I have written another chapter for this but quite reluctant to post after receiving this message:
Make up your mind! First you say you are done writing and aren't going to finish, then you write another chapter? And your reason is you didn't get enough attention for this story? Maybe not everyone likes your work, ever thought of that? Or are you that self obsessed and think you're this genius writer that everybody loves and so one story suddenly doesn't get many readers and that's it you're not happy and go all dramatic and stop writing? How pathetic. I hate this story to be perfectly honest, you've portrayed Ethan in a way that he'd never be seen as, hitting Cal and disrupting his mother's funeral? Do you actually watch casualty because if you did you'd know that this is completely out of character for Ethan and so so wrong of you to portray him like this.
The next thing I want to say is how dare of you to threaten to report waterlooroadfan99 for their story save me! That is a great story, much better than this rubbish, and is in no way portraying the theme of the self harm and eating disorders in the wrong way. If you read their note you'd see that they have been through what they are writing about, and have a personal experience that they are incorporating into their work.
You accuse of them of not having done the right research into those topics when they didn't need to due to their own experiences and go all high and mighty and act like this judge of their work. Who are you to say their work isn't right and is 'totally wrong' and then to say you're sorry and don't want to cause trouble, when you are and when nobody else has a problem with their story, and then you have the audacity to call them sweetheart!
You also said you weren't going to read anymore of the story, then you go and read chapter three and leave another disgusting review about how Saint Jinxy13112 doesn't think their story is appropriate and how Saint Jinxy13112 has to do something about it. You're just jealous that waterlooroadfan99 can write better than you can and they have more people who like their work than you. Honestly, get over yourself and leave them alone. Maybe if you spent more time trying to write better then reading other people's fantastic work and becoming jealous, then your stories wouldn't suck so much and be as bad as they are.
Seriously, telling waterlooroadfan99 that the story maybe shouldn't be on here at all is a nice try to get them to take it down, maybe a way to get readers to view your work instead? but if people have enough sense they'll support waterlooroadfan99 and try and help them save their story from the likes of you.
Smish123 had the decency to apologise and take back their last review for waterlooroadfan99's story save me when they read the a/n at the beginning of chapter three. Obviously they are a nice person and know how to be humble and admit their wrongdoings. You could learn something from them.
I am really disgusted with you and will be waiting to see an apology be made to waterlooroadfan99 via their story save me, so everyone can see you admit you were wrong and apologise for being such a horrible and jealous person.
Now for a start whoever sent this was so big and strong that they did it under guest so I don't know who they are. Now for one, I voiced an opinion on a fic that i didn't 100% believe was appropriate, it is a free country and suggested maybe rating it M. As someone who has had a lot of experience, personally and with people I know, I know that the way that the subject is highlighted in said story could cause problems for people who may read, especially the younger ones. It was my opinion agree disagree whatever you will we are own entitled to our own views. Yes I could have worded things better but still my point still stands. As for suggesting research for this kind of thing, experience of mental health issues and self harming will obviously give you a better idea of what to write but at the same time there are a lot more types of self harm, everyone is different and highlighting one aspect can be very offending to some people.
Now for the case of this fic. I stopped as the original idea of asking people to give suggestions wasn't working out which was annoying and quite frustrating since I had so many different suggestions for whole fics but when it came to this I was practically ignored but yet got plenty followers and favorites. So I stopped, it wasn't working and I have a lot to do. Im at uni and working at the same time, thats a lot of work. I wasn't going to waste time. I then got a message asking me to continue so I did, why not? I had a spare hour or so so I did it. Then I got this response. I want to make this next point very clear, I WRITE FOR FUN, NOT ATTENTION! I do not enjoy being center of attention, of course I like reviews, who doesn't? But I like them to tell me people are enjoying and what I can do to improve, not to boost my ego.
I am out this evening but I plan to upload the next chapter either tonight or tomorrow, it won't be great but I am just trying to continue. If you've read this far thank you. I just wanted to let you guys know what is going on behind the scenes.
