Title : I don't live… do I ?
Character : Hinata.
Disclaimer : Nothing mine. For now.
Note : Um, I think I will need help to correct this one. Like... I will really need advice.
She drew her legs under her chin and wrapped his arms around. Head on her knees, she observed the people in the street. She watched them walking, running, talking, laughing… Just living. Without her.
Too shy to go to the others, not enough interesting to attract attention, not enough strong to be respected, she felt lost and useless. Around her, there were so many people she admired. Naruto, Neji. Kiba. And her, who admired her ?
Drowned in the crowd, she lacked air. She closed her eyes and everything disappeared. Her, him, them. She didn't exist anymore. Her lips twisted. Had she ever exist ?
"Hinata ?"
Her eyes opened again and everything reappeared. Her, him, them. Finally, she existed.
Okay, my big interrogation is on the "sentence" : Her, him, them. In French, we keep the pronom, so Elle, lui, eux. I don't know if we said "She, he, they", seems weird to me, but it is just my own french feeling... :/ I hope I'm clear...