Ha Im back! you people probably thought i was gone...BUT IM NOT!, another chapter of Retriever's Retribution, and to anyone who has read this story before this is the chapter where i left off last time so that means that the next chapter is completely new for everyone, thats right NEW CHAPTERS! also to anyone who is interested this is a link to a new story by a new author that im enjoying immensely it is a KP fanfiction so check it out if interested, there are some amazing writers for that fanfic community, reading some of their fanfiction is actually what made me watch the show because before i was like " some show about some chick tugging some boy toy around as a bullet shield as she saves the world with her pointy breasts...no thanks!" but it was actually pretty damn good! so check it out if interested and give the author some reviews if you have time.

i forgot to add the link last time for the story i was talking about...

Author: Ikira Inugumi

Story: Ultimate Kim Possible

and here is the link: .net/s/7190819/1/Ultimate_Kim_Possible

Retriever's Retribution

Chapter 6: Change and Beginnings

In a grassy training ground complete with trees and a nearby lake a shout could be heard.

"Fire style: Fireball Jutsu!"

Jiraiya let out a long sigh at the display in front of him. Naruto had demanded to see him for some last minute training after coming from Kiba's house to pack up for the mission he was leaving for tomorrow. Jiraiya had immediately refused the Genin though stressing the importance of keeping your body rested and at top physical condition before a mission, he didn't want the kid dead because of fatigue. Obviously Jiraiya was not as willful of a man as he thought he was because after Naruto's blue eyed kicked puppy look that he had given him after the rejection, had been too much for the aged ninja, and now here they were. Naruto showing off his Jutsu's while Jiraiya looked on carefully at each Ninjutsu displayed to pinpoint where he needed help with, which the Sage noticed as he watched the highly dangerous and uncontrolled flame that had burst from his young apprentice's mouth was about everything.

"How was that Ero-Sennin?" Naruto's asked breathing heavily from the Jutsu, Jiraiya took note of this and frowned. That was Naruto's 12th Jutsu or so, not many ninja in the world could blow out so much element based attacks and have an ample amount of energy left, but with Naruto's chakra capacity, he should've been able to give him 20 of those without breaking a sweat. It was just a cruel reminder of how bad the blonde's chakra control really was.

"Kid come here and sit down for a minute" Jiraiya said beckoning him over, Naruto just shrugged and marched over sitting down next to him.

"What is it Ero-Sennin?" Jiraiya turned to Naruto and the blonde was immediately aware of how serious the normally aloof Sannin was.

"Ok kid listen to me. I need you to promise something. No better yet I want you to give me your word and you never go back on your word right?"

"Of course not! That's my Ninja way!" Naruto replied thumping his chest.

"Ok then…I don't want you using any of those Jutsu's you just showed me." There was a moment of stunned silence as Naruto took in what Jiraiya had just asked him, then he screamed.

"What!"

The white haired man quickly tried to calm the young Genin "listen to me Naruto. this is for your own good, those Jutsu's are not meant for you to use them in battle yet!"

"But why?" Naruto asked desperately, he had been excited about using the moves on the mission if the opportunity arose, but now his teacher had forbid it, he couldn't help the feeling of disappointment that rose in his chest along with a small amount of anger.

"I have other restrictions too." Jiraiya chuckled when Naruto gave him his most heated glare which looked more cute then threatening.

"You know that variant of the Kage-Bunshin you use? The one where you reinforce your clones with chakra to take more hits, the super Kage-Bunshin was what you called it right? Well I don't you using that anymore either Unless!" Jiraiya said loudly when he saw that Naruto was about to object

"Its an absolute emergency." the Sannin finished. The last bit of his sentence was enough for Naruto not to argue but it wasn't enough to erase the scowl on his face.

Naruto's eyes widened when he realized something. "Wait a minute! How did you know about my super Kage-Bunshin. I only showed it to the rest of the guys and fought with it against Neji once." Naruto asked suspiciously. Jiraiya shrugged

"I might've spied on you a little" he said casually.

"But I didn't even see you!" Jiraiya snorted in response

"Kid I'm Konoha's most accomplished spymaster. Ever! I could spy on anyone from the Hyuga to the Hokage herself, so don't insult me. Its not like you were going to be able to sense my presence."

"What kind of sensei spies on their students!" Naruto exclaimed.

Jiraiya rolled his eyes "Naruto that's not the point. The point is that those Jutsu's are elemental Jutsu's which already take a good amount of chakra, not to mention I can already tell that none of those attacks you used you had an affinity towards."

"Affinity?" Naruto asked confused, but the Sannin just ignored him and continued. "Combined with your horrid control, and sloppy executions all result in not only being dangerous to yourself and your ninja career but to your friends as well."

