hi guys thanks for all the reviews ok so on with the story

It had been a while since Simba's assassination and the pride were very excited Starlight was going to give birth to cubs any day,Kiara had two cubs the boy was called Eze wich means king and the daughter was called Imena wich means dream.

One morning Khalfani woke up and walked outside at five months old it was clear he didn't share the skills in battle with his father but then agian you would have to be extremly talented to be as skilled as Lionel,Khalfani was like his father a bit a fast and a fierce fighter,like Lionel he was a bit smaller than the other cubs,but none of the cubs messed with him not because he was prince but because if you got him mad he wouldn't show any mercy in a fight,Adeze was a lot like her mom she had lovly blue eye and a cream coat she seems to be a skilled hunter she is calm and learns quickly.

That morning Lionel and Malgo were sitting at pride rock watching the lioness getting ready for the hunt Malgo said"hey Lionel so when are we going to take down Kopa"

"I want to try tonight we will sneek in and kill as many as we can tell Kovu"Lionel replied they suddnly heard a scream coming from the den it was Starlight the cubs were about to arrive Lionel said"Malgo you go get Raffiki"Malgo ran off to Raffiki's tree.

Malgo soon arrived with Raffiki,Raffiki ran into the den Lionel heard Starlight groaning and yelling pain for twenty minutes until it stopped and Sala said"you can come in now guys"Lionel went in and saw not one not two but three cubs curled up into her paws Starlight said"they are all boys"Lionel looked at them and said"I have some names Gamba it means warrior,Chacha it means strong you can name the last one"

Starlight thought for a moment and then said"Kosey it means lion"everyone thought the cubs were cute and everyone was happy.

That night Lionel,Kovu,Malgo and a Malgo's sister called Kali all went to the border Lionel said"ok me,Kovu and Malgo will sneak in and kill them silently,Kali you will hide the bodies and if they find us you will go get the pride"so the group of lions sneaked into the outlands.

Once they had split up the three lions approched the termite mound,and about twenty metres away was five lioness the three of them sneaked up behind them Lionel put his paw around a lioness mouth and slit her throat as did Malgo and Kovu the last two turned round shocked before they could run Lionel and Malgo took them out,as they moved closer to the termite mound they saw about twenty lioness blocking the way Lionel said"oh shit what do we do now?"

Kovu replied"I know a back entrance this way"Kovu started leading them around the back of the termite mound to a hole in the back of the cave the three of them crept in to find no one in there Malgo said"oh shit where is Kopa and Malic"

"shut up"said Lionel but it was to late all of the twenty lioness heard him one said"well look who it is Kopa will be happy when he can see you dead"every lioness lunged at the three of them Lionel doged an attack and whacked her on the head the lioness went flying into the wall Lionel yelled to Malgo"MALGO,KOVU USE THAT SPECIAL SKILL WE HAVE BEEN WORKING ON"both of them nodded Lionel,Malgo and Kovu all ran at a grouo of lioness they jumped and spinned round sliting throats in the process they all killed about three lioness each.

Lionel yelled"GUYS WE'VE DONE ENOUGH LETS GO MOVE OUT GO GO!"the three of them ran dogding attacks Kovu said"shit where is Kali with our support from the pride"they kept running until Kali came out of no where she yelled"GUYS GO NOW I WILL HOLD THEM OFF GO GO"

"KALI NO YOUR MY SISTER YOUR COMING WITH US"Malgo yelled before she could awnser Zira had been watching them she said"you will all go I will hold them off GO"

they all ran as fast as they could back to the pridelands Kovu turned round to see his mom get lept on by the remaining lioness,they ran all the way home.

As soon as they were home Lionel called a meeting with the pride Lionel said"good evening everyone ok so we done the best we could it didn't go to plan but we did kill of about half there pride,but we lost a pride member Zira sacraficed herself to save us but we dont know for sure if she is dead soon we will be attepmting a rescue mission that is all thank you"the pride all went to sleep that night worried about Zira.

Meanwhile in the outlands Kopa's pride had taken Zira as there prisnor Kopa walked up to Zira and said"well well well look who it Zira a betrayer to this pride you teached me lots of things like never betray your pride so WHY!"

"I will never talk to you never"Zira replied

"fine lioness take her away"said Kopa and two lioness took her away.

ok so what do you think do you think I could improve it a little please tell me hope you liked it please read and review :)