Once again, I don't own Ar tonelico. Special thanks Rnn21 and Haseo55 for taking time to review and creating Ocs.
An Artonelico with Final Fantasy themes Fic
Lena Chapter 2: Yeadow and the another attack
*Continued from Lena Chapter 2*
Miola Forest
The trio reached there, prepare to head to Yeadow from Zial Falls.
As they reached there, they saw a Warning Sign on a split road.
"What is this?" Asked Lena and observe the Warning Sign.
"Do not approach this route; it may lead to the God of all dragons, Lagna." The sign says.
"Lagna?" Lena said
"The god of all dragons…It is the best not to take that route for now, let's head to Zial Falls." Said Zedd
"I agree." Said Lena and the trio left for Zial Falls.
*Scene Break*
Zial Falls
At there, the trio fight off some monster along their way. When they almost reached Yeadow, they saw someone was fight off some monster.
"It has no end with these monsters…." Said the girl, who wore a black jacket which inside is a white dress, with a black tights and wield two short dual swords, which can turn into guns.
"Should we help?" Asked Lena
"Did you really need to ask that, lass." Said Zedd
"I guess no." Said Lena and the two took out their weapon
After a long fight, they manage to defeat all their enemies.
"Thank you, I am truly appreciate your help." Said The Girl
"You're welcome…..by the way, my name Lena." Said Lena
"I am Zedd, her mentor." Said Zedd
"I am Kina, a demon fairy." Said Kina
"Well, my name is Seila…..by the way, you all look like a mercenary…." Said Seila
"Well you're correct…..and we're heading Yeadow." Said Lena
"I see…..well do you mind me to accompany you all?" Asked Seila
"Well I am fine with that," Said Zedd
"Thank you, shall we head out?" Said Seila
"Of Course." Said Lena and the four left and they reached Yeadow.
*Scene Break*
In Tavern
Zedd was talking to the tavern master for info while the girls are talking.
"So what did you do?" Asked Lena
"I was a freelance mercenary and a traveler." Said Seila
"I see, same as us….." Said Lena
"Well I am looking forward to work with you all." Said Seila, smiles and Zedd walk towards them
"How is it going?" Lena asked
"Well, the tavern master said that there was a young man want an info on sneak in…and there were another info that can endanger the whole Clustunia Army." Said Zedd
"Then what is that?" Asked Seila
"Is Magick Armour…..created by the Order." Said Zedd
"What, you mean the weapon that can use magic barrier to protect itself from Magic?" Said Lena
"Yup…." Said Kina
"If this was true…a thousands of life may perish." Said Seila
"Then we must stop it, where is it?" Asked Lena
"At where?" Asked Seila
"At Zial Falls." Said Zedd
"Then let's get going then!" Said Lena and the group left for Zial Falls
*Scene break*
Zial Falls, another road.
The group keep going until they reached a split path which they take another route instead.(Which I did not mention that the Falls has split road.)
After that, the group found some Order member and fight them off. Finally, they reach the Magick Armour.
"We are here….." Said Zedd
"Let's destroy it…" Said Lena and the group took out their weapons, however,
"You shall not do it!" Said a man appeared from behind, wearing a clock and armor.
"Oh crap…Enlas, the Dark Knight…." Said Zedd and the Magick Armour disappeared.
"I had located the Armour to the nearest base available…..and your life ends here…..get ready!" Said Enlas and took out his sword
"We have no choice, we had to fight." Said Lena and the group fight the Dark Knight
Thus the battle between the Dark Knight and the Group begun. Lena rished to him and slash him, however, the blows was missed. Seila proceed on by Whirlwind. But is Dodge by him as well. The Dark Knight uses Unholy Sacrifice and impulses of Darkness strike the two. However, he was hit by Zedd's Dead Spike, creating a maw on the Dark Knight. The two girls connect their attack on the Dark Knight. The Dark Knight Kneels.
"I don't expect you're this strong, I guess I should retreat for now." Said Enlas and left via teleport.
"He got away….." Said Lena
"Damn!" Said Seila
"We haven't lost let….we had to head to Chiya at once or it will be too late." Said Zed, calmly.
"Right….but why Chiya…" Asked Lena
"Cause…that was the nearest base of the Order was around." Said Zedd
"Then let's waste no time, let's go." Said Lena and the whole group went to Chiya, passing through Madula Plains.
*To Be Continued*
I kinda know this is a short to medium chapter. Anyway, it seems like the two side will converge on the next chapter…but it still depend on me though. Anyhow to the reviews.
From Rnn21 in Rade Chapter 2
Yeah, I discovered I cant be a beta reader due to the fact i didnt post enough
stories, so the idea is shot, but if theres any piece in the story you want me
to review, send me it in a pm and i can take a look at it.
The group talk would be an interesting addition, like to discover more about
the chars, or to lighten the mood a little.
And how does the Accel Mode and Fate System work?
, I'll thanks in advance anyway.
the Fate System, it was somehow connected to Group Talk. Group Talk is just like normal talking or it was like Skits in Tales series. However, the Fate Syetem is a special event within each characters, it can be their past, dilemma and such. The MCs will do those events during the course of the story. It will deepen the bond between the main character and their allies. And the Accel Mode will available once the eye user can control their power. So the MCs (Rade and Lena) will get theirs first. The others can get it via a special process.(Which will be reveal on the course of the story.) In Accel mode they gain more power and Special abilities.
Extra: Sorry if I sounded like I was playing a game.
New readers are encouraged to create OCs for this. The platelet is like this
Name(Obvious):
Gender(Obvious):
Age(Must):
Personality(One liner also accepted):
Appearance(Obvious):
Weapon(At most, 2):
Skills:(2 sets if your OC has 2 kinds of weapon)
Set A skill
Set B skill
Limit Break (Or super move or overdrive or Quickening)(If use quickening include LV1-3)(Same as skill, must have the same number as your weapon):
As for the ending which I will base on, I will think about it later.
I sincerely thank Rnn21 and Haseo55 for creating the OCs. R&R and Close this Chapter.