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(Disclaimer: See Chapter1, again in the Chapter 5, I had made it primairly about Kagome and what were conflicting thoughts were- and this may have one or two alternate endings lastly I think it's gonna be mainly about Naraku and Kagome...and Kagome's final battle with Kikyo, and to all Kikyo lovers gomen, but she gives off the wicked witch persona well. Anyway Voting maybe extending from St Patty's Day til probably the 29th of this month dear readers. And I'm deeply considering making this chapter a lime, between Naraku and Kagome, and somehow having Inuyasha and those that love her in the fedual world! Happy reading!)

Naraku and Kagome's Chapter (Naraku's Point of View)

I had watched her, my Kagome, enter the dinning hall wearing that purple and black silken kimono that I had made for her it had fit her perfectly, she was with my boy servant, Kohaku that boy has his uses, unlike Kagura who defys me at every turn. I stood up and walked over one or two steps to my left, and held out a chair for her- she had eyed me warily, understandable, ''Sit down my miko, I know that you are hungry,''I could smell her hunger from the bathing room, however oddly enough I can not read her mind yet, I was supposed to hmmm I wonder, I should bite deeper and refrain from giving her my blood until mating.

I hid a smirk as she slowly and reluctantly sat down, while biting her lip, again must you test my will my little angel. I then told Kohaku to go to the kitchens and get something to eat, he bowed while thaking me and left, leaving my soon
to be queen and myself.

I looked over at the top of her head with mild interest, mind you all I was still standing by herside it feels so right, seeing her slowly turn her head up to meet my eyes, the changes that I had instilled within her have
taken affect alot sooner than I thought. My little Kagome's hair was alot longer and alot healthier looking than Kikyo's, my miko's eyes are now purple rather than their original hue of blue- even though I like either. I startled her
alittle by placing my hand onto her shoulder, ''I trust everything is to your liking?'' Seeing her eys still locked with mine and her bottom lip still in her teeth, it is taking all of my will her love, do not force me to ravish you on this table;
she then had taken her lip from her teeth,

Kagome: Y-Yes,

Myself: I will not harm you, Kagome,

Kagome: I thought that you were obessed with Kikyo,

Myself: I admit I was, however you interest me more, as I explained everything to you lastnight, my miko.

Kagome: Am I a prisoiner here?

Myself: You may roam, my sweet, with me, I keep what is mine.

Kagome (Thinking I gotta keep him talking): Why do you think that I am yours?

Myself: Kagome, you were born for me,

Kagome: ...

With those six words, they had stunned her into silence blinking slowly with her sweet little mouth opened, ''Now eat, my dear, because I will personally take you for a tour of the palace, now eat.'' With the wave of my hand, her
empty plate was filled with fruits and eggs, Kagome even though you are very beautiful you will gain five pounds. She is too skinny, I will have you at a healthy weight, Inuyasha has not been taking care of your needs I however will, I saw that she was hesitating ''I did not poision it my mate...'' I wanted her to say something to me ''If I don't comply are you going to kill me?'' I could tell that she was trying to fight off her hunger, oh my little Kagome you are trying to act so strong and attempting to defy me; oh I do think it is rather adorable.

However 'adorable' that I think that it is, Kagome your health will always come first and your saftey if I have to lock you in my room I will, seeing her reluctantly eat, it is doing my beast good seeing my mate obey me- well if not will all change, I then noticed that she was trying not to enjoy the food hide it all you want my little miko I can tell by her scent the food was nurishing her body; I know that she doesn't want to admit it, Kagome my little sweet angel you have alot of proud don't you?

Probably travelling with that brash and brainless Inuyasha too much and that 'holy' monk, and the vengeful demon slayer, the litte foxkit- he was like her son, hmm gives me an idea- rather cliche I will earn her trust and have her turn on Inuyasha: I'm not going to have her sully her hands.

