Author's Note!
So I have gotten 19 hits and one review but the review was just a BURNER. Apparently the fact that on the ride from my computer to my story in some parts became one solid continuous paragraph is a HUGE deal. Seriously if all you can say about my story is that its not separated into paragraphs please don't review ! Maybe you didn't know this is a community for writers who want their peers to review their actual work not the constitution of paragraphs so swiftdragonfly thanks for trying bring me down and you know what?, I don't even honestly care if I'm not doing proper paragraphs I'm taking Advanced placement creative writing and have been published in the book UNDEFINED a WALC creative writing project and apparently the logistics of my writing Is fine with them I honestly DO want opinions any opinions about my writing but please make it about the actual story not my misuse of proper grammer . So please review even If it's to say your story is slightly spastic or your making twists and turns in the story that don't match up or make sense
!! Seriously please review, any of my friends or family who read my stuff say it is great and all that and my teacher says its great too but again are teachers not told to encourage their students aspirations? So do it! Review to your little hearts content !
Smooches Cynthia