Ok, i'm liking the feedback and i think this is my longest chapter yet :D. Anyway im gonig to start responding to reviews here so yall know im listening

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So here is Chapter 6 (5) and i'm sure i will either get more feedback like Lathan Lover's or get shot o-e
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Chapter 5

Visitors

Kiba opened his eyes from his black vision only to be cloaked in more darkness. All that was visible was a light faintly shining in the distance. Where am I? He asked himself as he turned his body to look for something or someone who could explain just where he was. But the only sense of other presence was from the light. Kiba tried to focus on said light. Is…is it getting bigger? The light continued to grow until is shrouded most of Kiba's vision. No…it's getting closer! He thought as he heard a familiar sound…a car engine. That car, it was coming for him again. He tried waving his hands to motion for the car to stop, but his hands felt like they were in handcuffs. Stop! He tried to scream but no sound came out. The car was getting closer, the light vanished into focus of two light spots, the headlights. Stop the car! Please! He screamed at the top of his lungs…still no sound. He could see the wheels spinning. He tried to jump away but his feet were frozen to the ground. The car was too close. He could see the driver's silhouette. …Sasuke… CRASH!

Kiba woke in a deep sweat, breathing heavily. He glanced wildly around the room to see he was back in his dorm. He sat up, now half-covered by the sheet. He still had his clothes on from yesterday and Naruto was still sound asleep. HE felt a small pain in his chest hand grabbed the area the clothes covered. HE took some deep breathes and soon the pain diminished. He sighed and just kept staring at the sheet on the bed until a knock came from the door.

"Naruto? Kiba? It's me Sakura open up!" He flinched at the high-pitched squeak that was his new friend's yelling voice. HE hesitantly got up and slumped over to the door and removed the chain, undid the deadlock and opened the door halfway until Sakura pushed it in the rest of the way knocking Kiba down in the process.

"Ow!" he yelped as he fell on his ass. "Could you have at least waited until the door was all the way open? And why are you screaming? Are you trying to wake up everyone?" HE said with a smart ass attitude.

"Ok first, don't chu take that tone with me boy." She said rolling her neck. "Second I've been knocking for ten minutes so I got worried, and third everybody's already awake, its 5 in the afternoon." She pointed to Naruto's digital clock that flashed 5:00.

"Oh…" he mumbled defeated. He stood up holding his head and walked over to Naruto. He started to shake him. "Hey blondie, get up, its 5:00"…No response. "Yo, Naruto wake up." Nothing. Kiba flicked Naruto's forehead.

"Mmm…Kiba…" Naruto started to drool and stiffen. Kiba just flinched. He grinned and walked over to the bathroom and returned with a glass of water. His grin turned into a twisted smile as he pour the freezing liquid on Naruto's erection. "Uhn…huh? Cold…cold, Cold COLD COLD!" He screamed as he shot up and hit the wall behind him with his head. "The Hell Kiba?!" he said rubbing the back of his head while Sakura went to opposite bed and took a pillow over her face to muffle her laughing fit.

"Why don't' you tell me? You mumbled my name, started to drool and got a hard on." He said pointed to Naruto's now deflated friend.

"I can't help it, your sexy." Kiba just blushed while Sakura started laughing again. Naruto finally noticed she was in the room. "Oh hey Sakura." He noticed something missing from this picture. "Where's Shikamaru?" Sakura removed the pillow to answer his question.

"Shika's calling friends to meet us for our night out. We always go out on Saturdays."

"I thought it was just going to be the four of us." Kiba said tilting his head. Cute! Sakura squealed in her head.

"Sounds fun." Naruto said with his contagious smile. He didn't even know about the idea and still went along with it. Kiba was caught in Naruto's smile and put on his own.

"Who's all coming?" Kiba asked.

"Well, Neji and his cousin Hinata, Shino, Lee, and Tenten. All friends of me and Shika."

"Well I met Hinata before." Kiba said.

"And she tried to pick you up." Naruto glared at his brunette.

"Well so did I." Sakura giggled until she was caught in Naruto's glare. "Hun, you shouldn't be so possessive." She giggled again.