Naruto winced visibly at the last part, he hadn't ever taken account that his friends might somehow get hurt by his Jutsu's. he had already known that his Jutsu's were not very well controlled after all he was the one who had sought out the Sannin for help. But he didn't think it would've been bad enough to endanger his friends.

Jiraiya felt a little bad when he saw the pain in Naruto's eyes after the information had finally hit him, "look, its not like you'll never get to use them, its just your knowledge and ability in the fundamentals is not what it should be, and you should be increasing those instead of your Jutsu list" he soothed.

"Ok Ero-Sennin" Naruto muttered. Jiraiya stood up and wiped the grass and twigs off his pants, he offered a hand to Naruto who took it. The Sannin hoisted the young blonde to his feet and ruffled his hair affectionately.

"Come on Naruto, since I cant train you fully I'm just going to give you some pointers, so take notes" Jiraiya instructed, Naruto brightened and nodded vigorously.

"But first." Jiraiya began grinning lecherously "Lets go somewhere a little more comfortable." with that statement the student and apprentice leaped into the trees speeding towards the white haired Sennin's favorite destination.

When they arrived there Jiraiya was happy to realize that many different kinds of women were already frolicking about in the hot springs.

Wet…

Soaking…

Playing…

A bit of drool escaped his mouth, he quickly jumped in a nearby bush to hide himself with Naruto following. "Ero-Sennin we're here for you to give me advice about my ninja abilities right?" he whispered. Jiraiya muttered something distractedly before taking out his special binoculars and clearing his throat.

"Ahem! First thing I'm going to point out to you Is your Taijutsu, which has improved greatly since before, another good point is that your speed and overall physical conditioning has also improved because of your rigorous training." Jiraiya said, the Sannin took a moment to giggle to himself before continuing.

"Even though your Taijutsu has improved, I still want you doing your exercises wherever you'll be, just make sure you don't push yourself too hard." Naruto nodded, mentally cataloguing everything his sensei was telling him.

Time past by rapidly as Jiraiya continued to instruct his student, taking occasional moments to admire the women below him. The Sannin talked to him about everything he noticed and needed to work on while on the mission. His Taijutsu, his Ninjutsu. He had outright told Naruto to give up on Genjutsu because for one thing Naruto wouldn't be able to pull off a decent Genjutsu if his life depended on it and second, it was basically laughable that someone like Naruto trying to win a battle through illusions. The Sannin had taken a moment or two to laugh at the image of a struggling Naruto trying to pull of a Genjutsu. Naruto however wasn't amused, he had protested his lack of Genjutsu abilities by telling the older shinobi of his Harem Jutsu and how he had used Henge impeccably(in his opinion) against Kiba during the Chunin exams. Jiraiya had quickly crushed his argument, telling the blonde Genin that doing the Henge was ridiculously easy, and not only that, Naruto had sometimes failed at doing those.

At this point Naruto had not been a happy shinobi, as he continued to listen to the elder shinobi mentally cataloguing everything had not been enough when Jiraiya continued to list his faults and how he could improve on them. Naruto had to eventually take out a small scroll because he doubted he would remember everything. He had scowled as he wrote, sometimes ripping the paper he was writing on due to excessive force on the pencil( I don't know if the Naruto world has pencils or not…),he had been irritated to no end, and Jiraiya's constant giggles and comments of 'that's right baby' had not helped in the slightest. He had thought he was improving as a ninja, no he KNEW he was improving as a ninja but the list of things he had to work on was ridiculous, at this rate he would make Hokage by the time he was 70 years old, and he did not want to be Jiji's age by the time he took the hat. Jiraiya had finally taken time out of his precious activity to notice Naruto's less than cheerful attitude and sighed as he watched Naruto write down things while muttering curses at his name.

"Naruto, I know how you feel trust me." Jiraiya said remembering all his failures when it came to Orochimaru "If you know where to improve then you can take action and improve yourself, so don't let it get you down." Jiraiya soothed taking the scroll from Naruto rolling it up then handing it back.

"Alright I think that's enough for today." the Sannin looked to the sky noticing the moon was up and how late it was, he turned back to Naruto.

"Naruto go home and get some sleep, I want you to be ready for tomorrow, and make sure to tell me all about the mission when you come back." Jiraiya said, he ruffled Naruto's head again then took off in some random direction leaving Naruto alone.

Naruto took a look at the scroll that held all his faults and took a long deep breath, 'no one said becoming Hokage was going to be easy right?' with that thought Naruto jumped towards the direction of his apartment.

