hello again. Sorry that ch 5 was so crapy. I've been busy.
Well ,anyway this chapter will be longer and better than ch 5 which is now
my least favorite chapter. Have you guessed who Kachiko is?? God I hope
so..............still PG, I won't ever let my character get too mature as
far as romance goes. I can't write well like that..
Reviews and CONSTRUCTIVE crtisism welcome. As for flamers, I won't just delete your review, I can do much worse. Flaming is cruel and unfair to an author so I have no tolerance for it. Eveyone else, enjoy!!! ^__^* Thank you.
oh, and Yameye, Vegeta already admitted that in one of the episodes. ^__^** lol. Thankz for reading even though ya didn't get the couples.
and Anime Girl, I'm so flattered that I actually inspired someone. I'm reading all your fics now!!!
This chapter brought to you by CotD's ability to be sick on Fridays...X__X*
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Picoolo opened his eyes to a dark ceiling. " Damn.......what hit me.............oh yeah tall, lovely, and phycotic..." He sat up, his head still buzzing as if he had a hangover. He took a look around the small room he was in. Cobwebs were nowhere to be found in the corners or in the crevices of the stonework. The floor was pure, solid marble, dark black and smooth. Someone's laughed floated in behind him. " Who goes there?!" Picoolo growled into the semi-darkness. A figure slowly appeared to him, a woman by the looks. " Well, hello yourself. Rude man aren't you? Oh well, that won't soon be a problem." A face appeared to him. It would have been the face of a lovely woman had the lips not been curled into a sneer or the eyes filled with hate. She laughed, a cold, terrible laught, that echoed in the room. " You! Your the Dark Lady Setsuna mentioned, aren't you?" She smiled at him, a smile that sent a shiver up the warrior's spine. " Dark Lady is not my name. However it does suit me." She pointed at him and muttered something. All Picoolo knew was that he was one minute sitting on the cold marble floor and the next he was inches from the Dark Lady. " Allow me to introduce myself, I am called Hatsumomo. and you must be Picoolo...." She pointed at him again, making him immobile. ' How is she doing this? I've never felt such a power before!' Hatsumomo leaned forward and kissed him. He struggled away and glared at her. " Now now, is my kiss that bad? You'd think you didn't like women at all...." Hatsumomo sneered at him and, with a flick of her wrist sent him flying backwards. He felt the other spell dissapear from his body. So he attacked. However, Kachiko appeared in front of Hatsumomo and he stopped mid-flight. Picoolo expected her to attack, but she didn't. That was when he noticed her eyes. They were....glossy..and.....just like Bulma's! " Bulma-san....is that Bulma-san?!" Hatsumomo smiled cruely at him. She nodded. " Why yes. Alcionite wanted her, you see. So I decided he could have her at the same time I used her for my own purposes. A beautiful little marionette, don't you agree?" That justed ticked Picoolo off. " She's my friend, so hurt her and I'll-" " Don't worry, she won't be harmed. as long as you be a good little boy and do as I say. Otherwise, well let me show you." She pointed again at Bulma. Thunder shot out of her fingertips and struck Bulma. " AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEE!!!!" She screamed, her body convulsing with the power. " STOP IT! Leave her be! I won't attack again!" Hatsumomo stopped and Bulma fell to the floor, exhausted from the strain. She looked at him, tears welling in her eyes. Picoolo clenched his fists. He could fight, but he couldn't let Hatsumomo hurt Bulma either. Goku and Vegeta would never forgive him for it. " Now, lets see how your friends are doing...." Hatsumomo approached a crystal ball and sat before it. A picture soon illuminated the dank room. Goku, Vegeta and Setsuna were just waking up. They were severely hurt. Setsuna had a gash on her forhead and was holding her side. The others were breathing hard. " Damnit!" Vegeta cursed, spitting small amounts of blood out of his mouth. Goku stepped forward and picked up Setsuna. " Are you alright Setsuna?" She nodded weakling and began to cast a healing spell on herself.