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What if... Hollyleaf lived (TLH) Crowfeather died on da journey (NOOOO) 3


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What if...Hollyleaf Lived

I slumped to the ground and let my blood wash over me The pain was too much.

"HOLLYLEAF"Jayfeather screeched and ran to my side.

"Great Starclan" Lionblaze yowled rushing up to me. Fallen Leaves was there in a flash to.

"Hollyleaf just hold on everything will be okay" Jayfeather meowed.

"N-No it's not I'll die and go to DarkForest" I whisper trying to hold back tears . Everything is blurry. Fallen Leaves licks my head trying to calm me down but I only feel worse. I'll have to leave him.

"HOLLYLEAF" Squirrelflight and Leafpool scream coming to me. Blood blinds my vision. I look up to see Brambleclaw and Crowfeather above me and everything goes black.

I wake up feeling dizzy and sore.

"JAYFEATHER SHES AWAKE" I turn toward the sound but turning makes me hurt worse. Brairlight drags herself over to me.

"Hollyleaf oh thank Starclan you where asleep for a half-moon we thought you were dead" Jayfeather explains. I nod feeling to sick, hurt and hungry to talk. I hear a meow and turn to the sound and find Fallen Leaves curled up sleeping. I smile he always talks in his sleep.

"He refused to leave you" Brairlight explains as she grabs some herbs from Jayfeather.

"I'll tell the others your alive and get you a mouse" Jayfeather meows happily and he jumps out of the medicine den.

"That tom refused to smile while you were gone" Briarlight whispers smiling. "I'm glad your alive Hollyleaf"

I purr in reply and rest my head on my paws. I have never felt so happy to be alive

Moons Later

I lay down in Thunderclan camp Fallen Leaves sits beside me watching a black and white tom kit pounce on a leaf. That's Thunderkit. The Orange and black she kit chases after an Orange she kit with white patches. Echokit and Petalkit. The Black, Orange and White tom is Tunnelkit. These are our kits. Thunderkit bounds up to me.

"Mom can we go hunting I want to show Thunderclan that I am ready to be leader." He meows dropping into a hunting crouch.

"HEY you can't be leader cause I will be leader" Ecokit snaps tackling him.

"Dad can I go get herbs for Briarlight and Jayfeather" Petalkit asks calmly Fallen Leaves licks her on the head.

"Very smart but no, you four can't leave camp unless your mother and I come with you" Fallen Leaves meows.

"Hey I never asked to leave camp" Tunnelkit complains.

"Your no fun then" Echokit grumbles.

"YES I AM" Tunnelkit bounds toward a frightened Echokit. I sigh, if I had died at the great battle then I would never had given birth to my four kits. Fallen Leaves presses his nose to my ear.

"I'm glad you lived to" he purrs.


What If...Crowfeather died on the Great Journey

I walk on the cold, frosty snow and ice. These Mountains are deadly. I carefully place my paws on the snow.

"It's steep up ahead everyone be very careful" Firestar yowls. His voice is carried on the wind. I run up pushing my way to the front of the group.

"We're so high up shouldn't we help the queens down" I ask Firestar.

"All queen come to the front we will help you down" Firestar calls. The queens quickly rush forward their kits dangling from their mouths. "Crowpaw can you take a kit from one of the queens?"I silenly obey Firestar and take a kit from a weary looking queen.

"I'll take good care of him I promise" I meow. I go down the slope carefully. I try not to let the kit touch the ground. Once I reach the bottom I set the tiny onto the ground. I lick my sore paws. Suddenly the air is filled with a screech. Firestar stops on the slope and the Queen ducks look up.

"EVERYONE HIDE" Tawnypelt screech's. A giant eagle swoops down flying toward the kit.

"MY KIT" wails the queen. Firestar takes off running at full speed. He will never make it. I pounce onto the Eagles talons as it grabs the screaming kit. The Eagle drop the kit and grabs me instead. Firestar lunges at the Eagle but the Eagle flies higher. I look down. Fox Dung now I'm going to die. But I'll see Feathertail. I bite the Eagles leg and it howls in pain and drops me. descending toward the ground I go. Good bye Leafpool I will always love you. Good bye clans that I love. The jagged rocks await me bellow. The moment I touch the ground pain seers through my body and everything goes black. The last thing I see is Leafpool. (The Eagle only flew up so he landed where he started)


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