Listening: The Transformation of Tony

by Leydhawk

Tony goes from playboy to committed partner in six chapters, over the course of several months. Written in a dialogue and audibles only story style. Crosses over with LA and NOLA, with LaSalle and Callen. Very smutty. Uber-slash, with M/M, M/M/M, M/M/M/M/M (!) Be kind, it's a new style, as well as my first Tony-centric story.

6. Chapter 6

A/N Final chapter. Hope you like it.

Chapter Six

Complete

Friday night

(Footsteps, keys clinking)

"I'll drive, Tim."

"Tony, I can -" (Pause) "Wow, when did you perfect the Gibbs stare?"

(Car doors open, close. Car starts, drives)

(Quietly) "The ship is safe, Tim. The case is done. Please breathe..."

"It's no thanks to me. If Bishop hadn't caught that coding -"

"But she did. We're a team, and as a team, we got the job done."

(Snort)

"Case closed, Timmy. Let it go."

"The greenest of green Probies shouldn't have had to clean up after me!"

(Slap)

"Hey!"

"Let. It. Go."

(Sigh) "I'll try, Tony."

(Car stops, doors open, close. Footsteps, keys, door opens, closes. Footsteps. Rustling)

"Mmmmph!"

(Bodies collide, kissing, rustling, fabric tearing)

"Shit, Tim! This shirt cost ninety bucks-"

(Growling, rustling, bed creaking)

"Oh! Oh! Timmy..."

(Drawer opens, slick sounds)

"Gah! God! Oh, Tim! Yes! Fuck me hard! Yeah! Oh, Timmy!"

(Skin slapping, moaning)

"Oh god! Yes, Timmy!"

"I love you, babe! Love you so much..."

"Yes! Yes! Love you, Timmy! Oh! Oh, god!"

"Yes! Squeeze my cock! Ngh! Yes! Use your ass! Work it, Tony! Oh! Fuck! Yes!"

"Aah! Ah! Oh! If you jack me, I'm gonna come fast! Shit! This is so hot... Yes! Oh! Your hands! Oh, Timmy!"

"Yes! Come, Tony! Come hard with my cock in your ass! Oohhh! Ah! Tony! Baby!"

"Aaahh!"

"Yes! Fuck! Yes! Love!" (Grunting)

(Pause, bed creaks, panting)

"Oh, Timmy..."

(Sniffling, breathing hard) "You okay? I didn't hurt you, did I?"

"No way, Tim. You'd never hurt me. C'mon, let's get our work clothes off and get some dinner, then you can do it all over again, but slower..."

"I like the sound of that. And tomorrow we can go shopping and I'll buy you a new shirt."

"No Sears, McCheapskate! I want a label..."

(Laughing) "Watch what you wish for, or I'll make you get a tattoo and label you as mine."

"No need, Timmy." (Kissing) "I'm already yours."

"You are such a romantic. You know I love that, right?"

(Laughing)

Saturday night

(Knock knock)

"Oh shit. Boss!"

"I thought you called him to cancel."

"I forgot..."

"It's okay, babe. It'll be a nice distraction."

"Are you sure? I know you're still freaked out."

(Knock knock)

"Just answer the door, Tony."

(Footsteps, door opens)

"Hey, Boss, uh -"

"C'mon in, Jethro."

"Timmy..."

"It's fine."

(Footsteps, door closes)

"What's up?"

"Nothing, Jethro. It's fine. Good to see you." (Kiss)

"Uh-huh. Yeah. Hey, Tony."

(Kissing) "Hey Boss."

"You sure..."

"Yes. I plan on fucking someone until he begs tonight. You two can flip a goddamn coin. Get your asses into the fucking bedroom."

(Stomping footsteps, door slams)

"Um... I'm just gonna..."

"Go after him, Tony. Let me know if I should leave."

"F-five minutes, Boss..."

(Footsteps, door opens, closes)

"You're not really pulling off the fine thing, Tim."

(Steps, thump, kissing)

"Mmmph!"

(Shuffling, bed creaks)

"Damn, Timmy, I -"

"I'm gonna eat your ass until you come, Tony, then you two can have your coin toss. Jethro! Get in here!"

(Bed creaking, zipper, rustling)

(Door opens, footsteps)

"You can watch or join in however you want."

"Oh! Oh god, Timmy!"

"Turn over."

(Shifting)

"Mmm..."

"Ah! Tim! Wha-wha- oh! N-no dental dam?"

"I wanna tongue fuck you; wanna taste you. Shut up and enjoy it."

