Author's note: Right. This is a tad different than what I've written before. It's one of my first poems – in English, that is – the second, actually. It's about Kaito and Aoko's meeting, of course – I'm going nuts because of this couple. So, well, all of this to say I'll hope you'll like it, hope you'll review… this is a peculiar case.
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Beginning
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It's the beginning of the beginning
For those two hearts that bound to love
Not a clue of what may be the ending
In the fluttering flight of a dove.
Not a clue of future secrets and future cries
Throughout future and sleepless nights
For the moment what before them lies
Is laughter, and joy, and delights.
Whatever the ending may be
Of this crumpled rose and bells singings
A fool's the one who does not see
The tenderest of beginnings.
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This was written on one evening
Reading Dorothy Parker's poetry
One verse was due in the morning
But, awaking, I was rather sleepy.
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Hum… (looks shyly) sooo… what do you think? Should I re-write it? Or leave I as it is? No flames please, I wish for critics. Constructive ones, that could help me improve my writing in the future.