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Sonya-White-Angel I dedicate this chapter to you. (deep bow) if you think its been suspenseful in these chappy's wait till the next couple, oohh, you is gonna love it! Arigato SWA-sama... (again deep bow)
Youko chappy 6
Kurama walked into the Soul 'room' and had to shut his eyes to the light.
Kurama's POV
'The light blinded me at first, it's incredibly silver aura flared through my very core it seemed. It was the light of souls, souls that were waiting for something. But after being here awhile, they lose everything, their memory, their thoughts, themselves. Never to retrieve it. But why would Mayumi be here? Why is she waiting? Is she waiting for m-…'
Regular POV
Kurama's thoughts were cut short as finally the light died down and he opened his eyes. He could make out hundreds of souls, and to find just one was beginning to look slightly difficult. (though not to an ex-thief ) His scanned all that he could see quickly to get an idea of what he was walking into. The place was incredible! It was like Spirit World, the final resting place of souls, except it wasn't.
He walked forward searching for her face, a hint of where she was, an inkling! But he kept walking past faces that stared at him as he passed. Kurama was chilled suddenly, by so many blank, non-seeing eyes. But his heart was warmed when he saw a familiar shape ahead of him, he ran up to them and grabbed their shoulder, whirling them around. It wasn't her. Silver eyes stared back into his, almost pleading. 'This one hasn't lost everything yet.' Kurama thought. But a movement over their shoulder caught his attention.
A glowing figure in white was walking towards him. "Mayumi" he whispered. He ran towards you but stopped short as she looked at him with confusion. "Mayumi" He said tentatively. Mayumi tilted herr head to one side at him. "No. It hasn't been long enough!" He cried out. Botan appeared next to him. "Kurama, your hour is up."
"No, Botan it can't be. I just got to her, why can't she remember me? It hasn't been that long has it?"
"It's been two days in human time, a little over an hour in Spirit Time, look at your hands." Kurama looked down at his hands, they were rapidly disappearing!
His eyes widened as you looked on curiously. 'Something is… so familiar… I… can't remember…' Mayumi thought, struggling. 'Somethings-' "-not right!" She finished out loud. Kurama and Botan looked at her astonished. "What did you just say?" He asked Mayumi. "You… look familiar…" She said slowly and hesitantly. Kurama's eyes filled with tears as did Botan's as Kurama grabbed her in a hug. It was Mayumi's turn for a look of shock.
flashback
"BAM!" Searing pain of something ripping through a body as strong arms reached out. A name being called, who was that? A body shifted and watching as silver hair steadily becoming red, silver eyes to green, and a name popped into her head- Kurama. Followed by words that he spoke, she couldn't understand… Finally she told him to be quite, and whispered something. 'What did I say?' She thought, she was no longer in her body! She were leaving. Being pulled back to the present, but she saw one last thing, a silver tear.
Present
"Was that really me? Who am I?" Wondered Mayumi.
"KURAMA! We have to go, NOW!" Botan yelled at him. He was starting to really disappear now. And she had to get him back to the real sprit world. "Kurama-" But he wasn't looking at her, because she wasn't the one who had spoken his name. He looked at Mayumi. she felt herself becoming heavy. "Kurama." her world grew darker, and as everything became black Mayumi felt two strong arms catch her.
Kurama looked up at Botan. "Well?" He asked her. She nodded. Kurama was becoming weak, and as he picked Mayumi up, he almost dropped her. Botan flew a little ahead of the two of them leading the way back to the portal. Her color was returning, as the glow subsided. Her weight became more pronounced as she gained her human form back. As for Kurama it was just the opposite. His color drained as the soul room soaked up his human body. But he didn't give in, he couldn't. He had her now, and he had to make sure she would be o.k. He looked up from Mayumi's face and saw the great doors ahead of him, he took a deep breathe and walked through, collapsing on the other side.
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