(Moaning, gasping, cursing)

"I've never been much for angry sex, guys."

"Your choice, Jethro. You'll be missing out."

"Oh! Oh! Timmy! YES!"

(Gasping, panting. Bed creaks, steps)

(Husky) "C'mon, Jethro. I really wanna eat you, maybe fuck you, and angry or not, after all these months, you know I'll make it good for you." (Kissing)

"Tim..."

"Let me strip you down, anyway, okay? Let me see our silver fox in all his glory..."

(Sigh, kissing, clothing rustling)

"Oh, god, you're gorgeous, Jethro... I want you tonight. Stay?"

"Please, Boss."

"How can I say no to that?"

(Steps, bed creaking)

"Timmy, can I touch you while you rim him? I want my hands all over you."

"That's fine, babe. Roll over, Jethro. I'm not in the mood for foreplay."

"You are so fucking pushy, Tim."

"I think it's a huge turn on!"

"Of course you do, Ton- Ah! Oh, Tim!"

"Mmm..."

"Yeah..." (Breathing heavily) "Oh, Timmy, thank you for letting me watch..."

"Mm-hmm."

"Oohhh... Tim! Fuck! You're amazing! Aaahh! Oh god..."

"Yes! This is so fucking hot without a dam... Jesus, I had no idea you could get your tongue that far..."

"Oh, fuck, yeah! Tim! Jesus, you're so damn good at everything! Yes! God! Ooohh..." (Groan) "Don't stop... C'mon, enough teasing, keep going..."

(Heavy Breathing)

"Timmy..."

"I'm fine."

"Oh! Yes! Tim! Ah... Goddamn I love this... Your tongue is fucking heaven..."

(Whispering) "Timmy, c'mon, it's okay..."

"Damnit, Tony! Just... Just keep, uh, going... It's... I'm fine."

"God! Tony, stop distracting him. Ooohh, Tim, yes!"

(Sniffle, shuddering breath)

"Timmy... You're not fine..."

"Tony, baby-" (Choking)

"Quit cock-blocking, DiNozzo- tongue-blocking, whatever!"

"Damnit, Gibbs!" (Silence) "Timmy, c'mere..."

(Sniffling)

(Shifting, bed creaking)

"What the fuck, Tony?! Tim... Shit. Tim, what's wrong?"

"Nothing. Let's just... Let's keep going."

"No, Timmy -"

"Someone better tell me what the hell is going on!"

"Hey! Don't bully him, Boss."

"Baby, I'm -"

"Boss, tell him it's not his fault."

"...what?"

"The ship. Him missing that coding on the computer."

"This is about the case?!"

"Tony -"

"C'mon. Rule eleven, Tim -"

"Shut up, Gibbs!"

"You better re-think what you just said to me..."

"I need to talk to you."

(Bed creaking, shuffling)

"Baby, don't... Not for me. I'm okay..."

(Kissing) "I'll be right back, Timmy."

(Footsteps, door opening, closing)

"We are not at work, Gibbs. Tim needs me. I think you should go."

"...go? Why?"

"Tim doesn't need fucking right now, he needs loving. He needs comfort."

"He's really upset still about the case?"

"Just go. We'll see you Monday."

"I want... I want to help. Let me help."

"This isn't about sex, Gibbs. We'll let you know when we're ready for that again."

"Tony... This... It's about more than sex for me, too. I... I was gonna surprise you: I brought my test results. I want to be exclusive, with you."

"Gibbs..."

"I care, Tony. Let me show you."

"If I let you back in there, you follow my lead. This is about taking care of Tim."

"Whatever he needs."

(Pause)

"Okay. No more quoting rules. We do anything he needs."

"Anything."

(Door opens, closes. Footsteps, bed creaking)

"No, Timmy, you stay in the middle."

(Sniffling)

"It's okay, Tim. Just relax."

"Let it out, Timmy. It's okay, we're here for you."

(Quiet crying)

"Yeah, Tim. It's okay. It all worked out okay. It's okay."

"Love you, Timmy. So much. I'm right here." (Kissing, sniffling)

"That's it, it's okay. We're here, Tim. Not goin' anywhere. Just hold you, all night, if that's what you want. We're here. It's okay."

"T-Tony?"

"Yes, sweetie, anything you need."

"I...I... I messed up."

"But we caught you. It's not all on you. We're a team. We'll always catch each other."

"Tony's right. I'm not mad, Tim. It's okay. I'm here for you."

"Really? You-you're not mad?"