"Well she knows we're together right Naru-chan?" Kiba asked trying to lighten the mood. Naruto's glare ended as Kiba's innocent look came up. Damn his puppy dog eyes.

"Well anyway, you two can bring whoever you want." When Sakura finished Naruto's cell phone went off on the desk nearby. HE picked it up without looking at the caller ID and answered it.

"Hello? … Oh hey bro… Your what? … Why? …uh-huh…no need for name calling…shut u. When?...Now?...Ya..Fine, ill meet you outside." Naruto hung up his cell phone and sighed deeply.

"What's goin' on?" Kiba asked as Naruto got up from the bed.

"That was my big brother, Kyuubi, he just enrolled in this school and got assigned to our room, he wants me to show him around."

"That doesn't sound so bad." Kiba just shrugged.

"You haven't met him, he'll be nice at first, but when you get to know him he'll be a real pain." Naruto sighed again. "HE's outside right now so I need to go." He walked towards the door and opened it to catch Tsunade in mid knock.

"Oh, hello. I just came by to tell you that you two will have a new roommate." She said smiling.

"Ya my brother right?" Naruto said smiling back.

"Oh…well than make it two new roommates and I believe its Kiba elder sister Hana." Kiba just gawked at her in disbelief. That means four people and three beds…looks like Kiby and I will have to share. Naruto thought with his evil grin.

"Great, that's just great." Kiba face palmed himself. "Hana's like a mini mother…annoying, invasive, and easily angered.

"Well Kyuubi's just as bad, bossy, aggressive, and a huge ass." Naruto replied chuckling.

"Ahem…" two voices came from the hallway beside Tsunade who stepped back and walked away whistling. She was replaced by a woman a little taller than Kiba was. She was definitely older. She had the same tribal tattoos under her eyes with the same color hair as Kiba. She wore a cream cut-off sweatshirt with same colored sweatpants and shoes. Next to her appeared to be and older version of Naruto. Same color hair and hairstyle only with tints of red at the end of each spike. He even had the whiskers Naruto had. He wore a red sweatshirt and black jeans with black sandals. (Ain't my fashion horrible? =D) Kiba and Naruto bothed gulped and ran to the back window and started fighting over who got to jump out first. Sakura just went as far to wall away from tow as possible and silently laughed to herself. The window flew open and just as the two were about to jump and hand grabbed their shirt collars.

"Annoying huh?" Hana said pulling Kiba's head so his ear was next to her moth so he couldn't ignore her.

"An ass hmm?" Kyuubi said pinning Naruto to the wall. "Well, Naru-chan, you haven't seen anything yer."

"Hana, hehey, what's up? How's it going." Kiba's voice cracked.

"Kyu *gulp* I thought you were outside." Naruto tried to avoid eye contact with his brothers blood red eyes.

"Well the principal saw me and led me up here. But just think, if she didn't I would've missed all the oh so nice things you said about me." Kyuubi was literally growling. He suddenly burst into laughter and let Naruto go. "I guess its only fair though, I've been makin fun of you for years."

"And I'll get you back for such positive words Kibbles." Hana said flashing her canines, which were just as sharp as Kiba's, if not sharper. She released him. "I have to go pick up my schedule." And with that she left the room.

"So who is this?" Kyuubi said eyeing Kiba.

"This is Kiba, my…new boyfriend." Kiba was a little worried why Naruto was just admitting it. If his brother was anything like he mentioned then this wouldn't end well. "So I'd appreciate it if you didn't scare him off like you did in 5th grade."

"Oh come on Naruto, that was an accident." He said slightly annoyed.

"I don't think shoving him down a flight of stairs qualifies as an accident."

"It does if they don't catch me." Kyuubi just snickered. "Well I can see why you picked him, cute face, taller, nice body." Kiba started blushing madly.

"Kyuubi!" Naruto blushed as well and pulled his brother off Kiba.

"Just kiddin', jeez. You know I prefer girls. In fact that other girl who just left was kinda cute."

"Is that so?" Kyuubi turned to see Hana standing at the door looking at him with a weird smile. "Well…your kinda cute too." She said chuckling. Kyuubi just growled lightly at her use of the word cute, he was HOT not CUTE.