( It's my story, so she can do that. Nyah ^v^) Suddenly she panicked. " Picoolo!!! Where is he?" Goku looked around in confussion. " Kachiko must have taken him while we all were unconcious. Crap, this is starting to suck....." " STARTING??!!??! First my woman, and now the Namek...What does that space b*^% want with them?" Vegeta said, none too politely. Hatsumomo growled at the image. " Bait. I'm Actorina's only heir. She wants revenge, what else?" The group looked at each other in concern. Steadily, they floated back into the air. Goku dug into a bag at his waist for the sensu beans and they each recovered with one He put the remaining two into the bag and took off towards wherever Picoolo was. " Persistant aren't they?" Hatsumomo waved her hand over the ball and the image faded. " Now I'm going to prepare to make the wench suffer, like her dratted mother made me suffer. And you two will just have to watch..." Crystals snuck up Bulma's kimono, holding her still. " What?? Let me go you..you....cow!!!" Hatsumomo speed up the process, encasing Bulma in the casing completely. Alcionite appeared behind her. " But momo-sama! I can't have her like that!" Hatsumomo waved him aside. " After I kill Setsuna and her friends!!" He stepped away as Hatsumomo turned to Picoolo. " I'll kill your little girlfriend and then you will learn to bow before the real beauty of the Universe!!" The same crystals snaked thier way up Picoolo's legs, encasing him as they had Bulma. He couln't move or speak, but he could see.......and he would soon wish he couln't do that either....
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Goku speed ahead of the group, letting his worries overtake him. Bulma had nearly killed him under the Dark Lady's control, so just thinking about what her real power was like worried him greatly. ' I get the revenge thing, but why after so long? And in such a way? Lets see......she wants revenge, so why not out-and-out kill Setsuna? It's almost like she doesn't really want Setsuna dead....' " Goku!" Vegeta's voice pulled him from his cluttered thoughts and to the horizon. A small, black palace stuck from the side of Mt. Fuji ( ran out of new names...) and two figures stood upon the large threshold. The trio landed before swiftly and took in the man and woman before them. The man had long auburn hair and piercing silver eyes. Two long tendrils covered his light-skinned face an rested upon black armor and leggings. The woman was a different story. She had fair skin upon which laid many dazzling jewels of all sorts of colors and her clothes were a sleeveless top with a half-unbuttoned neckline which connected with a black slitted skirt. Long black hair cascaded down her back. " Well, its about time you all got here....I was getting bored." Vegeta snarrled and stole a glance at Setsuna to see her reaction. It wasen't what he thought. Her normally placid face was now angsty and horrified. She took a few steps forward, eyes in a state of disbelief. " You! The Dark Lady? But you look like....." Setsuna trailed of and simply stared. Goku stepped forward in front if Setsuna. " Where are they? Where are Bulma & Picoolo?! Tell me!" DarK Lady laughed a piercing 'OH-hohoho!' and floated towards Goku. " Close by. But first, I haven't made my intro..... I am Grand Mazoku Hatsumomo. Now......about your 'friends'." Hatsumomo snapped her fingers and two crystals appeared. the first one contained Picoolo, his eyes open in an expresion of anger. The second was Bulma. Her blue eyes held half- shed tears, some of which had already landed on her beautifully decorated kimono. " Bulma! Picoolo! What happened? Are they-" " dead? on no dearie, they're quite alive I assure you. They still have a porpose to me....." Setsuna hissed low at Hatsumomo and came to stand next to Goku. " You