It's Valleysong33 here again! I have news. I have been working out details of the stories and had some fun ideas, and yesterday I began redoing the entire story! It will take me possibly weeks to publish the newer version of the story because of writing the first drafts, overall first draft, correcting those for spelling and grammar, punctuation, and all that that, plus a third to make sure everything is in the right place and all! The newer version of Unnatural will be hopefully much better. For now please just try to be patient!