"Hey Hana," Kiba interrupted "Me and Naruto were going to a party tonight, Sakura said we could bring anyone we want, so what do you say?"

"Whose Sakura?" she asked confused. Sakura just raised her hand from Kiba and Naruto's bed.

"Us three and a few others were going to a party downtown, you two can come if you want." Sakura said smiling.

"Sounds fun." Hana said smiling.

"Eh…I guess" Kyuubi said reluctantly. He didn't fell too happy about being surrounded by underclassmen but went along with it since Hana did.

"Hey, um…Kyuubi was it? I believe the principal said to meet in her office after we got settled in." Hana said turning around to go into the hallway.

"Oh right." Kyuubi said following.

"Oh here." Sakura stopped them and took out a piece of paper and wrote something down. "This is the address, the party starts in half an hour so we'll just meet you there." Hana smiled and took the paper while Kyuubi just took it without acknowledging Sakura. "Hmph, your brother's rude Naruto." She said after the two had left.

"Well…you get used to it." He replied trying his best smile, and failing miserably at it.

"Anyway you two better get ready cause were leaving in 20 minutes." She walked over to the door. "We'll meet you in the downstairs lobby." She closed the door and Kiba went over to the bagged clothes from the mall. He pulled out a light gray t-shirt and blue jeans then walked into the bathroom. "Ill shower first then you can go how's that sound?" Kiba asked before closing the door.

"Aw…can't we shower together?" Naruto pleaded trying to copy Kiba's puppy dog eyes. Kiba just glared at him and Naruto took the hint. Kiba closed the door. He didn't want to move things too fast and realize all Naruto wanted was sex. When Kiba was done with his shower Naruto took his and they were out the door in 15 minutes. It took them another 3 to get to the lobby where there was Sakura and Shikamaru surrounded by other people.

"There they are." Sakura waved to get the boys attention and the others all turned.

They were rushed by a guy with huge eyebrows that looked like he'd been collecting them for years and glued them to his face. "Greetings, I am Rock Lee." He said holding out his hand. Naruto, a little afraid that if he touched Lee at all his eyebrows would be sucked from his face, shook his hand and Kiba followed.

"My name's Tenten." Said a girl about Naruto's height with her hair in two buns. "This is Neji," She pointed to a man with his hair in one large ponytail who looked like he really didn't care. "don't mind him he has a superiority complex." Neji just grunted. "And this is Shino," she gestured to a guy who hair was similar to Kiba's only black and hid most of his face by his coat and glasses. He looked like he held a grudge against most of the world. "and Sakura told me you already met Hinata." Tenten put her arm around Hinata who just blushed and looked down.

"Yeah, we've met her." Naruto said dryly. Kiba just elbowed him. "Nice to see you again Hinata."

"Y-you too Kiba." She stuttered just like last time. Does she still have that cold? Kiba thought oblivious as usual.

"Well now that meet and greet is over, oh by the way guys I told them all about you," Naruto and Kiba just blushed. "and they're all okay with you two being together…well I don't know about Shino he just grunts." Everybody started laughing and Shino just grunted and turned away. "Let's get going, Tenten can drive. She brought her parents' van." They all left out the front door and piled into the SUV with Kiba and Naruto in the middle, Shino, Neji, and Hinata in the back, Shikamaru, who had temporarily disappeared in the lobby, was sitting on the floor between Kiba and Naruto, Sakura in shotgun and Tenten driving.

The road was piled with traffic, but Tenten was a driving expert who weaved through open spots. They arrived downtown in 5 minutes with everyone hyperventilating.

"Jesus Tenten." Shikamaru said trying to catch his breathe.

"Well I didn't want to be late."

"You obviously didn't want to survive either." Tenten ignored that last comment and pulled into the parking lot to an old warehouse looking place.

"I thought we were going to a party." Kiba said a little confused.

"We are, the party's inside." Sakura said getting out of the car. Naruto opened his side and everybody piled out of that door. There was a big man smoking a cigarette outside the door. He seemed out of zone until Shikamaru walked up to him. They both nodded and the man opened the door. They all walked inside and after the door was closed the music was too loud to hear the engine of an auburn Sedan pull into the parking lot.