Naruto heaved his back pack full of his supplies on to his back with a huge shit eating grin on his face. Today was the day of the mission, he could barely keep his excitement in check. In fact he had been smiling so much his face had started to hurt. Naruto had smiled during his morning routine consisting of brushing his teeth, and a shower. He had smiled while rechecking his supplies and rations, he just couldn't stop smiling! When he was certain he was done Naruto sped out of his apartment towards the Hokage monument making sure to lock the door on his way out.

Naruto practically bulldozed his way into the mission office startling several Chunin who were working, he had expected to be the first one there but to his surprise everyone else was too ,they were dressed in their usual shinobi attire with backpacks on ready to head out. apparently he hadn't been the only one unable to quell his excitement, all of his comrades had smiles on too. After exchanging greetings they took their place in front of the Hokage side by side waiting for her to say something, all signs of amusement and friendly banter were gone as they knew that it was time to take things seriously. Tsunade put both her elbows on her desk and laced her fingers together.

"Since you all seem so excited about today, I wont make you guys wait any longer." Tsunade nodded to a nearby Chunin and the shinobi opened the door where the clients were kept.

Naruto's eyes widened when he saw the person who walked into the room, the long purple hair, the regal white robes, the heart shaped face, he pointed at the woman as if accusing her of something "Aaahhh its rude ramen lady! She's the same person as pretty princess in the picture lady." the woman just scowled at him and said nothing, she looked extremely irritated though.

"Naruto!" Tsunade scolded, "I am sorry Tali-san, Naruto is one of my most talented Genin, but he can be a bit impulsive at times." Tsunade said apologizing, the woman completely ignored the Hokage sparking Naruto's anger "Hey rude ramen lady didn't you hear the Hokage talking to you?"

The woman finally seemed like she was going to open her mouth and say something when a voice interrupted "Lady Yukie please don't leave our presence so readily, remember it is our duty to protect you." Naruto and the other 4 teens turned around to see two men clad in red and black samurai armor carrying sheathed swords at their waist, Naruto stared at them, they were complete opposites of each other, the first one was short and modest looking with wide brown eyes and had a good-natured smile on his face, his hair was short and a dull shade of faded black, even with the bulky samurai armor he had on him, you could tell he had a skinny frame. The man next to him however was tall he easily stood over 6ft 2 in and his mere presence made Naruto's insecurities instantly flare up just like Sasuke did.

The man had long dark raven black hair that fell to his shoulders and framed his face beautifully, he had a chiseled jaw and his frame fit perfectly into the armor emphasizing his obviously well built physic. The short one walked in front of the 5 teens and bowed his head really low

"h-hello my name is Harima Kentarou, I apologize on behalf of our princess Shinobi-dono." The samurai now known as Harima Kentarou said, for some odd reason Naruto instantly liked this guy. Harima was about to continue but the tallest samurai's deep voice cut through the air.

"Kentarou! You are an elite guard of the princess don't bow your head, it is a disgrace." Harima visibly winced at the man's tone and straightened hastily. The Sasuke-look alike approached them and examined them each carefully, his eyes going over each of them, the man's piercing stare finally stopped at Naruto's blue ones and the room became slightly tense as they stared each down ( well Naruto stared up but you know what I mean…) there was a long moment of silence, then it happened, in one swift motion the man had unsheathed his sword so fast that most people in the room couldn't follow except for a select few, the sword moved in an upwards slash, instead of the sword meeting flesh there was a clang of metal. Naruto had reached in his pouch just in time to get a kunai and defend himself from the deadly strike.

Naruto and his attacker continued to stare challengingly in each other's eyes over their respective weapons. The optical battle seemed to last forever before the man nodded slightly and pulled back sheathing his sword, Naruto however had not put his kunai back, he hadn't liked the man when he first met him, and that attack left him untrustworthy in Naruto's mind.

The man put out a hand for Naruto, who took it hesitantly

"My name is Aso Kenji." he said

"Uzumaki Naruto" the blonde replied. The man now identified as Aso Kenji left to stand beside the princess who immediately became red in the face making Naruto think that she may have caught the same disease as Hinata from her stay in Konoha. The other samurai went and did the same only to be shoved away slightly. For some odd reason Naruto felt like the scene was familiar to him. The blonde Genin didn't get to dwell on the thought due to Tsunade's commanding voice.

"Genin Uzumaki Naruto!" Naruto grinned.

"Genin Inuzuka Kiba!" Kiba smiled and wiped his nose.

"Genin Akimichi Chouji!" Chouji straightened up

"Genin Hyuga Neji!" Neji smirked

"And Squad leader Chunin Nara Shikamaru!" Shikamaru nodded.

