Previously on Secret Story:
We discovered the nominees for next week: Mark, Lucy, Troian, Chris, Harry and Brendan. The pressure got the best of some of them. "You are a fucking selfish bitch!", "You are a fucking hypocrite!" "I don't want to hear anything!". The voice gave the people that are on top of their social game a reward. "you'll have an access to the showroom of secrets" which then leaded them to put 2 housemates in danger. "Julian and Troian". Today what screams elimination, also screams the voice's dilemmas. This week, we're having a double eviction , we're going to see who you are going to send home and who the housemates are going to send home. How are the housemates going to cope with all of that? Let's find out!
Day 5:
Today, the voice didn't have to put blasting music on to wake the housemates, everyone was up by 9. As always on the elimination day, the nominees were expected to dress up formally in case they leave the house tonight and the others… well, they needed to not look like they just woke up. The nominees were trying to stay calm and look the best, and maybe try to sway in a couple of votes.
Attention everyone, can everyone gather in the lounging area.
This week's theme is truth. Today all of you will be telling the truth and only the truth. Nominees, in case you will be leaving the house today, some housemates insisted on leaving some messages. Videos start playing on the screen.
Heather: Amber, if you go home tonight, I want you to know that, even though we've only known each other for a week but I feel like we've known each other for years now. You're someone I want to go until the end with. I really hope you stay this week because I really don't see myself in the game without you. Thank you for being here, when my hormones were everywhere, when I needed to talk to someone. Thank you for being a great friend. I love you.
Chord: Darren, man, you've been nothing but a great bro' to me. I really hope that everyone in here sees how great you are. When I first came into the house and saw you goofing around, I knew that you were a great guy and we were gonna get along. You've been nothing but encouraging and supportive. You're like my big bro in this house. I'll miss you so much if you go home Friday.
Naya: Ian, I know I'm partly the reason why you are up there but I'm here to tell you that you won't be going home Friday. I'd like to tell you how much we all appreciate you as a person, even though we don't always tell you this but you are one of the nicest and sweetest guys that we could ever meet. You bring so much positiveness to the house. This is from all of us, we all love you!
Chris: Dianna, I feel like there is more to you than what you show us. You are not the Dianna we see here, and I don't know if anyone else can see it but I can. It feels like you're hiding behind this wall, you are trying to not attach yourself to anyone or not show any emotions in this game. That is why not everyone can appreciate you as person. Dianna, if you're still here next week, open up a little bit, because this is maybe a game but this is also a once in a lifetime opportunity. And we need to live it and enjoy it!
Keegan: Harry, I'd love to see you for another week because I feel like you have more to offer to this game. If you make it this Friday, I really hope to start a new friendship with you, you seem like a nice and cool guy. Keep going strong bro'!
Tyler: Mark, if you go home Friday, I just want to let you know that I don't know how you are outside this house but as far as I know from this house, you really have to be less arrogant and work on your social game. I wish you good luck on the outside or inside. Either way, I'm sure that you have more to offer.
The nominees are on the verge of tears… Well most of them…
It's the voice again, some of the fans have questions for you. These "fans" are maybe a little more than fans, you may know them a bit more than you think.
The name "Lucy" appears on screen. A boy comes on screen smiling.
Troian: That's my brother!
Nicholas: Hello, I'm Nicholas, Troian's brother. I have a question for Lucy, would you ever be able to forgive Troian?
Lucy: I don't know… I really trusted her a lot, but she betrayed me. I really don't forgive easily, it's my nature. I'm gonna try, because I really wanna make the most of this game. I want to enjoy this game with everyone here, including her.
The name "Naya" flashes on the screen. A girl comes on screen.
Naya: That's my sister.
Nickayla: Hello everyone, it's Nickayla, Naya's sister. Naya, why are you hiding your true self to the others? I feel like, they need to know who you are.
Naya: Uhmm… (She steps forward into the middle of the room) I have something to tell you guys. This really feels like the first time, gosh. I haven't been lying to you guys, but I feel like I've left out a big part in my life out. When I was a teen, I was really mean to people, I hated the world for no reason, I hated everyone, I hated everything… But really, I hated myself. I was trying to fight my feelings, to hide them, but one day I decided, I'm sick of fighting with myself and decided to do the same thing I'm doing right now, to my parents. I'm… I like girls. When I accepted who I was, the world seemed to be a much better place. I started to be a much better person, I wished that I could have done it earlier. I really hope this doesn't change anything between all of us… I can't believe, I'm doing this on national tv.
Everyone started to clap and stood up. Shay and Chris went to hug her.
Keegan: If this changes anything to anyone, then fuck you.
The name "Amber, Lucy" flashes. A lady comes on screen.
Mary: Hello, I'm Mary from Chicago. Lucy and Amber, I wanted to know what your objects mean, why are they so important to you? And you girls are doing a great job, continue!
Lucy: Shall I start?
Amber: Sure, go ahead!
