so a fast update this time.
Chap. 6
'JUMP' Amanda yelled at Evanee 'you can make it'
'are you crazy. I can never make it'
'hurry' Ziva yelled 'there is only a minute left'
Evanee took a deep breath, the best that she could surrounded by the flames. She jumped, only she didn't make it. She screamed they saw her twenty centimeter further and she had made it. Spinning in pain she reached out from the flames and grabbed the trouser of Amanda. Amanda did something Ziva only had done once on a mission to save herself. She kicked, she kicked the arm away, when her leg was out of the flames it was burning. You could hear the pain in the noises she made when she put it out. She looked at the three that were left, the screaming had stopped.
'We need to go' and she walked away, well she limped away, Ziva could read in her eyes that she was in terrible pain.
Back at NCIS
Ducky walked in Abby's lab, till his surprise there was no music. 'Abigail' he called. No answer. But he saw her sitting in front of her screen. 'Abigail, why is there no music playing' it was unnecessary that he asked. Of course it was because of Tony and Ziva.
Abby only looked at him, that was when the tears broke free from her eyes. He took her in a comfort hug. That was al he needed to do to make her talk between her sobs.
'Ducky, what if something terrible happens to Ziva or Tony, what if we loose them'
'we will not Abigail, we won't loose them'
'How can you say that. We have lost Ziva already. When she went to Israel because her father asked her. And again when the whole thing with Rivkin happened and with Salim'
'Yes I know my dear but every time we had got her back so will we now'
Where ever Gibbs is…
No where was there a sign of Tony or Ziva. He could not loose them. Neither of them. They seemed unfindable. But they had to be somewhere. They just could not be no where.
He stared at the city from where he stood. Give him space to think.
At the spooky house
Tim kept typing one the laptop that Jenny had brought. He had to do double work because Tony wasn't there. He was worried about him. What if he did something stupid. Ah screw that if he probably was doing something stupid right now.
'Mcgee, do you have found something' Jenny woke him up from his mind. Right at that moment his computer pinged.
'euh…yes' while he still typed 'well. I have just found who the people on the pictures and with Ziva are. '
'And they are?' Mcgee and Jenny looked behind them in shock.
'Oh. Agent Hoffman we didn't hear you coming'
'Agent Gibbs sent me. His cell phone was out. Well who are they' he asked.
'o yeah. The woman', her he pointed at one of the people on the screen. 'She is called Evanee Wallson, she was a prostitute and has been in jail several times. The other woman is Amanda Young, we already know who she is. That guy' he pointed again 'Is Devonn Cridle oww. The police is looking for him because of the dead of this woman' he brought up a picture of a 75 year old woman 'the police think he has killed her. And than is there the last guy, his name is A-Jay no last name. Well he is a drugs dealer more can I not find'
'Good work agent Mcgee' Jenny wanted to say something more but her eyes were caught by the screen. The woman Evanee jumped but came in the flames. And was eaten by them. Mcgee and Jenny looked away. Jenny saw the face of Hoffman it seemed a smile but…
'I am going back to the office call me if there is any progress.'
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