LOREN'S POV

Eddie (rubbing his cheek): Loren wait, I'll make it up to you.

Loren (turning around): What makes you think you can?

Eddie: I'll teach you kickboxing.

Loren: Why would you want to make it up to me?

Eddie: I don't want you to be mad at me.

Loren: Why not? We've always hated each other.


Eddie: Because I don't want my girlfriend's best friend to hate me.

Loren (walking away): Well, lucky for you. I'm not her best friend anymore. The populars are so you have nothing to worry about. They all "love" you.

I look around one more time, making me bump into someone. We both fall and I'm now laying on top of him. He's gorgeous. He has dirty blond hair and blue piercing eyes. I think I can feel a sixpack underneath his shirt.

Loren: I'm soooo sorry, I really wasn't paying attention.

Guy: It's okay, beautiful girls are allowed to bump into me.

Loren (smiling): Thanks.

We both don't bother to get off each other until Eddie walks up to us.

Eddie: Ehm...shouldn't you two get off each other?

Guy (smiling): Right.

His smile makes him even more gorgeous. I get off him and he stands up. He grabs my hand to help me up and when I'm standing he doesn't let go. I don't mind though. I smile at him and move my other hand through my hair.

Loren (flirty): Sorry again, I didn't hurt you did I?

Guy (smiling): Neh, you're not heavy.

I smile again, this guy really knows how to get a girl. Eddie starts introducing himself to the guy making the guy let go of my hand. I really hate Eddie for doing that. He totally did it on purpose.

Eddie: Well, I'm Eddie.

Austin (shaking his hand): I'm Austin

They stop shaking hands and Austin turns his attention back to me. Even his name is sexy...Austin.

Austin (flashing a smile): What's your name beautiful?

Loren (flirty): I'm Loren, Loren Tate.

Austin (smiling): The name suits you.

Loren: Yeah? Why's that?

Austin (flirty): It's beautiful too.

Loren (stepping closer to him): You're a flirt.

Austin (also coming closer): Do you mind?

We're now pretty close. We're studying each other's faces and we're liking what we see.

Loren (flirty): I can't say that I do.

Eddie (clearing his throat): Still here you guys.

Loren: So...just go.

Eddie: Neh, I'm fine.

Austin (flirty): So, sexy, can I have your number.

Loren (flirty): Only if I can have yours too.

Austin (flirty): You got it.

Eddie (walking away): Okay, I'm going.

I'm glad Eddie's finally gone. He was really annoying. He interrupted the whole time. Austin and I switch numbers not moving away from each other.

Loren (walking away): See ya later.

Austin (flirty): Yes you will.

I walk to my car and make sure to shake my hips a little bit more. I get in and drive home.


I'm getting ready for school. I dress the same as yesterday but with a little more lipstick and mascara. Dress to impress right? I drive to school in my white lamborghini and park in the parking lot. I walk into the school and make sure to swing my hips. What if Austin's looking? He's so sexy. I have to admit that he's not as sexy as Eddie but he comes really close. I walk to my locker and when I'm about to close it again I can hear someone walking up to me. I close my locker and turn around. It's Austin, he looks even sexier than yesterday.

Austin (flirty): Hey sexy

Loren (flirty): Hey yourself

Austin: You want to hang out this afternoon?

Loren: Depends on what we'll do.

Austin: How about we go swimming, I'm dying to see you in a bikini.

Loren: I guess we could do that.

Austin (walking away): It's a date.

The first classes pass and now it's lunch time. I walk into the yard and sit down at an empty table. After a little while I see Austin walking to my direction. He sits down very close next to me. Eddie walks over to us too and sits down on the other side of the table.

Loren: Shouldn't you sit with your girlfriend?

Eddie: I'm fine right here.

Loren: If you say so. (turning her attention to Austin) So, what time are you picking me up?

Austin: How about we both drive home to get our stuff and I'll just pick you up after that?

Loren: Okay

Eddie (curious): What are you guys talking about?

Austin: Loren and I are going swimming. You and your girlfriend can come too if you want.

Nooooo! I don't want Eddie to come! Please say no, please say no!

Eddie: Sounds fun, I'll be there.

Why does life hate me?


I'm at home with about ten bikinis in my hands, rushing into the living room.

Loren: MOM!

Nora: Yeah sweetie?

Loren: Which bikini do you like best?

Nora: The red two piece bikini, why?

Loren: Austin is picking me up in about ten minutes for our date.

Nora (confused): Who's Austin?

Loren: That cute boy from school I've told you about.

Nora: I see, you like him?

Loren: I do, he's so gorgeous. He's almost as hot as Eddie is.

Nora: So you think Eddie is hot, huh?

Loren: I do, I mean, have you seen the man?

Nora: So, you're more attracted to Eddie than to Austin?

Loren (sighs): I have to admit that I am. I mean, I'm dying to kiss Austin but I would love kissing Eddie even more. I still think that he's a jerk but that doesn't mean he isn't hot as hell.

Nora: You can't baby girl.

Loren: I know, I'm not planning on actually doing it. I know that he's with Melissa and even though we're in a fight, I love her. And by the way, I still hate Eddie. I'm not going to boost his ego by letting him know I'm attracted to him.

Nora: That's right.

Loren (looking at her watch and stressing out): GOSH, Austin and Eddie are going to be here any minute now!

Nora: What do you mean and Eddie?

Loren: Melissa and Eddie are coming too.

Nora: Is that a good idea? Do you really think seeing them both in swimming trunks is going to work?

Loren: No but it wasn't my idea. Austin invited them and I can't say that Eddie can't come because seeing him in swimming trunks makes me want to jump him!