want me so Picoolo is obvious as a hostage, but please free Bulma!! She has nothing to do with our business!" Hatsumomo smiled wickedly at them. " But she IS one thing girl. Who would throw away the last Queen of the Saiya-jin race, human though she is. No, she's much better in my hands." Vegeta snarled at this. Setsuna glared at Hatsumomo who took no notice however. " Like I said, they have a use. Remember Kachiko? the Queen was good in that role. She failed to kill you, Goku. It seemed she had you as one of the people closest to her heart. How strong she is.......lets give her another go. And Picoolo will join too." Another of Hatsumomo's evil smiles appeared on her face. She snapped her fingers, making the crystals dissapear from the two figures. Both dropped to the ground and landed on their feet. " You two will pay for your earlier insolence! You will kill your friends with your own hands, and get to watch the whole thing helplessly!" Bulma started to cry as she raised a hand holding an energy ball up to Vegeta. Picoolo launched at Setsuna, his eyes sad. Bulma threw the ball at Vegeta, kicking at him furiously all the while. Picoolo attacked Setsuna ruthlessly, her cries of pain echoing in the hall. " AAACKK!!" With a thud Vegeta was knocked unconcious by Bulma who's tears fell onto his pained face. Setsuna was holding her own, barely. Bulma turned to Goku, her eyes rimmed with tears. She attacked. Goku simply blocked her punches and kicks, smiling to show her he was unhurt. Darting behind Bulma, he aimed a hit at the nap of her neck and struck. She passed out into his arms and he set he down on the floor gently. Setsuna came back- to-back with Goku. " She's ok? Good. Now what about Picoolo?" He bit his lip......and fell to the floor. Alcionite appeared behind Goku's prone form, smiling.
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MUWAHAHAHA!!! Did you like that ciffhanger? Pluto Girl probably had a fit, right Puu? LOL I ended it like that because I have no idea what to put next. Seriously. Writer's Block sux. So I have homework for you all!(face falls as everyone groans) It's not hard! If you have any ideas for me e- mail me at : Plutoprincess20@lycos.com . And if you got a complete chappy you want to add, I will put it up and give you credit. That's right! YOU can add to my story! I'll be writing one like that after I finish a few things that will start with a chappy by me and continue with sent-in chappys. Once again R&R!!!!!
USELESS QUOTE OF THE DAY: " That's impossible Sir., my pots' in Brian's
pants"- The Breakfast Club
Reviews and CONSTRUCTIVE crtisism welcome. As for flamers, I won't just delete your review, I can do much worse. Flaming is cruel and unfair to an author so I have no tolerance for it. Eveyone else, enjoy!!! ^__^* Thank you.
oh, and Yameye, Vegeta already admitted that in one of the episodes. ^__^** lol. Thankz for reading even though ya didn't get the couples.
and Anime Girl, I'm so flattered that I actually inspired someone. I'm reading all your fics now!!!
This chapter brought to you by CotD's ability to be sick on Fridays...X__X*
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Picoolo opened his eyes to a dark ceiling. " Damn.......what hit me.............oh yeah tall, lovely, and phycotic..." He sat up, his head still buzzing as if he had a hangover. He took a look around the small room he was in. Cobwebs were nowhere to be found in the corners or in the crevices of the stonework. The floor was pure, solid marble, dark black and smooth. Someone's laughed floated in behind him. " Who goes there?!" Picoolo growled into the semi-darkness. A figure slowly appeared to him, a woman by the looks. " Well, hello yourself. Rude man aren't you? Oh well, that won't soon be a problem." A face appeared to him. It would have been the face of a lovely woman had the lips not been curled into a sneer or the eyes filled with hate. She laughed, a cold, terrible laught, that echoed in the room. " You! Your the Dark Lady Setsuna mentioned, aren't you?" She