Update on my work

Sorry I haven't posted for a couple of months on this fan fic course work comes first.

And yes I know I am crap at writing fan fiction compared to others on this site but I am trying to improve so please bear with me as try and complete this work. However I would like constative critic and feedback not just Radom people moaning that the story is crap

The next chapter will be an interlude and I show the relationship between marron and bra

I know she sounds like a mean girl from bra perceptive but I always imaged marron been the only child would have been dotted on by Krillin and android 18 and might be shallow and spoilt by both her parents in the time of peace weather or not she know martial arts or not I will think of that when the time comes.