Hey guys, writing fanfic instead of during my finals, aren't you proud of me! I know shame me, I have a 10 page paper to write and I am procrastinating badly. So please fanfic gods shine down on me and help me pass so I can write more fanfics.!
Chapter 6 Rewrite
I am finally going to figure out who I am.
I thought this as I ran up to the clock tower with my dog in my arms. The place looked so familiar, but for the first time since I woke up, I didn't care for I was meeting who people who were not only in my memories, but the gang seem to think could really help.
I was standing there looking at the sunset for what seemed like only a few minutes with my dog by my side when I noticed a flash of black pass by me. I turned around to see a main standing in a huge black robe with his hood down.
I was staring at him, when he raised his hand as if for me to join me. I thought it was a little weird, but before I could say anything, my body started to move on its own, and there was nothing I could do.
My dog looked at me and started to bark like mad, and kept trying to stop me. The man looked at me and motioned to my dog, and acting on command picked up by dog and carry her with me towards the man.
We were just leaving the clock tower plaza when Sora and Riku came running up from the subway. They saw me following the man and yelled my name as they started to run after us.
The man walked calmly as if he knew exactly where he was going. I trailed him silently with my dog in my arms barking up a storm and trying to get at the man.
Sora and Riku kept following us, but it seemed that they would arrive at a place just as we were leaving it.
We enter the main area where all the shops are. The man in black knew exactly where he was going and led me to the place where Hayner, Pence and Olette found me. The man in black opened up a portal of darkness.
As if I had been through one before it snapped me out of my trance.
Hoping that the man wouldn't notice me, I dropped my dog on the ground so we both could run up the stairs.
Before I could make it up even half the steps, the man appeared out in front of me and grasped my hand, pulling me towards the portal.
I was struggling with all my might trying to escape, and doing the only other thing I thought of was scream Sora and Riku's name as loud as I could.
So not very long, but longer than the original, but dun dun duh, what is going to happen to poor Lilly!