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FEAR LANDSCAPES! I'm going to be changing a few of Tris' fears to work better with the story.

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First of all thanks to everyone who reviewed these are just answers to questions.

Guest (Allysandra)- That's in the next chapter! It was always in the plan and I read your review and was like…spooky!
Stomachtiedinknots- You'll have to wait to find out cause this chapter got WAY too long.

.initiate- I'm still deciding about that. I've got to options to how this will work out and I just have to decide

Angelo Di Luce- This story will involve the war in a way, but no quite as prominently as the original books

Guest- Yes I am going to write more

Tris' POV

The alarm started beeping furiously at 5am. I rolled over and hit something hard. I opened my eyes to see Tobias grinning sleepily at me.

"Morning Tris."

"Morning Four." I said cheekily then I leaned in to kiss him softly. The kiss quickly becomes heated. My fingers are entwined in his hair but before anything else can happen the alarm begins beeping again. Tobias groans and pulls away from me. We drag ourselves out of bed and shower and get dressed. Tobias is wearing the black combat pants and tight top that he always does. I'm wearing a pair of black leggings that hug my leg and make them seem shapely. I'm wearing a black singlet with my combat boots and a black leather jacket. I turned to look in the mirror and realise just how different I look. My necklace is showing for the first time ever and my face looks happier. I look more alive than I have my entire life. Tobias and I walk hand in hand out of the house. He leans down to whisper in my ear

"Make sure you call me Four today. We've already explained enough of our pasts without the rest of that stuff coming out." I nod and stand on tiptoe to kiss his cheek.

Fours' POV

Tris and I walk into the initiate dorm and she smiles before banging on pipes with me. They all sit up and Christina laughs.

"Seriously? You're our instructor too now Tris?" Tris laughs back at her and I reply

"Nope, she has to pass her own initiation first. Although I might take you guys to the Alley X gym and get Tris to help me out there." Peter rolls his eyes and Tris and I walk out of the room. We're sitting at the table eating breakfast when Eric walks up.

"Four, Lauren is ill today so you'll have to take the initiates through your fear landscape." I freeze. If they go through my landscape they'll know who I am. Tris looks at me and says to Eric

"Could we, go through mine? Rather than Four's" Eric considers this.

"Okay. You can change it up a bit. Go into Tris' landscape with all the initiates and they have to tell her how to face her fear. Then make them go through hers and finally they can go through their own." Suggested Eric. As soon as he walked away I turned to Tris

"Are you sure about this? I mean we don't know what your fears are. Are you sure you're comfortable with this?"

"I wouldn't have suggested it if I wasn't. Come on, if Lauren's sick we have to wake up the Dauntless Born."

40 minutes later

Everyone is hooked up to Tris' simulation. We have the Dauntless born with us as well so the small room is quite squished. I'll be able to hear and see Tris and the initiates but Tris will only be able to hear and see me. The initiates will tell me how they would deal with the problem and then I will tell Tris what to do. We are plunged into blackness and I wait for Tris first fear to appear.

She's in a glass box and a small pump is filling it with water. The water is rising higher and higher and none of the initiates have said anything. I see her hit the glass on one side and a crack appears. I yell at her not to break the glass glad that this isn't being recorded and that the other initiates can't hear me. Tris is divergent. I realise that it will show if she doesn't do something soon.

"Well? One of you say something." The water is really quite high now and I can see Tris is worried.

"Block the pump." Calls out Will. I nod my agreement and Tris removes her jacket and shoves it in the pipe. The blackness takes over and suddenly we are in a field outside the fence. A huge flock of crows fly down around her.

"Use the fire over there." Said Al.

"Tris…Tris!" I Shouted

"Go to the fire. Use it to fend them off." Suddenly the crows are gone and I'm looking at Natalie, Andrew and Caleb Prior. They're tied to chairs and look terrified. A gun is pressed to Tris back and she is being told to shoot them or die herself. Caleb tells her to shoot them, that it will all be okay. Everyone stays quiet unsure of what to do. Eventually Bea turns the gun on herself and the world is black again. Tris and a simulation version of me are sitting by the pond. I look younger, not so harsh. Tris' face is softer and kinder too.

