OK another Authors note Sorry, still no reviews

OK another Authors note Sorry, still no reviews! Only 12… Review please!! I'm rewriting the story since it was going waaayyyy too fast. So I'll update as soon as I 1) write another chapter and 2) get 20 reviews only 8 more reviews!! And I'll be putting out a new story soon; I'm calling it numb here's a summary.

NUMB

Edward never came to Forks. Alice and Rosalie are cousins and Bella is their best friend. After graduation they move to NY where Bella meets Mike a childhood friend and marries him. When she gets pregnant Mike turns to drugs & alcohol. One night he beats the crap out of her. Edward and Carlisle are her doctors. Jake is her Best friend. Renee and Charlie are well, Renee and Charlie.

I've got the first chapter.

Olga 