"Oh, Tim. I'm so proud of you. I'm not mad. I'm here, I'll always be here."

(Sharp breath)

"Boss-Gibbs-"

"Shh, Tony. Yes, Tim. Always. I got tested. I want to be with you."

"Wow..."

"Yeah. I mean it, Tim, Tony. I want you, however you'll have me. Whenever... And always, when you need me."

"Jethro... Would you... Take me? Like this, snuggled between you and Tony... I mean, I know you want Tony, but c-could I be first? Baby? Do you mind? I just..."

"Tim. I want both of you. I really, really do. I said anything, and I mean it."

"Tony?"

"Of course, Timmy. I want to hold you while he slides into you, no condom, committed, real... Oh, yeah, I want that."

(Kissing, shifting, moaning)

"Yes... Tony... You know exactly how to touch me... Oohhh..."

(Kissing, heavy breathing)

"Oh, Tim... Yes, so beautiful... Oh, watching you two kiss is like... I love it..."

"Yes, oh, Jethro... Take me... Wanna feel your skin..."

(Movement, slick sounds)

"Ohhh! God!"

"Yes, Timmy! Oh, let him spoon up tight, let us just hold you, surround you..."

(Whispering) "Tim... Tony... I love you."

"Ohmygod..."

"Jethro... Thank you... Love you, too. Love you... Ngh!"

"Oh! Yes! Oh, I never get to see your face like this, Timmy... Gibbs... Thrust again..."

(Grunting, gasping)

"J-Jethro! Tony!"

"Oh, Tim... Love... Tony... Kiss me..."

"Yes... Oh, yes... Seeing you kiss each other... Feeling you both wrapped around me... Yes... Tony... Jethro... Ah! God!"

(Crying)

"Just feel us, Timmy. We're right here with you. Let it all go, sweetie. Let us just love you..."

"Oh! Ohhh... Yes..." (Sob) "Yes! Oh, love, my loves... My Jethro... My Tony... Yes!"

"God, Tim, I could do this all night... So perfect... You're here, and Tony... My boys... Love you. Really, really love you..."

(Whispering) "I can't believe he's saying the words, Timmy. It's so..."

"Ngh! Yeah! Oh, profound, baby. Thank you, Jethro... Oh! For letting us in... For letting us love you..."

"Timmy... Let me jack us off together... Please? I've gotta... I've gotta be closer to you... Gibbs, can I hold your ass? I wanna feel you thrusting into my Timmy..."

"Yes! God! My two loves, sharing me, holding me! Yes! Oh! Yes!"

"Mmm... So good, boys... So right."

"Yes... Oh! Oh! T-Tony! Your cock, all slick and hot! Oh! Yes! Stroke us... Tighter! Yes! Oh, Jethro, harder! More! More!"

"Tim! Ah! Fuck! Yes!"

(Panting) "Timmy!"

"Oh! Ah! I'm gonna... Gonna fly apart... Gonna explode..."

"We've got you, Tim. You're..." (Groan) "You're safe. You're -fuck!- you're here, we won't let go... Oh, Tim! Fuck!"

"Tony! Tony! Baby!"

"Yes! Timmy! Love!"

"Jethro! Ah! Gonn-Gonna... Oh! Aaahh... Oh! Yes! Please! Ah!"

"Let go and fly, my beautiful love..."

"Come with me, Timmy! I'm -oh- I'm -ahhh- yes! Coming! Timmy! Gibbs! YES!"

"AAAHHHH!"

(Grunting) "Yes! Tim! Tony!"

(Shuddering sobs)

"Ohhh... Timmy... It's okay... You're okay... Love you, sweetheart... My Timmy..."

"Timothy McGee, I love you. Thank you, both."

(Calming) "T-tell Tony, too..."

"Tony... I love you. Thank you."

"Oh, my guys... This... It's so perfect..."

"Um, except for the come all over us."

(Laughing) "No, baby, even that's perfect. It's both of us. It's all of us. Always."

(Kissing) "Always, boys."

"But that movie sucked..."

(Slap)

"Hey!"

(Joyful laughter)

~~~NCIS~~~

A/N This style was so much fun to write! Just a ball. I chose the title 'Listening' with the thought of other stories with dialogue and audibles only. Different 'verses, but all this style. What do you think?

Thanks again to my wonderful friend and Beta, FlyingPiglet. This would never have become a full fledged story without you. And Toni, your encouragement was priceless.

Coming soon, another story in the Red Shoes 'verse, titled 'When Does Happily Ever After Start'. Stay tuned...