smiled at him, a smile that sent a shiver up the warrior's spine. " Dark Lady is not my name. However it does suit me." She pointed at him and muttered something. All Picoolo knew was that he was one minute sitting on the cold marble floor and the next he was inches from the Dark Lady. " Allow me to introduce myself, I am called Hatsumomo. and you must be Picoolo...." She pointed at him again, making him immobile. ' How is she doing this? I've never felt such a power before!' Hatsumomo leaned forward and kissed him. He struggled away and glared at her. " Now now, is my kiss that bad? You'd think you didn't like women at all...." Hatsumomo sneered at him and, with a flick of her wrist sent him flying backwards. He felt the other spell dissapear from his body. So he attacked. However, Kachiko appeared in front of Hatsumomo and he stopped mid-flight. Picoolo expected her to attack, but she didn't. That was when he noticed her eyes. They were....glossy..and.....just like Bulma's! " Bulma-san....is that Bulma-san?!" Hatsumomo smiled cruely at him. She nodded. " Why yes. Alcionite wanted her, you see. So I decided he could have her at the same time I used her for my own purposes. A beautiful little marionette, don't you agree?" That justed ticked Picoolo off. " She's my friend, so hurt her and I'll-" " Don't worry, she won't be harmed. as long as you be a good little boy and do as I say. Otherwise, well let me show you." She pointed again at Bulma. Thunder shot out of her fingertips and struck Bulma. " AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEE!!!!" She screamed, her body convulsing with the power. " STOP IT! Leave her be! I won't attack again!" Hatsumomo stopped and Bulma fell to the floor, exhausted from the strain. She looked at him, tears welling in her eyes. Picoolo clenched his fists. He could fight, but he couldn't let Hatsumomo hurt Bulma either. Goku and Vegeta would never forgive him for it. " Now, lets see how your friends are doing...." Hatsumomo approached a crystal ball and sat before it. A picture soon illuminated the dank room. Goku, Vegeta and Setsuna were just waking up. They were severely hurt. Setsuna had a gash on her forhead and was holding her side. The others were breathing hard. " Damnit!" Vegeta cursed, spitting small amounts of blood out of his mouth. Goku stepped forward and picked up Setsuna. " Are you alright Setsuna?" She nodded weakling and began to cast a healing spell on herself.( It's my story, so she can do that. Nyah ^v^) Suddenly she panicked. " Picoolo!!! Where is he?" Goku looked around in confussion. " Kachiko must have taken him while we all were unconcious. Crap, this is starting to suck....." " STARTING??!!??! First my woman, and now the Namek...What does that space b*^% want with them?" Vegeta said, none too politely. Hatsumomo growled at the image. " Bait. I'm Actorina's only heir. She wants revenge, what else?" The group looked at each other in concern. Steadily, they floated back into the air. Goku dug into a bag at his waist for the sensu beans and they each recovered with one He put the remaining two into the bag and took off towards wherever Picoolo was. " Persistant aren't they?" Hatsumomo waved her hand over the ball and the image faded. " Now I'm going to prepare to make the wench suffer, like her dratted mother made me suffer. And you two will just have to watch..." Crystals snuck up Bulma's kimono, holding her still. " What?? Let me go you..you....cow!!!" Hatsumomo speed up the process, encasing Bulma in the casing completely. Alcionite appeared behind her. " But momo-sama! I can't have her like that!" Hatsumomo waved him aside. " After I kill Setsuna and her friends!!" He stepped away as Hatsumomo turned to Picoolo. " I'll kill your little girlfriend and then you will learn to bow before the real beauty of the Universe!!" The same crystals snaked thier way up Picoolo's legs, encasing him as they had Bulma. He couln't move or speak, but he could see.......and he would soon wish he couln't do that either....
