Hi guys! I'm really wanting reviews I thank those for reading my story, but I have no clue what you guys are thinking, please I'm begging to pm and review tome please. Sorry about the problems with the story. Blame my Ipad because of the stupid typoes. Enjoy!

Jerry

Whooo! Look at that cat, even were not the same type she's hot. No really, it looks like her furs on fire! "Wow, nice pelt!" ok, at least I won't look like a freak like when I was human. "Umm.. thanks.

My father, Firestar, had a flamed colored pelt too." Replied Squrrielflight, I wonder why they call her that. I then saw a white-cat and golden brown tom lifting Jack onto their backs. "Leafpool, is it serious?" Asked Squrrielfliht, with concern as if she knew him for life.

I still can't believe that Jack is a crush to every girl in school and who do I have?! No one! Well the brown tabby looked at Jack wounds then Eddie's, then mine.

"No, but the muscled rogue might be in shock. The others might need help getting to our camp." Inform to the deputy as she called herself. "I don't need help look at me. I more fearless then Jack" I lied, I wonder how this will end? "Really, because when we were on border patrol, we heard what sounded like a kit screeching .Let his Leafpool mocked, with the whole PATROL laughing.

Well it was a long walk, it was painful heading there Kim was with those cats known as Brakenfur and Whitewing. Wow! Seriously! Where do they get these names?! Well when we got to their camp, a cool looking cat with stripes of a tiger came out of the den with shock and surprise at the look of us.

Eddie

Squrrielflight! What happened here?! Who are these cats?!" Questioned a cat that look like a tiger. Then came a silver utmost with very blue eyes. "Take that loner in my den, I need tansy and poppy seeds stat!" Cried the Tom, with huge concern in his eyes. Why does this always have to be about Jack?! Just then a small kitten with flamed colored pelt and blacks stripes came running towards us with excitement. "Wow! Real rouges! Do live with twolegs?

Do you live near here? Did you fight a fox?" This kitten was cute and playful! "Peacekit! Let them rest! Why don't you help your cousin with this Jack, I never thought I saw a cat that strong before not even Tigerstar or Scourge!" Squrrielflight ordered. Ohhh! That must be her daughter!

Well, Peacekit went in that den that smelled with mints... Oh one reason to be a cat! "Hey! quit smelling! The only scent left will be the dirtplace soon!" complained a pale ginger who was probably the oldest cat here.

"Oh sorry, I'm Eddie," I introduced myself. "I'm Sandstorm. Now if you want your friends and yourself heal, I suggest you stay away from the den. Now we just need to get some cob webs and poppy seeds." Sandstorm suggested.

Cool! She is way better then my Nana, I'm hoping! Well, I'm just not worried about the others, I'm worried about Rudy or Milton. Maybe well find them soon. Right now, my friends need me!