Nora: You're right, just don't mess things up ok? (sighs) I've done that once.

Loren: What do you mean?

Nora: No time to tell you that right now. Go change!

I rush into my room and get into the bikini my mom picked. I put on denim ripped shorts and black pumps. I grab a denim cardigan, put it on and make a knot in it so that it covers my breasts but not my stomach. I check my make-up one more time and walk back into the living room.

Nora: You look great, girl. I'm telling you, that boy's not gonna make it.

Loren (laughing): That's the fun part.

Nora (frowning): I think Eddie's also gonna have it hard though. And I mean literally, hard as in hard in his trunks.

Loren: MOM! Stop it! Do you really want me to be turned on?

Nora: Okay gross, I don't have to know what turns you on. I just want you to make the right decisions.

Loren: I won't try anything with Eddie, mom.

Nora: Okay, just be careful okay?

Loren: I will.

I hear a car honk and I walk outside. Austin is leaning against his black SUV and Eddie is sitting in his car behind Austin's with Melissa. I walk over to Austin and see his eyes trailing down from my head to my toes. I swing my hips from side to side while walking towards him and he swallows hard.

Austin: You're not going to let me see you in bikini yet?

Loren: Nope.

Austin: You're making this so hard, I was hoping you would come in a cover up so I could have a sneak peak.

Loren: You can't complain, you're still wearing your shirt too.

Austin: I guess you're right. Let's go. The sooner we get there, the sooner I can see you in bikini.

I smile and we get in. We drive to the swimming pool and sit down in a few chairs next to the pool. I get out of my clothes and look at Austin getting out of his shirt. His sixpack appears and I bite my lip. He looks at me and smirks. His eyes trail from my breasts to my ass and back. Before he can walk over to me I jump into the pool. He jumps in too and when I get up I see Eddie standing next to the pool without a shirt. I thought Austin's sixpack was looking good but compared to Eddie's it's nothing. Eddie's eyes lock with mine and Melissa starts kissing Eddie. Melissa's wearing her red polka dot bikini. Melissa is making out with Eddie but Eddie's eyes are open and still locking with mine. Austin grabbing me by my waist makes me snap out of it.

Austin: Man, you look hot.

I don't say anything but trail my hand from his chest to his sixpack. Suddenly he pulls me closer and crushes his lips onto mine. I put one of my hands in his neck and he puts one of his hands on my ass. He starts squeasing it while pushing his tongue into my mouth. We keep making out like this and it's good I guess. He's not a bad kisser, he's not the best kisser either. I open my eyes and look at Eddie and Melissa. I see that Eddie's eyes are also open and we lock eyes. I don't know why but I kinda feel like making him jealous so I trail my kisses from Austin's mouth to his neck while still looking at Eddie and I start kissing Austin's neck. Eddie looks...angry? Why would he be angry? It's not like I'm his girfriend who's kissing another boy. Now that he looks angry I get the feeling of wanting to make him jealous even more. I move one of my hands to Austin's ass and squease it. I swear, I've never seen Eddie's eyes so dark as when I did that. Not even when I asked him if he would be willing to work as a male prostitute. I guess it was mean of me to say that but I don't regret it. I was really pissed off at him. I asked it because I aways thought Eddie dated and probably had sex with so many girls that the job suited him. At the moment his eyes are even darker than the moment I said that to him though. I don't get what his problem is. We've always hated each other so why would he mind? In the mean time I'm still kissing Austin and my hand is still on his ass. I see how Eddie pulls back from his kiss with Melissa and how he pulls her into the pool. He dives under water and after a little while I feel a hand on my ass. I know one thing for sure and that thing is that it wasn't Austin's hand. It can't be because his hands are on my breasts. Out of my shock I pull back and see Eddie standing behind us. Melissa walks up to him and Eddie smirks at me. Did Eddie really just touch my butt? I want to be really angry but my confusion wins it from my anger. Why would he do that when he has Melissa as his girlfriend?

Melissa: Lo, can we talk?

I hestitate. Should I? Melissa really hurt me and what if she's just going to yell at me? Something in her eys makes me nod and walk with her though. We walk a few metres from the boys and then stop.

Melissa: I'm sorry Lo. It was my fault that you were set up with Tyler and I was only thinking about myself. I really like Eddie but I shouldn't have reacted the way I did towards you. I love you and I really miss you.

Loren (pulling Melissa into a hug): I love you too Mel.

After a little while Melissa pulls back.

Melissa: So, are we good?

Loren (smiling): Yeah...

Melissa: Sooooooo, what's going on with you and this boy...ehm...Austin?

Loren: I met him at school and he asked me out.

Melissa: He-is-hot. Not as hot as Eddie but still...HOT!

Loren (smirking): I know.

Melissa: Is he a good kisser?

Loren: He is okay I guess.

Melissa: I know what that means, he's a GREAT kisser.

It actually just means that he's okay but I'll go with Melissa's version. Eddie walks over to us and grabs my hand. His eyes are still as dark as they were a minute ago.

Eddie: Are you guys okay?

Melissa: We're fine.

Eddie: Okay, I want to talk to Loren then.

He doesn't wait for an answer but just pulls me out of the pool. He pulls me inside the building and into a dressing room. Inside he pushes me against the wall. I'm trying so hard not to stare at his sixpack but I can't help but to take a glance once in a while.

Loren: Eddie! What the hell?!

Eddie: I want to train with you.

Loren (frustrated): What are you talking about?!

Eddie: I want to learn you kickboxing.

Loren: Why would you want to?

Eddie (sighs frustrated): Because I like you Loren.


So, it's finally out in the open. Eddie likes Loren. What's going to happen now?

"Song to listen to: Make a move by Gavin Degraw"