The Eternal Flame (DISCONTINUED)

by Lutarua

This is a slight AU from the normal Eldarya story, I'd only read the first three chapter when I came up with this. In this story, the world of Eldarya was created by a group of celestial beings, the first humanoid species were angel-like beings called Guardians. When the story takes place, all of Eldarya's monarchies have been destroyed, and the Guardians left the surface long ago.

6. Author's Note

Hey guys, I'm sorry I haven't been adding new chapters recently, but I've been super busy with work, school, and helping around the house. However, I should now be at a point where I can upload on a semi-regular basis.

That being said… I've decided to restart the Eternal Flame. As I reread the five chapters that I currently have up, I noticed certain inconsistencies in the story I was trying to tell, as well as "awkward" moments in my writing. I also happen to have gotten just a little bit farther in the game itself (I'm currently about halfway through Chapter 10)… and I'm definitely wanting to include Yvoni in this somehow. I also noticed that I was rushing through the bigger points in the story, she remembered too much too quickly.

I fully intend to have at least 5 new chapters up by the end of March, though I'm still debating whether or not I want to delete the first five chapters and upload the new chapter to this story, keep the old chapters up, or just start a new story. If you guys want to keep the old chapters up, please PM me and let me know!

Side note, thank you flassil and Hobbitlover for the positive feedback )! It's nice to think that someone has read what I've written and has actually liked it! Although, honestly, I didn't fully understand flassil's comment… English is my native language, though I'm able to understand a little bit of French, and even less of Italian.