Lucy: Thank you, Mary. The guitar is actually my first ever guitar and basically a big part of my life. When I'm feeling down or just need a push, the guitar helps me. As cheesy as it sounds, it's a piece of me. To you, Amber.
Amber: The locket I got, is the first ever thing that my mum gave me and the last thing she gave me. That's the only thing I have of her. When I was a kid, she got me this locket with a picture of me and her. Now, she's no longer with me. I know I let down my team for jumping for this but I hope you guys understand that it was important for me.
These are the only questions, I have for you. We're now going to proceed for the votes for the nominees. As I call you one by one, please make your way to the confession room and vote for the nominee, you want gone. And as always, the nominees can't vote unless it's a tie.
[I'm using the typewriter tool (classtools) for the characters that I'm not sure who they want gone.]
Brendan: Dianna
Naya: Mark
Lucy: Mark
Sasha: Dianna
Shay: Harry
Julian: Harry
Chord: Mark
Heather: Harry
Ashley: Dianna
Keegan: Mark
Tyler: Mark
Jenna: Mark
Troian: Harry
Chris: Dianna
This is the voice again, we counted the votes and we had a tie between two of you. You're going to vote again, but this time you only have the choice between Harry and Dianna. Everyone apart from of course Harry and Dianna is going to vote. The rules are the same, as I call you please make your way the confession room and vote for the nominee, you want gone.
[I'm using the typewriter tool (classtools) for the characters that I'm not sure who they want gone.]
Naya: Harry
Chris: Dianna
Lucy: Harry
Chord: Dianna
Darren: Harry
Heather: Harry
Mark: Harry
Brendan: Dianna
Jenna: Dianna
Amber: Harry
Ian: Harry
Julian: Harry
Tyler: Dianna
Shay: Harry
Sasha: Dianna
Keegan: Dianna
Troian: Harry
Ashley: Dianna
Okay, the votes are in, can the nominees say their quick goodbyes to the housemates and make their way to the SAS room, please.
Everyone said their goodbyes and made their way to the SAS room.
SAS room:
Dear nominees, today two of you will not be going back the house. One of you is because the public didn't appreciate you and the other because the housemates didn't appreciate you. This is the end of the adventure for 2 of you. First of all I'd like to reveal the percentage of the votes you got: 19%, 6%, 47%, 11%, 6%, and 11%. As you can see the public didn't like one of you the most and they made it clear. That person will be going home today. Now let's take a peek on the votes by the housemates. In the first round we had, 8-4-4-0-0-0. The person with 8 votes is the same as the one with 47%, so we had to take the second person but it was a tie. We had a tie breaking round between Harry and Dianna. And we had a ratio of 8-10, it was really close but as you've guessed one of you will be home. The first person that will be heading back to the house is a girl. And it is Amber. Amber, you're safe this week, please join immediately the others. Amber hugged everyone and made her way back to the house after saying thank you to the audience. The next person who will be joining the others is someone who's name starts with a D. And it is of course Darren, please go back to the house. Darren hugged everyone and made his way back to the house (Hugged a bit more Ian than the others). The next person to go back into the house is the lovely Dianna! Dianna hugged the others, thanked everyone on the verge of tears and made her way happily to the house. Unfortunately, with Dianna back in the house, Harry, you know what that means. He nodded. Mark and Ian, today one of you will be going home. But the one going back to the house is the shorter one, Ian. Ian gave a quick hug to both of them and went quickly back to the house. Harry and Mark, you're the ones evicted from this house for week 1. Please take the door on the right and join our lovely Zoe on stage.
On stage:
Mark and Harry made their way to the stage as the crowd cheered. They took the seats in front of Zoe.
Zoe: Hello guys, first of all congrats to one week in the house! Unfortunately, today you're the first houseguests out, why do you think you're the one being evicted today?
Mark: Mine was really simple, I wasn't being hypocrite. I was myself, if I didn't like anyone or anything, I said it straight to them. In that house, you can't be yourself, you have to be this perfect cutout, and I'm telling you 75% of them are just hiding their true selves for the camera. Their true faces are gonna show soon. They can't put up an act for long.
Zoe: And you Harry?
Harry: I don't even know. I think I was the least liked out of all of them. I'm pretty sure that there are Alliances going on and I wasn't really part of anything. I could see that clearly when the voice made us choose who we liked and who we didn't, I was in the least liked. I knew that I was in danger.
Zoe: So, who do you think is "running" the game?
Mark: The Keegan and Naya crew definitely!
Harry: Yeah agreed!
Zoe: Why do you guys think that?
Harry: I think they've got some kind of alliance going like a final 4 or 5.
Mark: Yeah, for sure, I think, it's Keegan, Naya, Shay, Ashley… Lucy and maybe Troian before she nominated Lucy.
Zoe: Okay, we're going to do quick game of superlatives. Who do you think is the nicest in real life?
Harry: Amber
Mark: Shay
Zoe: The dorkiest?
