The all familiar disclaimer of every fanfiction ever: I, writer of this fanfiction does not own the Neptunia franchise and the characters inside it except for the original characters. Neptunia belongs to Idea Factory.

Author's notes: Heya people, this fanfiction is being rewritten at both this site and my own blog which I will try to post updates (parts) and will update in this site I deem a chapter to be completed.

Italic is as usual for thoughts.

Bold are for attacks (though may be shout out or not)

The prologue (rewrite)

Gameindustri…

Here in this realm resides 4 Console Patron Units or known as CPUs that rule over their nations…

The CPUs mainly reside in Celestia where they oversee their nations from there…

The 4 CPUs are:

CPU Black Heart, who rules over the "Land of Black Regality – Lastation"

CPU White Heart, who rules over the "Land of White Serenity – Lowee"

CPU Green Heart, who rules over the "Land of Green Pastures – Leanbox"

CPU Purple Heart, who rules over the "Land of Purple Progress – Planeptune"

On Celestia, the CPUs fight each other to gain the title of the "True Goddess" and to rule over Gameindustri…

The battle of theirs are known as the Console War by all…

This is the beginning of everything that will be happening from now on…

(third POV)

On a floating island also known as Celestia by the Gameindustri people, there are clashes of weapons sounding as four females charged at one another in a battle royale.

After a clash, they separated from each other and looked at one another.

"Huff, Huff" was what the female with purple hair gasped. This was the CPU known as Purple Heart.

The female in white hair also known as Black Heart spoke up while trying to regain her breath. "You're all so stubborn. Why don't you all give up already?" she taunted the others.

Purple Heart replied," Nonsense! We've been fighting for so long. Why quit now?"

At this sentence, the shorter female with light blue colored hair yelled," That's my line! I won't let any of you take the title of True Goddess!" This was the CPU known as White Heart.

The female with green hair sighed at this point," How much longer do we have to put up this pointless fighting?" And this of course was the last CPU also known as Green Heart.

While rushing at Green Heart with her axe raised, White Heart yelled:" Well then, do us a favor and just die!"

Green Heart parried the attack with her lance/spear (can someone tell me what is it actually?) while trading words with White Heart," My! Such raucous manners! I have matters of destiny to fulfill, unlike you."

The eyes of White Heart turned much more menacing as she glared at her direct opponent," Shut it! I can't stand the way you talk all high and mighty, Thunder Tits!"

Green Heart pondered upon those words for a second and came up with her own reply," Breast are the symbolic of maturity and fertility…qualities of a goddess. With such logic, it can be said that you are the least…fitting." She ended with a smile so smug that enraged White Heart even further.

"The hell's that? All that crap, talkin' out yer butt. I'll kill you!" said the enraged White Heart rushed in with her axe raised as she said each line with more fury than the previous.

Suddenly Black Heart cut in with her weapon striking at both of them, "Got you!"

White Heart and Green Heart barely blocked the attack and stumbled for a few steps.

"Wha-?!" was the only word that Green Heart could come up with.

"Dammit, that was close!" exclaimed White Heart.

The reply that Black Heart gave to both comments were as followed, "Ahahahahaha! It's your fault for idly babbling in the midst of battle!"

"Really, how much longer does this sterile battle have to continue?" sighed Green Heart once she confirmed that there would be no more surprise attacks.

It was at that moment, a new voice coated with an indescribable charm spoke to the three of them, "Well then, why not get rid of one of you?"

The charm in the voice caused the three goddesses to not think deeply about where and what is the source of the voice and treated it normally.

"True… That could be the catalyst of change we've been searching for." Green Heart said so.

Black Heart agreed with the voice as well, "Not a bad idea."

The only goddess that did not hear the voice was confused as she looked on at the three other goddesses agreeing on something.

"What? What are you all talking about?" was the question that Purple Heart asked and yet was ignored.

White Heart continued the line of conversation, "So who's the sad one to be ousted here?"

The charming yet unidentified voice replied with a suggestion, "I suggest… Purple Heart… Neptune."

Green Heart agreed with the voice with an almost emotionless expression, "It would be difficult to get rid of her later since she has the most shares now, so I can agree to that."

White Heart just smiled and said, "Yeah, I'm fine with taking her out first."

Purple Heart was now completely confused and continued to ask, "Who are you three talking to?"

Instead of an answer, all Purple Heart received was the trio's weapons aimed at her.