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Goku speed ahead of the group, letting his worries overtake him. Bulma had nearly killed him under the Dark Lady's control, so just thinking about what her real power was like worried him greatly. ' I get the revenge thing, but why after so long? And in such a way? Lets see......she wants revenge, so why not out-and-out kill Setsuna? It's almost like she doesn't really want Setsuna dead....' " Goku!" Vegeta's voice pulled him from his cluttered thoughts and to the horizon. A small, black palace stuck from the side of Mt. Fuji ( ran out of new names...) and two figures stood upon the large threshold. The trio landed before swiftly and took in the man and woman before them. The man had long auburn hair and piercing silver eyes. Two long tendrils covered his light-skinned face an rested upon black armor and leggings. The woman was a different story. She had fair skin upon which laid many dazzling jewels of all sorts of colors and her clothes were a sleeveless top with a half-unbuttoned neckline which connected with a black slitted skirt. Long black hair cascaded down her back. " Well, its about time you all got here....I was getting bored." Vegeta snarrled and stole a glance at Setsuna to see her reaction. It wasen't what he thought. Her normally placid face was now angsty and horrified. She took a few steps forward, eyes in a state of disbelief. " You! The Dark Lady? But you look like....." Setsuna trailed of and simply stared. Goku stepped forward in front if Setsuna. " Where are they? Where are Bulma & Picoolo?! Tell me!" DarK Lady laughed a piercing 'OH-hohoho!' and floated towards Goku. " Close by. But first, I haven't made my intro..... I am Grand Mazoku Hatsumomo. Now......about your 'friends'." Hatsumomo snapped her fingers and two crystals appeared. the first one contained Picoolo, his eyes open in an expresion of anger. The second was Bulma. Her blue eyes held half- shed tears, some of which had already landed on her beautifully decorated kimono. " Bulma! Picoolo! What happened? Are they-" " dead? on no dearie, they're quite alive I assure you. They still have a porpose to me....." Setsuna hissed low at Hatsumomo and came to stand next to Goku. " You want me so Picoolo is obvious as a hostage, but please free Bulma!! She has nothing to do with our business!" Hatsumomo smiled wickedly at them. " But she IS one thing girl. Who would throw away the last Queen of the Saiya-jin race, human though she is. No, she's much better in my hands." Vegeta snarled at this. Setsuna glared at Hatsumomo who took no notice however. " Like I said, they have a use. Remember Kachiko? the Queen was good in that role. She failed to kill you, Goku. It seemed she had you as one of the people closest to her heart. How strong she is.......lets give her another go. And Picoolo will join too." Another of Hatsumomo's evil smiles appeared on her face. She snapped her fingers, making the crystals dissapear from the two figures. Both dropped to the ground and landed on their feet. " You two will pay for your earlier insolence! You will kill your friends with your own hands, and get to watch the whole thing helplessly!" Bulma started to cry as she raised a hand holding an energy ball up to Vegeta. Picoolo launched at Setsuna, his eyes sad. Bulma threw the ball at Vegeta, kicking at him furiously all the while. Picoolo attacked Setsuna ruthlessly, her cries of pain echoing in the hall. " AAACKK!!" With a thud Vegeta was knocked unconcious by Bulma who's tears fell onto his pained face. Setsuna was holding her own, barely. Bulma turned to Goku, her eyes rimmed with tears. She attacked. Goku simply blocked her punches and kicks, smiling to show her he was unhurt. Darting behind Bulma, he aimed a hit at the nap of her neck and struck. She passed out into his arms and he set he down on the floor gently. Setsuna came back- to-back with Goku. " She's ok? Good. Now what about Picoolo?" He bit his lip......and fell to the floor. Alcionite appeared behind Goku's prone form, smiling.
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MUWAHAHAHA!!! Did you like that ciffhanger? Pluto Girl probably had a fit, right Puu? LOL I ended it like that because I have no idea what to put next. Seriously. Writer's Block sux. So I have homework for you all!(face falls as everyone groans) It's not hard! If you have any ideas for me e- mail me at : Plutoprincess20@lycos.com . And if you got a complete chappy you want to add, I will put it up and give you credit. That's right! YOU can add to my story! I'll be writing one like that after I finish a few things that will start with a chappy by me and continue with sent-in chappys. Once again R&R!!!!!
USELESS QUOTE OF THE DAY: " That's impossible Sir., my pots' in Brian's
pants"- The Breakfast Club