Mark: Brendan
Harry: Same, Brendan.
Zoe: The most annoying?
Harry: Mark
Mark: Fair enough, I'll say Chris.
Zoe: You said people are hiding their true self. Who's hiding the most?
Mark: Keegan, maybe.
Harry: I was gonna say Naya, but Keegan is as well.
Mark: Yeah, they're both shady.
Zoe: Who's secret, you really want to know?
Mark: Naya's
Harry: Same, Naya's.
Zoe: Okay, we have 3 options for you and one of them is the correct one. The first one, I am in here with my girlfriend, Shay. The second one, I am the first mystery of the house. The third one is, I am master of nominations. So which one do you think it is?
Harry: I am in here with my girlfriend, Shay.
Zoe: Why?
Harry: Because she came out to the house today and her and Shay are really close.
Zoe: Okay, you Mark?
Mark: I'm torn between I'm master of nominations and the girlfriend with shay one.
Zoe: Okay why?
Mark: The girlfriend one's reason is basically the same as Harry's. And the master of nominations could be why she's always acting shady.
Zoe: Let's take a look, if you're right.
A video starts playing on the screen,
Naya and Shay, you will be closer to each other than anyone else in the game, I've decided to give you a secret, you are now masters of nominations, and you can choose one person to nominate along with the other two that the contestants vote for. But be careful this power can quickly be your weakness; the contestants are not stupid and will start to ask questions about the mysterious nominations.
Shay: So it's between Dianna and Mark. Soo… Dianna was on the secrets the first day in, she's here to play. Mark is just a douchebag.
Naya: If we nominate Dianna, people are going to wonder who didn't want Dianna in the game, enough to nominate her. So, I'll be in that list and maybe you'll be as well. But at the same time she's a threat and if we could get her out, then we would have taken down, possibly our biggest threat.
Shay: Shall we go with Mark?
Naya: Yeah, I think we should go with Mark as well
Mark: What?! Shay's in on it as well?
Harry: Oh my god, well done to them! This is an awesome secret.
Mark: I've gained respect for them, even though they nominated me, I really hope they can keep the secret a lot longer.
Zoe: This is it for today's show. We'll see you again on Monday for an all new episode of Secret Story. Until then, goodbye!
Author's note:
This is it guys, Harry and Mark are evicted. Is it a big surprise? I don't think so ^^ Anyways, I really hope you liked this chapter. Tell me what you like, and what you don't.
I'd like to tell you that school is starting soon, on the 3rd of September for me. In France, the school days are normally, starting at 8am and finishing at 5pm. So, I really won't have much me & internet time, which sucks. I'm starting Lycée, which is the equivalent of High school, I think, so my parents, being really strict, are putting pressure on me to do well *sighs*. Anyways, I'm telling you all of this to say that that, the chapters will take a lot more time, and I'm sorry. I'll try to publish them as fast as possible. I'm estimation a week for each chapter, but I may do 2 days merged into one chapter.
I got really contradicting reviews, and it made me laugh ^^^
Guest 1: Poor Lucy. I don't care Troian only did it because she likes KeeGan, she was really a bitch. But I'm happy with Sasha's and Keegs reaction.
First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing. I agree that she was a bitch but love can make you blind ^^ I loved Sasha's and Keegan's reaction as well, I really think that's how they would have reacted if this was a real life show.
Guest 2 : My favorite characters are Naya, Keegan, and Troian! I also like Ashley and Shay. I don't like Lucy much, I mean I know what Troian did wasn't friend like, but it's a competition, stop overreacting. Also, you should include Ian, Chris and Darren a little more! :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing. It is a competition, you are right. The housemates will show their true faces soon (like what Mark said) and the others need to be prepared. Maybe Lucy wasn't prepared for the game. Most of them aren't prepared. But as the game goes on, they'll be prepared. I know I should include them a bit more, and I will, I promise!
Gleek: I really like this story, it's original. The thing that bothers me is that it seems like you don't really give any importance to the glee characters, you're more focused on the pll ones. I'd love to see more of the glee characters and them having story lines. Otherwise, keep up the good work :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I know I'm neglecting some characters but I can assure you that it's not only glee characters. Just looking at my list, I can tell you that Chris, Ashley, Amber, Darren, Sasha, Brendan, Ian, Jenna, Heather, Chord and Tyler don't have a storyline right now, and 5 of them are glee characters and the other 5 are PLL characters. I know that I need to give them storylines, and I have ideas for storylines, for every characters. This is a "live" story, so I can't really write chapters in advance because I don't know who's staying and who's not. Anyways, the storylines are coming! Next week, you'll see more storylines forming.
What do you think of the characters? Who's your favourite and least favourite?
Can you guys give me a feedback for me? Let me explain, Do you like my writing style? What do you like? What do you like? Do you like how I write? What do I need to improve on?
Thank you, for everything guys. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. See you soon, with a brand new chapter! Until then, Stay awesome.