"Ahahahaha! It's settled then! So sorry, Neptune!" said Black Heart with fake sympathy.

Purple Heart's weapon was held at the ready while shouting another question, "What?! What are you all talking about?!"

At that moment, Black Heart rushed in, but was parried by Purple Heart. Both of their weapons glowed with the power of their shares but Purple Heart's strength was greater and was able to push Black Heart away while she fell back for a few steps.

White Heart rushed in with her axe raised over her head, seeing as Purple Heart hasn't regained her balance yet, "Do us a favor and JUST DIE!"

White Heart chopped down but was swiftly dodged by the purple goddess. White Heart turned to face her opponent again and continued her onslaught followed by Black Heart and Green Heart.

The four of them engaged in aerial combat where Purple Heart dodged, parried and blocked the onslaught of three goddesses. Black Heart regained her stand after being blocked again and signaled the others to rush in at the same time.

As the weapons are about to touch Neptune, all she said was, "I won't lose!" and dodged the attacks by somersaulting upwards causing the three weapons to miss her and clashed into each other. At that very moment, Purple Heart spun around while slashing at the other three CPUs causing them to fall back to the ground.

Immediately after Purple Heart landed, Black Heart rushed in, powering herself with her nation's shares. The both of them cross blades for a brief while when Green Heart jumped and struck at Purple Heart with her spear blade which was coated with her nation's share as well.

Fortunately, Purple Heart backed away from Green Heart's attack and continued dodging her upcoming stabs and slashes whilst parrying the last one with her own share coated blade. Seeing the moment as an opportunity as both weapons are in a lock, White Heart charged in.

"This is the end!" as she swung her axe upwards, completely knocking Purple Heart's weapon into the sky.

Purple Heart jumped back and immediately flew up in hopes of retrieving her weapon but her weapon was knocked away by Green Heart who threw her spear at Purple Heart's weapon. Green Heart revealed a smug smile at Purple Heart's surprised expression when she looked at her.

At the moment Purple Heart landed, Black Heart who had finish buffing herself with skills and her shares rushed in, "I'll finish this. Begone!"

With an attempt to block the strong attack with both arms, Purple Heart was easily knocked out of the floating island and fell towards the continents below Celestia.

As she fell, Purple Heart who has fainted was enveloped in a white light and reverted back to her original form, a young girl with the appearance around 12 or so. She left behind a trail of white sparks as she continued her fall onto the continent below her.

Nighttime,

A girl sitting on the balcony outside her room noticed the shooting star felling from above and wondered, "What's that?". This was because shooting stars are a rare sight in Gameindusti and also the shooting star in question was pure white and seemed a little close to the city. She decided to investigate it as she noticed the destination of the shooting star was in a forest just outside of the town.

Meanwhile in a grass plain near the town as well,

"Harrgh!," was shouted out by a teenager who looks to be around the age of 19 as he delivered a final blow to the monster in front of him.

The monster staggered back and fell to the ground.

The teenage stared at the corpse of the great Fenrir (a boss monster for those that didn't know) as the corpse dispersed into a bunch of data leaving only a couple materials which he picked up with a disc.

The disc showed that some credits were being deposited into his account as he defeated the monster.

The teenager or our protagonist, Ray felt a trail of power in the skies and looked up only to see the shooting star fell into another direction far from him.

A green colored disc which was floating beside him the entire time asked him lazily, "Gonna investigate that in the morning?"

Ray only nodded as he walked back to the town, getting ready to rest while the disc said again, "Not going to wish for something on the shooting star?"

At that question, Ray looked up to see the last trails of the white shooting star. He hurriedly took out a pendant from under his clothes and held it in his hands as he prayed, "I wish I could find a way to resolve the mess I had done 12 years ago."

After his prayer, Ray stood up and went on his way back to Planeptune while the disc floated around him, "Hey, remember to buy me some games as soon as you can, the games you gave me had been completed already."

Little did the people of Gameindustri know, that on this day, the wheels of fate had started to turn again and no one has any idea what the future has in store for them.

Allrighty, that's the end of my new prologue. Sorry for the long hiatus, was in a bit of trouble at school and was busy until recently, I will be updating the parts I have typed at my blog and upload the full chapter here when ready. The site link is at my profile page.

So, what do you guys think? Better or worse than the previous one? Please R&R, thank you!