Hey It's your Friendly neighbor hood MercuryKnight, coming to you with the
next part of Kriels' Adventures. You know the next part about the
disclaimer the only original characters are Kriel and Phire and the other
two Elora and Silent belong to Ryokochanaeris. Well anyway I'll going to
stop my rambling and get to the good stuff.
Kriel couldn't beliave his eyes the first time he saw Junon. The huge Barrle like thing pointing out toward the ocean. He couldn't believe his eyes when Elora told him that was a Canon that could destroy whole ships in one shot. He walked for sometime wondering also if his friend Phire was still here.
around.
"Well there should be one some where around here. there is still a city on the top of the platform up there, I think." She points up at the platforms edge. " I think it's up there.
"Well Elora watch yourself Sephiroth might be around because they sent him this way" Kriel said, then looked up. "Also I think I might have a friend here. He could help us get help." He looked down at the bracelet.
"Ok Kriel, I'll go and see what the next ships departure is." Elora said while they walked to the elevator. They hopped onto the elevator and went up." I hope your friend is here I would very much like to meet him Kriel. Kriel are you alright, I hope your not going to pass out on me again." Elora said with some concern. Kriel was just thinking on how the bracelet worked before he gave it to Phire to go and get help in Shadowdale. He planned on making this a visit between him and Phire.
"I'm ok Elora, I'm just thinking if my friend was here or not." Kriel said in a low voice. He noticed a light flash and the elevator stopped. They got off the elevator and and Kriel said he had to replace his weapons so they split off. Elora going to the docks and Kriel going on a hunt for a weapon shop. "Elora take care of yourself I will see you down at the docks" Kriel said then disappeared down an alleyway.
Kriel walked into a shop with a blue light that was streaking across the floor. "Umm... by any chance do you sell swords and those things you call guns." The man behind the counter looked at Kriel. "Do you have any gil?" Kriel looked at the man after him saying that, and Kriel took out his pouch. "No I'll I have are gold pieces and Silver ones" He flashed them in front of the Weapon guy. His jaw dropped. and he stammered. "you could buy my store with three of those pieces of gold. you can have anything you want for one gold."
Kriel left the store with four guns, two desert eagles, an assualt rifle and a shotgun. he also bought a hardedge ad it's called and two more scimitars. Now he planned on finding Phire and giving him the bracelet. He thought that maybe he would be in a bar. So he checked out the bar underneith the weapons store. He walked into find not only Phire but two others not of this world. A Half-orc and a dwarf.
"Phire well met my friend. I have very important business to discuss with you." Kriel said as Phire spotted him. Phire stood up and gave Kriel a firm hand shake."I've been waiting for you to come and join me. these are to others from Toril and they have been brought here also by that evil Sephiroth. This sturdy and well built dwarf is a dwarf king among his people, Gary Gutbuster. This is a new site to me but this is Hughie a half- orc who seems to be hating Sephiroth." Phire says and suppresses a laugh. " Oh and one more thing what's with your hair?" Phire said and started to laugh. Kriel never really payed much attention to his hair, he felt his hair with his right hand and could feel something of braids." that gives ye a good looking in me book drow" The dwarf king said in a rough sandpaper- like voice. He was a burly and sturdy dwarf with his axe and crossbow on his side. The Half-orc never really said anything just smiled and gave Kriel a nod.
"Well I know who did this then and I think I'll keep it. But anyway Phire i need you to go back to Shadowdale and get anyone you can." Kriel said handing him the bracelet. "I need recruits so we can kill him" Kriel looked at Gary. "I need you to do something too. I need you to head to a fort not very far from here and help them fight a small war against the Shinra corp or something like that." He looked at the Half-orc. "you can come with me I'll need a hand in defending this girl. what weapon do you use? Oh and Gary go and exchange that crossbow and get one of these" Kriel Said showing Gary the gun and Hughie took out a huge mace about the size of him tall and round. "Ok people i got to get down to the docks you should disembark now. Phire you might want to go to that fort with gary before you leave." Kriel finally turned and waved for Hughie to come.
They left heading for the docks when suddenly saw a shop with a sign saying materia. "Hold on a sec Hughie, I want to see what this stuff does." Kriel turned into the store and looked around. "Hello my friend, I would like to see what kind of materia you have." Kriel said, he spent sometime in the shop getting two of each and giving the doubles to Hughie. They left and headed for the docks, Kriel noticed out of the corner of his I a ship leaving port. "damn we missed the last ship I hope Elora is still there waiting for me." Kriel quickened his pace and arrived at the docks to find only a guard there. Kriel walked over to the guard. "Umm... hi did you see a girl and a panther down here laterly?" Kriel asked the guard hoping for an answer. The guard answered after thinking for a sec. "Yes they got on the last boat."