"I…I love you Tobias." She says. Simulation me says

"Hahahaha, as if I could ever love you. You're small, pathetic. Totally worthless. I could never love someone like you!" NO one says anything until I say to Tris

"Tell him that he is worthless, not good enough for you."

"You're not good enough for me. I am better than you. Not the other way around." The simulation breaks and the scene is changing again. I wish I could just hold her and tell her I love her but I now I can't.

The next scene is me again. I'm about to get on the train, I can see people wearing other colours at Dauntless. Visiting Day. Tris is seeing me die. I leap for the train and completely miss the handle.

"Turn around, don't look at him and walk away." Said Uriah. I shake my head. The only way to stop a fear like this is to save the person. Tris sprints forward and grabs my hand. The fear is over and we move on yet again.

Now we're standing in the Alley X gym. I'm there again. I'm about 13 and Tris is only about 11. We're wearing our black clothes and laughing together. Then we start fighting. We duck under hits and throw our own for about 2 minutes. Then two figures come in through the hole. One is Marcus, the other is a faceless henchman. The henchman grabs Tris and forces her to look at me. Marcus grabs me and begins to hit me. I can see my simulation self cringing and wincing with every hit but that just makes Marcus angrier. I rewind the simulation to the start and tell Tris to hide with me. We hide in a tall box and when Marcus walks in he looks around and walks out casually. Then we're back in the room. Tris shoots upright and tears run down her face as she catches he breathe. I walk towards her cautiously. She sees me and leaps up into my arms. She cries and I hold her tightly, rubbing her back and whispering 'I love you, it's okay, I'm here.' Over and over to her. After a minute she pulls back and kisses me hard on the lips. I kiss her right back. About three minutes later I pull back and we both gasp for air. I look right into her eyes

"I love you Tris. I promise I'm never going to leave you. Marcus is long gone and he'll never be able to get to us again. I promise you." She nods and I hug her again.

"You're… Tobias Eaton? The rumours are true?" Asked Uriah. I nod and look at Tris.

"We might have to change your name though." She looks up at me confused

"You only had 6 fears. Nice to meet you Six I'm Four." She laughs and kisses me again. I look at the crowd of initiates and then at the time.

"We can get through a really short fear landscape before lunch if we hurry. Come on, might as well take you through mine. Tris will you be the link between me and the others?" She nods and I get her to inject me with the serum. We're standing on top of a building. I feel my body start to shake. Then Tris is beside me holding my hand.

"On three?" She ask

"One." I'm so dead

"Two" How is she so okay with being up high

"THREE" And I'm jumping. But before I hit the ground I'm encased in a box. Tris stays still for a moment listening to the initiates. She puts her back to my chest and puts my hand over her heart. I focus on her breathing and feel my body relax. She makes me crouch down, still holding her too me. And for a moment I forget I'm in a simulation. The box explodes and we're standing in a room. A simulation Bea is tied to a chair. I load the gun and press it too her head. I start to shake and look away. I feel the real Bea wrap her arms around my waist.

"Do it. It's not real Toby, not real at all." I pull the trigger and we move on. I'm 9 now. Before I met Beatrice, before I had a reason for living. Marcus has the belt in hand and moves to hit me. Bea is in front of me before my brain can even register that she's there, the belt comes down on her wrist. I lost it and hit Marcus square in the face. We're out of the simulation and standing in the room.

"That's lunch initiates." They all move to leave and Tris and I are left standing in the room. I just hold her for a moment. Then her stomach growls and we laugh

"Come on let's go get lunch." We hold hands and walk to the cafeteria. We hear a commotion and open the door to find…

Oh cliff-hanger! Constructive criticism is always welcome!

Xx Lizzy