Sad Simon 6

The chipmunks all screamed as an elephant, rhinoceros, and hippo charged toward us. All of a sudden out of no where, someone on a jeep sped by them, picking them up as they drove.

"Who are you? What's your name? Where are you taking us?" All four of us asked questions at the same time.

"My name is Marie-Elise. I am from France and my mission is to save you four and try and help you get back home." She pronounced all of her u's like oo and all her i's like ee. "The reason I came here from France is because my boss saw on the news that you were missing so he assigned me and the other spies to this job. I already learned your names. You are Alvin, no?"

"Yeah."

"And you are Brittany, and you're Jeannette."

"Yup."

"And you are Simon?"

"Yes." She nodded and started driving farther into the wildlife park until they reached the fence of the park. She kept on driving and broke straight through the fence then said, "We must stop here so I can fill up the car with gas." The others nodded and walked a little until they came upon a clear opening.

"I like her accent, I especially like the way she pronounces the. She pronounces it like zee. I think she is still learning English though."

"Yeah, I like her voice too." The others all agreed with Jeannette. Just then, a bunch of monkeys came by. They started hooting loudly then grabbed Brittany's ponytail holder out. Another one grabbed Jeannette's glasses.

"Hey give that back!" the two girls said together. The monkey that grabbed Jeannette's glasses put them down on the floor inches in front of her. She crawled on floor going in the wrong direction until she got up and started walking toward where her glasses were. She heard a crunch come from underneath her foot. Oh no, I just broke my glasses. She thought. She put them on her face and saw a bunch of cracks running through the middle of the left lenses and on the left of the right lenses. She groaned.

"It's better than nothing Jeannette."

"Thanks Simon." They all looked at Brittany who was trying to get the hair out of her eyes but kept on failing. Then she gave up and was about to say something smart when Marie-Elise came back driving in the jeep. The monkeys had ran away so they just jumped in and she started heading back for the way they were trying to go.

Six hours later, the jeep stopped with a jolt. Marie-Elise got out the car and looked at the damage the car had gotten. It was stuck in a little ditch that was in a rectangular shape.

"We must go by foot until it gets dark kids." She shook Brittany and Jeannette to wake them up. They groaned then jolted upwards when they saw they had been sleeping on their counterparts shoulder. They both blushed fiercely but still got out followed by the boys. As they were walking, the chipmunks studied Marie-Elise. She looked about 18 years old and had jet black hair. Her skin was a creamy color and she had a smile with perfect, straight, white teeth. She was wearing black and dark blue clothes and red shoes. She wore her hair out, and looked like a really serious person.

When night came, she found a tree with a hole big enough for all of them to fit in there. They all pulled out their blankets and gave her one too. She smiled at them in a thank you way then went to sleep immediately. The others all fell asleep too very quickly.

The next morning when Marie-Elise woke them up the sun wasn't even out yet. They grumbled at her.

"The sun's not even out yet, why do we have to get up?"

"Because-" she was interrupted by a cell phone ringing.

"Hello?" she said into the phone. "Jonathan, you always mess everything up! Why did you do that you that for?" she started cursing into the phone and the chipmunks all covered their ears. They hoped she would stop cursing soon; they hated it when people curse around them. After she got off the phone, she got out a cigarette and lit it up.

"How can she have white teeth if she smokes cigarettes?" Alvin whispered to Simon.

"I don't know, maybe she barely ever smokes." When she finished her cigarette, she started leading them the wrong way.

"Um, aren't we supposed to go that way?" Brittany pointed in the other direction.

"Yes, I forget for a second there." She started walking the right way again, picking some fruits as she went by and eating them. When she had eaten six bananas, she gave them the rest of the food she had picked. They thanked her and ate in silence as they walked. Then she did something that disturbed them all. She got out a pack of cigarettes and a bottle of whiskey and offered it to the boys.

"We're only twelve, we can't smoke until we're 18 and drink until we're 21!" they shouted at her.

"Fine, suit yourself. Girls?" she offered the cigarettes and whiskey to the girls again and they shook their heads quickly.

"Listen Mary-Alice, if you're going to smoke and drink and offer it to us, then leave." Simon threatened her.

"The name's Marie-Elise." She said. She spit out something at them and Jeannette recognized it as chewing tobacco. She pulled on her skin and the chipmunks saw it was a costume. She really had brown, black, and yellow teeth with a little green tint to it. She smelled like drugs, alcohol, and smoke. Her clothes were a dirty tank top with ugly brown pants to match. Her hair was a dirty red color and Brittany could of swore she saw lice crawling in her hair. She walked bare-foot and had fungus on her feet. She looked so ugly the chipmunks thought they were going to puke. "If you don't want me, then I will leave. But you'll regret it. And because of you, I missed my date with my boyfriend Jonathan so he invited another girl over to his house. We were going to have-"

"That's enough! Get away now! You're the ugliest person I've ever seen in my life! We don't want to here any more of your cursing or about your boyfriend Jonathan!" she seemed not to here him though.

"But instead he had it with her. It's not fair, I really wanted kids. That little-"

"Out, now!" Simon yelled again. He didn't like hearing about this kind of stuff, it always made him feel sick to his stomach. She started running toward them abd dug her dirty fingernails into Jeannette. She screamed so loud in pain that it broke Simon's heart. He ran full speed toward Marie-Elise and bit into her cracked skin. She yelled out even louder than Jeannette had and elbowed Simon in the stomach so hard that he began throwing up blood. Jeannette ran to his side although she was bleeding as well in her arm. Marie-Elise ran to Brittany and took out a pocket knife and cut Brittany in the palm of her hand. She bit her lip but that didn't stop the tears from coming out of her eyes. Alvin got upset that this French lady was hurting his brother and Jeannette. He got furious when she did that to Brittany though. He jumped on top of Marie-Elise and punched her face over and over again until she became unconscious. They threw Marie-Elise into a stream of water where the water current wasn't too strong.

The chipmunks started walking until they became too hungry to walk and ate some of the vegetables that lady had packed for them weeks before. It had been 83 days since the day they were captured. They knew they were probably going to fail the sixth grade and probably never see any of their siblings again. They wished they had stayed with Eleanor and Theodore, that they had a better relationship with each other before this happened. Most of all, they missed Dave and Miss Miller.

This chapter is kind of weird but it was all I could think of. In the next chapter should I make the chipmunks be running from Marie-Elise, Samuel and his men, or should I make them have to try and survive the wilderness because they walk into the rainforest again? Or maybe even a wildlife preserve? I am running out of ideas, so please review and tell me what I should write in the next chapter. It would be best if you anonymous reviewers get an account so that I could answer back to your reviews :) So in short terms,

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