First after you eat Kagome I will escort you around the palace, then your dark miko lessons, after she was done, I had gotten back up and walked the two steps slowly to her. I then heard her heart started to beat faster and faster- oh my dear precious miko, my hands will never be raised to you. I held my extended palm out infront of her face, ''I will not harm you, my little miko.'' If I have to use my mind control, she had looked back up at me, I saw her reluctantly take my outstretched hand as I helped her up from her seat; I gave her my arm as we left the dinning hall.

I noticed that her head was down, looking at her feet, does she really fear me that much, I was trying not to notice that she was noticing my kimono, it my casual black silken one with a matching purple vest of the same material. It felt so right her by me, she was looking around and seeing Kohaku sitting on the grass, the boy looked up and noticed us and he bowed his head. I noticed his actions and inclined my head back in return, ''He gets lonely,'' I said as we continued walking, she noticed a beautiful lavish garden within another, there were red roses and black roses and some purple.

Surrounding my multiple gardens were willow trees and sakura no hana, with soothing waters spread out and around, ''It's peaceful isn't it?'' As we stopped walking so that she can look at the beauty around us, I had wrapped my arms around her waist and leaned down to whisper in her ear, ''I find it relaxing,'' I began to sniff her throat slightly ~ Mate,~ My beast would have to be sated for a time after I had taken abit of her blood and being this close to her; I was feeling her trembling form, I don't know if she knew how much that she was encouraging me by her moving against me even in small tremors. Placing my lips against her ear, ''Do you think that Kohaku needs a playmate his age? Or even a motherly figure?'' That made her heart rate go up, harder and faster more so than normal.

''As I said, my sweet little miko, do not fear me I wish you meet someone...'' Reaching to her hand and taking her further down the oustide hallway in my manner, as we got to the last door on the right; I then guided her in and followed, inside the large room was a tall woman with pale skin and purple wavy hair to her waist.

True this woman infront of us was a beauty, she blinked her cold grey stare upon us- her purple lips were pursed and closed. Her kimono was black and purple and sleeveless, almost as similar as Tsubaki, however more sinister, on her back was a purple jeweled sword ''Naraku, my old friend, you are as always early,'' Her silken velvet voice had annouced my name, ''Sora, this is my intended Kagome-Samma, you will teach her everything that you know as of today.'' Sora had blinked her head to my Kagome's direction and walked towards her; my little miko's breathing was becoming labored and uneven just by slightly.

Sora's hand went up to Kagome's forehead, a red light then spread throughout her body, then it had turned purple...

Sora: Hmm, very interesting, Naraku her powers are very astounding, however she is not fully schooled nowhere near by a long shot... *Tsk* such potential, and strenght
I will train you, Kagome- tell me what training have you recieved?

Kagome: N-not much, Inuyasha said I shouldn't c-cause it would hurt Kikyo's feelings...

Sora: Kikyo, you say?

Kagome: Hai, So-Sora, you know her?

Sora: Know her? She scared my sister Tsubaki, and her my sister's behavior I deeply apologize...

Kagome: But, I- promised Inuyasha...

Myself: He promised you, and he is allowed to break your trust, my miko, Sora train her in the dark miko arts...

Sora: I will need a week, Naraku, Kagome do you have any weapon knowledge?

Kagome: I am rather good with a bow and arrow, and I know lots of herbs and healing methods, I rival 'hollier than tho' Kikyo in that.

Sora: Good, I will teach sword play, they are much better to handle than bows and arrows...

'So Kagome is jealous of Kikyo, ie she is not, my sweet little miko, you have nothing to be jealous about,' I clasped my hand onto her shoulder ''I will be back later today for lunch Kagome,'' I then leaned down to give her a kiss on the cheek, ''I will see you later,'' I promised her
again, as was getting ready to slip out...

Kagome: Naraku, wait!

I then stopped to see her walk up to me and I looked at her somewhat confused, until she had wrapped her arms around me and laid a kiss onto my cheek... I then smiled and slipped out...

(Chapter 6 down, I will be extending the contest cuz of me getting busy and interrupted and having bad writter's block, remember read and review! so far I have 5 votes for a harem, 4 votes for Naraku, 1 vote for fluff chan keep those votes coming!)