Hey guys, I would like to ask you all a favor. A friend of mine commented how my chapters have been looking "jumpy", like instead of flowing like a river, it looks like it constantly hits dams and then goes on, I was hoping for an honest opinion and if you can, point out areas where it seems jumpy, I am also going to try and do the "Escape" scene in the first chapter when I get a good opportunity. I know with thanksgiving coming around I'll be a bit busy, but I care about what by viewers think. So please tell me what you think, be it in PM's or Reviews, I just want to make this better. R&R This is Oathkeeper0317 signing out.
Update: I'm adjusting the chapters now, such changes will include: Better flow in the story, the GRAY vs BSRG fight will be changed, and I will include the 'Escape' scene in chapter 1. Give me a bit to do this all, I thank you for your patience.