Swapping Wives: Insanity
Memelovessomeemmett: They aren't just sitting around; it hadn't even been an hour with the last chapter. It was just to show what they found out and where they were now and for them to have the knowledge of Edward being gone.
Marie One: Yes, true just because you are fond of someone doesn't mean you are stuck on them. Yes Edward has done some moving on. I don't think I have made it seem like he is hung on her, that wasn't the intention. Yes it's no secret that he does still have feeling for Bella and wishes he didn't mess up before but he can be content with being her friend. He has does major moving on unlike Jasper; even though he isn't settled down and married he's made a life with his daughter and is happy.
Jessa76: It would be kind of hard to follow when they aren't near Edward. It's the next day in the chapter and Edward isn't around them anymore. If he was called when he was still at Emmett and Bella's house sure that would be perfect.
Concerning the reviews of Bella stabbing Jasper, it was good, wasn't it? I surely made me grin while writing it.
Chapter 6: Agreed
Bella
Jasper had left to the bathroom to clean out his wound until Edward arrived. When the doorbell rang I rushed over to answer it. I used to think that Edward Cullen looked like an angel, but now he truly was. I threw my arms around him, hugging him and he happily returned the favor.
I was so happy to have a friendly face. Someone I could actually tell what I was feeling to. However I also wanted him far away from here. If he was going to survive, he would have to play pretend. I had no control of him if he didn't want to. With Elizabeth being adopted, Edward was all she had. If he upset Jasper and got hurt, what would happen to Elizabeth? I mean I wouldn't mind taking care of the girl but I am not her father. Her only parental figure, I could never take his place and neither could Emmett.
I pulled away from him, stepping away to make room for Elizabeth to run to him and jump into his arms. I watched them with a smile as Kalen, Kristen, and Kristina came running out. After a small introduction I asked the kids to watch TV in another room that was close to us. Edward made sure to tell Elizabeth that if anything happened, if she heard any noise, she was to hide with the kids.
I pulled Edward to the side to tell him exactly what was going on with Jasper.
"Edward, he's created a completely different world here. Hell if it isn't weird enough apparently you are my brother in his world." I told him watching his eyes widen before they fluttered.
He released a chuckle giving me his famous crooked smile. "Well, that is interesting."
I rolled my eyes at the humor he found in it. "It's serious Edward, he claims Kalen, Kristina, and Kristen as his own, He calls Elizabeth my niece which makes you my brother. I stabbed him out of anger but that did not stop him from hitting me. Edward he has killed people!" I whisper yelled.
Edward stared at me before pinching the bridge of his nose, something he seemed to do along with raking his hair when he was frustrated or upset.
"He hit you? How do you know he killed people?" he asked which I responded by pointing to the door that said Isabella's Gifts.
He stepped towards the door slowly before throwing it open. His eyes flickered to all the doors before he stepped inside. "Those are the initials of all the women jasper cheated with, all of the women that went missing during the past ten years..." he commented.
I slowly walked behind him before stopping at the first door, Maria's door. "This was the first door he made me go into." I told him.
He walked to the door and opened it. His eyes stared inside for a while before slowly closing the door.
"He made you see that?" He whispered as his body trembled. I nodded "I told me if I didn't do it he would make the kids do it for me."
I pointed to Emily Uley and Leah Clearwater's door. "He even made me take part in it."
Edward took a shaky breath before walking the door and opening it.
I walked behind him and gently pushed him inside. "She isn't the only one, when the door opened, that happened. He taped everything." I said pointing behind Emily to Leah. He followed my line of sight before cursing under his breath, grabbing my arm and pulling me out of the room.
"I have to go into another room." I said pulling the key out of my pocket, VH. "Victoria Hunter is next." I said smiling sadly. He snatched the key from my hands and walked to the door.
"Fine, but you won't be alone while seeing it." He said as he unlocked the door, pushing it open. I heard him curse again as he moved to the side revealing Victoria's legless body in a chair.
Edward walked over to the note and key on each of Victoria's legs that were on the floor.
He handed the key to me as he read the note out loud. "She seduced me with the way she moved, she can move no longer. You will be seeing Jane next." I looked at the key and just as the note had said JV was next. "Also, hello, Edward, I am not as stupid as you think. I knew Bella would tell you when I ordered you here, and I wouldn't order her to see Victoria until you were here. Here are the rules for you, put your cellphone on the table at the corner of the room, don't bother using it. I have a jammer already in play so it's pretty useless. By now I have Elizabeth…" He trailed off as his grip tightened on the paper; He took his cellphone out, and threw it to the corner of the room. I sighed rubbing my hands over my face and ranking them through my hair. We didn't give Jasper enough credit. We all called him stupid and idiotic. The truth was no idiot could pull all of this off. He has to plan; he has to think of everything that could go wrong. I could only pray that there was a flaw in his plan.
I also needed to figure out how he was watching us. I started to walk around the room as Edward continued reading. "She'll be fine as long as you do as I say. Welcome to the family, Brother, Edward."
I heard him crumble up the paper from behind me as I stared at an object in front of me. I tilted my head as I motioned Edward over.
"Isn't that a camera" I asked, he didn't come to my side but he did respond to me. "Of course, he has this place bugged. He's been planning this for ten years. He saw us walk into the hallway, he saw you show me the rooms and he saw me open the door. He took action and took Elizabeth." He said. I walked over to him and gently patted his shoulder.
"She could be fine, he may be lying." I told him.
"Yes, he most likely is. However he also knows I won't take that chance. Either way the phone wouldn't have worked because of the jammer." He said throwing the paper to the ground before stalking over to the camera in the corner of the room. "Fine, Jasper, I will play your game. I'll do whatever you want, just don't hurt anyone else, that means Bella and the kids," He paused for a second as he glanced out the door to the door across from us, Emily and Leah's room. "Including any other women in here that may be alive. No more tricks like you did with Leah." As soon as Edward finished another damn TV flickered, I'm starting to assume all rooms have a TV in it and I just didn't notice in the first room. Edward and I looked at it to see Jasper sitting in a dark room with his hand cradled to his chest.
"Agreed. Now get up here and fix me."
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