My Bleeding Heart

Chapter Five – Brainwashed

Hello everyone I have 33 reviews which is close enough to 35 again…… it's creepy last time I got 23 while asking for 25, so maybe I'll just ask for 43 this time, but if I ask for that I'll probably only get like 40, so….. I'm asking for 45 alright! Unfortunately Hatori told on me….. "Damn you Hatori!"

so, I have to go to a special MAKA meeting with all the people who can't 'comprehend' the information that they're giving us, although I think they know that we really can because they put shock collars on all our necks……. So yah, anyway why doesn't anybody answer my questions do people even read the top part in which I spent minuets laboring over, with a sore, sore neck 'sob.' K then back to the story!

Remember, answer this question please, do you guys want Yuki, or Tohru's friends to have a bigger role in the story, or do you want me to leave it the way it is? K then here's the story (Dun, dun, dun, Peyton butchered theme song! Ah run away the horrors!"

"Whatever, just get up the stairs." Chiharu said, loosening his grip on Tohru's arm. "O….of course!" Tohru said, still acting cheerfully. They both went up the stairs, and went inside Chiharu's room. (Back to Kyo) "God Tohru, what the hell did you get yourself into!" He tried to open the door, but it wouldn't open, the he tried to kick the door down, but that wasn't a really good idea since the door was made of metal and everything.

"God Damnit, I'm so gonna kill the ass who made stupid metal doors!" (Back to Tohru) "Sit down somewhere I have something to talk to you about." Chiharu said to Tohru. "Yes, of course!" Tohru said before sitting down in a chair. "What would you like to talk about Chiharu?" Tohru asked sweetly. "I know about your secret Tohru Chiharu whispered in her ear, "M…..my secret?"

(Back to Kyo, ha ha bet u wanna find out Tohru's secret : P) Kyo, ran along the side of the building looking for a window, he could climb through, "man what is this place area 51!" Kyo asked himself angrily. "Hey kid what you doin'?" A large man asked while lifting up Kyo by the collar of his shirt.

Man he's been drinking WAY to much! (Just throwing in the no drinking thing kya ha ha) "I asked you a question brat!" The guy half shouted. "What's it to you!" Kyo asked, "What's the big deal, are you the figgin guard!" The man dropped Kyo who landed on all fours, like the beautiful cat he is. (Peyton drools)

"Maybe I'm the unofficial guard, what's it to you?" The guy asked mimicking Kyo. "WELL MAYBE I'M JUST LOOKING FOR MY FRIEND, I'M WORRIED ABOUT HER K? SOME STRANGE FREAK JUST BROUGHT HER IN THERE!" Kyo screamed at the man. The guy half jumped back before he said, "I know how you feel, I don't know who just some kid, he was tall, almost black hair, he raped my sister before killing her, her brainwashed her she thought he was her only friend or something, she wouldn't even respond to anybody."

"Sorry man" Kyo said while trying to remember what the guy looked liked. "Try to get your friend away from that building kid, things happen to girls in there, they come out changed, like zombies almost."

(Back to Tohru) "Yes your secret, you hide it well from people Tohru." "I'm sorry……..but I don't know what your talking about." Tohru said looking worried. "You have a depression complex Tohru, you don't want people to realize your sad, you know you can't let yourself feel sad, or depressed, if you let it out of that box, that you've sealed up so tightly, it overwhelm you, it would deteriorate you wouldn't it?" Chiharu said calmly looking at the wall.

"But how…..how did you know, I mean…….." Tohru stammered out, while a single tear slipped down her cheek. "Now, now don't cry." He said while wiping the tear off her cheek. "I know because………..your just like me, you and I are really the same, almost identical." "Really?" Tohru asked looking up into his eyes. "Of course, why don't you tell me?" Chiharu asked gently, eyes unmoving showing no compassion. "Yes of course Chiharu, thank you so much!" Tohru said while stroking her hand through his brown hair, "Your hair is so beautiful, it's such a dark brown, it's almost black." Tohru said while giggling a little.

(Sudden memory from Chiharu these are all said by different girls) "Oh Chiharu, your so cute! I love your hair, it's so beautiful!" "Oh Chiharu, you understand me perfectly! You have the most beautiful hair I have ever seen though, such an understanding color!" "Chiharu, your so handsome, and you understand me so well, I wish threw were more great people in the world like you!" (A couple memories by Chiharu after the girls say things)' you see a bloody knife sitting on a table, next to a bloody corpse'

(Back to Kyo) "Hey, um, what happened to her did you get her help?" Kyo asked the man. "Well, no we tried to get her help, but one night she snuck out of the house, that was the last time I saw her, the police found her lying in a ditch afterwards. She was stabbed 17 times, I couldn't, I couldn't go in to see her I didn't want to see her all bloodied up."

(Back to Tohru) After Tohru finished explaining about her situation about her mom, and everything Chiharu said, "Your not telling me something, I can tell!" Chiharu said angrily to Tohru. "N…no I'm not really!" Tohru said while in her mind you see flashes of Kyo getting imprisoned and everybody returning to the Sohma household. "YES YOU ARE!" "I..I'm sorry but no I didn't mean it! Please don't hit me!" Tohru said seeing Chiharu raise his hand. (Chiharu's memory again) "Come on Chiharu! Lets go play before daddy gets home!" "Chiharu all the girls say your so cute, they're all jealous that I'm your brother!" "Chiharu you're the best brother in the world!" 'you all see Chiharu hiding behind a table and a tall man in the shadows raise his hand in the air' "No, no daddy, stop it! Please don't hit me, no daddy stop it, OUCH no, no daddy stop please no more OWW no daddy!" Chiharu closed his eyes scared when he saw his little sister cough up something redder than her hair. He screamed out.

Suddenly Chiharu backed away from Tohru, "No….no I won't I won't no…no Sara, no, no daddy don't, don't hit her anymore!" Tohru, crawled over and put her hand on his shoulder, "Chiharu?" "Don't you get it, your worthless! Nobody likes you, they just act it, nobody understands you, nobody! I am the only one! I am your only friend! Now go! Leave me NOW!" Tohru backed away tears running down her cheeks, as she opened the door and ran down the hall.

"I hate you! DON'T YOU HERE ME I HATE YOU, YOU BASTARD!"

Chiharu yelled and threw a glass, across the room, and saw it shatter against the wall. Laughing maniacally to himself.

(Kyo + man) "What do you mean…….girls get brainwashed?" Kyo asked "I mean, girls come out believing that he's their only friend. But you know It's probably not him, he hasn't murdered anyone in the last 3 years……." The man said. "What do you mean, murdered?" Kyo said before turning around and running as fast, and far away as he could.

K that's chapter 6! Umm remember 45 reviews! Oh and I would've written more, but MAKA keeps shocking my collar cuz we have a meeting, if anybody knows someone there, or can get me out I would really appreciate it, then I could write more! But I guess this was a pretty long chapter for me! Don't you just love my brilliant cliffhangers? So review, like 45 of em and I'll write again k! An to the people who put my story on story alert and still haven't reviewed I would appreciate if you would!

Some peeps don't know this but I can check if you did story alert or not, so I know who you all are! Grrrrrrr look at my evil guard dogginess! Grrrrrrrrrrrrr ruff ruff! Yummy, yes! I scored big time a juicy bone! Wait just a minuet! I'm not actually a dog! While Peyton is pondering whether she's a dog or not, I will say goodbye for now, I am Peyton's sane side and this is probably the only time you'll see me, but I'm not sure how I got here……………I mean Peyton's acting like a dog, how can her sane side come out now! Anyway see ya next time! R/R – Furuba Girl 24