.

I can use my whip to easily pull myself up, but where would the whip attach to? That's a problem. Should I shout "Fine, Fine let down your hair", like the enchantress? Maybe. But right now is not a good time. I should wait about one week more. That time I can be sure of certain things. I don't want to scare my princess.' Shade thought.

Author's Note:

Advice, flames, compliments or just a plain review are all welcome. Just REVIEW! I am hungry for reviews. So the next chapter Fine and Shade will be together! Yay! Bonzai! Hooray!

Shade: What are you doing, Kiku?

Fine: *staring* What's so good about Shade and I being together?

Me: Are you kidding me? You guys are so in love with each other! Stay together. *Pushing them to face each other*

Shade&Fine: KIKKKKUUUU! What are you doing?

Me: Gotta run! Next chapter, just wait for it.
~Kiku