Kriel looked after the ship wonder ing why in the nine hells she got on the ship with him.
Well how did you like? I hope you will review my chaps so far I'm really proud of my first online work.
MercuryKnight
Kriel couldn't beliave his eyes the first time he saw Junon. The huge Barrle like thing pointing out toward the ocean. He couldn't believe his eyes when Elora told him that was a Canon that could destroy whole ships in one shot. He walked for sometime wondering also if his friend Phire was still here.
around.
"Well there should be one some where around here. there is still a city on the top of the platform up there, I think." She points up at the platforms edge. " I think it's up there.
"Well Elora watch yourself Sephiroth might be around because they sent him this way" Kriel said, then looked up. "Also I think I might have a friend here. He could help us get help." He looked down at the bracelet.
"Ok Kriel, I'll go and see what the next ships departure is." Elora said while they walked to the elevator. They hopped onto the elevator and went up." I hope your friend is here I would very much like to meet him Kriel. Kriel are you alright, I hope your not going to pass out on me again." Elora said with some concern. Kriel was just thinking on how the bracelet worked before he gave it to Phire to go and get help in Shadowdale. He planned on making this a visit between him and Phire.
"I'm ok Elora, I'm just thinking if my friend was here or not." Kriel said in a low voice. He noticed a light flash and the elevator stopped. They got off the elevator and and Kriel said he had to replace his weapons so they split off. Elora going to the docks and Kriel going on a hunt for a weapon shop. "Elora take care of yourself I will see you down at the docks" Kriel said then disappeared down an alleyway.
Kriel walked into a shop with a blue light that was streaking across the floor. "Umm... by any chance do you sell swords and those things you call guns." The man behind the counter looked at Kriel. "Do you have any gil?" Kriel looked at the man after him saying that, and Kriel took out his pouch. "No I'll I have are gold pieces and Silver ones" He flashed them in front of the Weapon guy. His jaw dropped. and he stammered. "you could buy my store with three of those pieces of gold. you can have anything you want for one gold."
Kriel left the store with four guns, two desert eagles, an assualt rifle and a shotgun. he also bought a hardedge ad it's called and two more scimitars. Now he planned on finding Phire and giving him the bracelet. He thought that maybe he would be in a bar. So he checked out the bar underneith the weapons store. He walked into find not only Phire but two others not of this world. A Half-orc and a dwarf.
"Phire well met my friend. I have very important business to discuss with you." Kriel said as Phire spotted him. Phire stood up and gave Kriel a firm hand shake."I've been waiting for you to come and join me. these are to others from Toril and they have been brought here also by that evil Sephiroth. This sturdy and well built dwarf is a dwarf king among his people, Gary Gutbuster. This is a new site to me but this is Hughie a half- orc who seems to be hating Sephiroth." Phire says and suppresses a laugh. " Oh and one more thing what's with your hair?" Phire said and started to laugh. Kriel never really payed much attention to his hair, he felt his hair with his right hand and could feel something of braids." that gives ye a good looking in me book drow" The dwarf king said in a rough sandpaper- like voice. He was a burly and sturdy dwarf with his axe and crossbow on his side. The Half-orc never really said anything just smiled and gave Kriel a nod.
"Well I know who did this then and I think I'll keep it. But anyway Phire i need you to go back to Shadowdale and get anyone you can." Kriel said handing him the bracelet. "I need recruits so we can kill him" Kriel looked at Gary. "I need you to do something too. I need you to head to a fort not very far from here and help them fight a small war against the Shinra corp or something like that." He looked at the Half-orc. "you can come with me I'll need a hand in defending this girl. what weapon do you use? Oh and Gary go and exchange that crossbow and get one of these" Kriel Said showing Gary the gun and Hughie took out a huge mace about the size of him tall and round. "Ok people i got to get down to the docks you should disembark now. Phire you might want to go to that fort with gary before you leave." Kriel finally turned and waved for Hughie to come.
They left heading for the docks when suddenly saw a shop with a sign saying materia. "Hold on a sec Hughie, I want to see what this stuff does." Kriel turned into the store and looked around. "Hello my friend, I would like to see what kind of materia you have." Kriel said, he spent sometime in the shop getting two of each and giving the doubles to Hughie. They left and headed for the docks, Kriel noticed out of the corner of his I a ship leaving port. "damn we missed the last ship I hope Elora is still there waiting for me." Kriel quickened his pace and arrived at the docks to find only a guard there. Kriel walked over to the guard. "Umm... hi did you see a girl and a panther down here laterly?" Kriel asked the guard hoping for an answer. The guard answered after thinking for a sec. "Yes they got on the last boat."
Kriel looked after the ship wonder ing why in the nine hells she got on the ship with him.
Well how did you like? I hope you will review my chaps so far I'm really proud of my first online work.
MercuryKnight