If you actually care about what I have to say then please read this, if not scroll down for the story. ...Okay, everyone who is reading this, thank you for still reading my lil fanfiction. Now... updates may be... random, since my computer has decided its going to hate me and make me rewrite this chapter TWICE and I am not sure if it is going to do the same thing to my other chapters. So if it takes me a while, be prepared. Now... I will stop ramblings and try to re-re-retype this AGAIN- stupid computer- and get out of you're hair.
Oh, before I forget, I may deciede to rewrite this or tweak it a lil and would like to know if you guys noticed anything that didn't match up or mebey wanted more of an explaination. All comments and reviews are welcome, after all you guys help me become a better writer so please, please, please review and say something! Thank you, onto the story.
SIDE-NOTE: In this chapter..
Italic = whats happening
"Whatever is said in these" = what is being said aloud by Sakura and someone else
'This'= what Atutenshi says
Regular = Sakura's thoughts
'These' = what Inner says
Sakura's shot forward with a chakra scalpel, her anger flaring once again. She quickly appeared before the girl and swiftly delivered a stab to her gut, making sure that she didn't hit any vital organs.
'... Two... One, I'm impressed!'The blonde exclaimed as she looked at her stomach,'You managed to draw blood within two hits, and you used a chakra scalpel. For that I will reward you by telling you my name and then killing you.'She giggled childishly as Sakura stared at her in disbelief.
'Now don't go off and forget it because I'm only saying it once, ok? My name is Hitori Atutenshi.'
Before Sakura could even blink, Atutenshi's hand had shot forward and wrapped around her throat. Sakura raised chakra enhanced hands to pry the hand from her throat but quickly discovered that her inhuman strength had no effect on her blonde opponent. As her vision began to swim her trys became desperate, she kick wildly and blindly attacked with her chakra scalpel but was unable to free herself from Atutenshi.
'What the hell is this girl?' Sakura thought as her body began to go numb. 'Nothing I do has any effect on her.'
As her strength faded she allowed her hands to fall uselessly to her side and allowed her now dull jade eyes to close. After all why struggle? It had no effect. Why keep her eyes open if she couldn't see?
'Why?'
A loud-mouth with wild, spiky hair and determined blue eyes.
'Naruto.'
A silent boy with crazy black hair and indifferent onyx eyes.
'Sasuke.'
A man who always read an orange book with odd silver hair and half his face covered.
'Kakashi.'
A picture of those three males and a pink headed girl.
'Team Seven.'
'Why are you giving up? Fight!' Inner yelled as she pushed her way into Sakura's thoughts. .'A true shinobi would'nt give up, they would fight to the death.'
Sakura pushed her way back to reality.
'I.'
Sakura's eyes snapped open.
'Refuse.'
She grabbed onto Atutenshi's arm with both hands.
'To.'
She pushed half of her chakra to the bottom of her feet.
'Give.'
She slammed her feet into Atuteshi's bloody stomach while simultaneously yanking her hand from her throat.
'Up.'
AtuTenshi flew into the darkness that surrounded them.
Sakura landed on unsteady feet as she sucked in oxygen. As coughs began to rack her body she slid down onto the cold marble floor and placed a glowing green hand to her chest. She relaxed her lungs and throat, lightening her cough before scanning her body for permanent damage. Pleased that there was none she opened her eyes.
And realized that Atutenshi was kneeling before her with her head tilted to the side and curious eyes.
Sakura quickly scrambled away from her, unable to stop the fear was slowly consuming her.
''That... hurt.'AtuTenshi said to herself in a emotionless voice while staring blankly at Sakura. Suddenly she turned her head to the right and her flaming red eyes sparked with annoyance followed by a mumbled cursed.
Sakura followed her gaze and her eyes widened. 'There's two of them?' She though in disbelief.
I know, it's a short chapter and I'm sorry but I didn't want to make it long because I was scared of my computer going wacko and losing it again... I know, I left you on a cliffy. Don't worry I will update within the week, hopefully before the 24th (my birthday!) as a gift to you guys lol. If I don't then expect it shortly after. Now, I may decide to rewrite this or tweak it a lil and would like to know if you guys noticed anything that didn't match up or maybe wanted more of an explanation. All comments and reviews are welcome, after all you guys help me become a better writer so please, please, please review and say something! Thank you!
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