There were lights of different colors shining everywhere to the beat of the music that played music from various artists.

"It's like a bar and a club put together." Sakura said pulling Naruto and Kiba's arm to get them to move. "So have fun dance, drink."

"You know were underage Sakura." Kiba said as Naruto was mesmerized by the flashing lights.

" Nobody asks questions here, the bartender is underage too, you don't see anybody complaining do ya?"

"Well then, I guess we could have some fun, how about it Naru-chan?" Kiba said grabbing Naruto's hand snapping him out of his trance.

"Sure, sounds fun. But…do we have to dance? I'm not one for it." Naruto said watching all the people dancing around on an elevated platform.

"Not at all, just do whatever." Sakura winked at them making sure they got the hint. The boys just blushed. Sakura giggled and went up to the platform and began dancing in the crowd.

"Well…I have to go to the bathroom." Kiba noticed the huge "BATHROOMS HERE" sign and began walking towards it. Naruto just walked over to the bartender's table and sat down watching the club goers partying. He turned towards the bartender. He looked like he was seven.

"Welcome, the name's Konohamaru." He said smiling and cleaning a glass with a washcloth. "What'll you be having?"

"Eh, not really thirsty right now I'll let you know when I am." Naruto said smiling. Konohamaru walked away to tend to another customer. Naruto turned around and gasped when all he saw was Sasuke's face close to his. "Sasuke, what're you do-" he was muffled by Sasuke's hand and pulled him away. Naruto started to flail and tried to punch Sasuke but was put in a choke hold. Everybody was so busy partying to notice Naruto dragged into the back of the club. Sasuke released Naruto only to pin him against the wall.

"Sasuke get off of me." Naruto said trying to push Sasuke off but couldn't. Sasuke was just too big. "I'm serious Sasuke let me-" he was cut off by Sasuke's lips on his own. Sasuke's tongue immediately shot into Naruto's mouth exploring every inch. Naruto kept trying to push Sasuke away but failed every time. Sasuke pulled back and grabbed Naruto's neck and started to lightly choke him. Sasuke used his free hand to tie Naruto's hands together with tape. He dragged Naruto into a backroom and threw him on the floor. He locked the door.

"Bite me and you'll regret it." Sasuke said in a monotone yet threatening voice. Naruto eyes widened as Sasuke began unzipping his pants.

"Sasuke, please stop." He pleaded as Sasuke sat on Naruto's chest and plunged himself down Naruto's throat. He began crying, but that only seemed to edge Sasuke on as he began thrusting. Naruto started to gag but Sasuke only went faster. Naruto choked as Sasuke came down his throat. Sasuke finished and pulled away.

"Now that wasn't so bad was it?" Sasuke said smugly.

"Bastard." Was all Naruto got out until Sasuke flipped him over. "No! STOP!" Sasuke just laughed as he positioned himself at Naruto's entrance. Sasuke pressed in lightly until he heard a familiar voice from outside the door.

"Naruto? Where you at?" Kiba's voice came through the door.

"Kiba! Help!" Naruto screamed. Sasuke jumped growling lowly and got up pulling his pants on then ran out the window across from the door. Said door was knocked down by an angry Kiba who noticed Sasuke jump out the window. Kiba was so angry he was about to personally pull Sasuke's head off his body but then realized Naruto on the floor half naked.

"Naruto! What did he do?" Naruto just shook his head and began to cry. Kiba sat next to him and pulled the tape off of Naruto's hands. Naruto then pulled his pants up and hugged Kiba crying even louder.

"Kiba? Did you find him?" Kiba heard Sakura's voice from outside the room.

"In Here!" he yelled. Sakura burst into the room to see Naruto crying his eyes out.

"What happened?" She said wide eyed.

"Sasuke happened…"

K begin shooting me now i seriously wantd to punch myself multiple times just for even thinknig this, but i needed Sasuke to have more a bad rep so if (when) he dies i wont get shot as much. I won't blame anybody for flaming me now but reviews are still approved. Hope yall don't h8 me 4ever lol.