Hi all sorry this isn't a chapter. I decided to give this story up to a friend since he has more time on his hands at the moment then I do. I thank you all for the reviews and support. I am annoyed at people who don't know how to read a whole story and see maybe one chapter if that and say oh this is somebody else's I am going to complain at them.
For those of you who enjoyed this story the person called Jamespotter69 is taking it. doing some rewriting and posting it again. Hope you give him the same loving support you gave me.