"You are to escort the client Tali Yukie to her home in Takeshi village, I expect this mission to be carried out to the best of all of your abilities, and to be completed to without fail, do you understand me!"

Tsunade smiled when she saw an inner fire light up in their eyes, she may have hated the job more then anything else, but it was for moments like these that gave her more than enough reason to continue.

"Hai Hokage-Sama!"

Break

In a maze like lair, dark walls with strange patterns on them, only illuminated by the occasionally flaming torch, heavy breathing could be heard.

"Kabuto…Kabuto! Get in here!" Orochimaru yelled, the snake like man glared when his subordinate came in.

"Hai Orochimaru-Sama, what can I do for you?" Kabuto asked.

"In the future" Orochimaru said wheezing. "It would do you well to respond to me immediately."

"Hai Orochimaru-Sama, It wont happen again." Kabuto said

"Good. How is Sasuke-kun doing? I take it he's responding to his training well kukuku." Orochimaru said, using his long tongue to lick himself briefly at the thought of entering Sasuke's body ( Lol that came out weird, but I'm not changing it -_-)

Kabuto smiled "Yes quite well, so well in fact that he's beaten several of your more violent experiments who had tried to approach him in the lair."

"Very well, is there anything from the spy network that should interest me?"

"Just a few things Orochimaru Sama. Movement from Jiraiya was expected to happen soon as he usually never stays in Konoha for long, but it seems that he is still in the village training the Kyubi Jinchuuriki." Kabuto informed.

"Kukuku it seems our old buffoon of a friend has found a new apprentice to play ninja with. anything else?" Orochimaru asked.

"Recently there has been movement from Gorou regarding the assignment you gave to him." Orochimaru looked genuinely interested now "oh you think he may have found something?"

"I don't know Orochimaru-Sama, I couldn't get anything else other than that." Kabuto responded.

Orochimaru thought for a moment before he chuckled sinisterly "If he did find something, then it would be just like that lumbering oaf to abandon any sense of discretion and resort to full front assaults."

The Third of the Sannin, wielder of the snake contract, and Konoha's most dangerous missing-nin stood up and walked towards the entrance knowing his right hand man was following. "Have someone take care of the lair for us while we're gone, also tell Sasuke-Kun to get ready, children need to go outside and play every once in a while."

"Should I tell him where were going Orochimaru-Sama" Kabuto inquired\

"Just tell him were going to pay our friend a visit, remind me again where he was stationed Kabuto?"

Kabuto smiled "Near Takeshi village."

Omake

"Happy Birthday to you!" Naruto and the rest of the Retriever's sang ( most of them anyway) and clapped as they watched Konohamaru blow out the candles on his birthday cake with the rest of the Konohamaru corps, Udon and Moegi helping him. Naruto and the squad had been training when the blonde had suddenly remembered that it was Konohamaru's birthday today, he had informed the rest of his squad and had asked them to come along stating the more the merrier. When they arrived Konohamaru hadn't minded the extra company at all, and had taken the opportunity to tell many stories of his Naruto-Nii or boss to the unwilling ears of the rest of the Retrievers. The party had gone very smoothly and before they knew it the cake was being ready to be cut while they sang the birthday tune. It would have been a very happy memory for the individuals present…if not for what happened next.

Bang!

Everyone turned when they heard the sound of the door being slammed opened with an excessive amount of force. The retriever's were met with the sight of…Ino? But it wasn't the usual dolled up Ino, the one with the spunky attitude and the ridiculous amount confidence in her looks that bordered narcissism. No, the girl in front of them was dirty and messy, and worst of all, she was angry, Really angry! Shikamaru and Chouji looked the most frightened with good reason as she most of her animosity was obviously being directed at them.

"So this is where you were!" she glared at the three kids who were shaking in fear. "You were having a party with your COOL! NEW! FRIENDS!" she spat loudly.

"Yamanaka-san it would be in your best interest to leave this minute, you do not seem to be in your right mind." Neji suggested

"Screw you Hyuga! What? Am I not good enough to hang with anymore! I'm not good enough because you guys have your COOL! NEW! FRIENDS!" she yelled pointing accusingly at everyone. Neji's eyes twitched at her words but he said nothing.

"L-listen Ino you got to calm down" Shikamaru stuttered out. The blonde female ignored him however as she swayed in, her footsteps extremely unsteady, it was only then that they realized the nearly empty bottle she had in her hand, she was drunk!

"Screw you Shikamaru!" she screamed her voice beginning to slur as more and more time passed by. She finally turned to Chouji who froze instantly "And what about you, huh! You left me too!"

"N-no I didn't" Chouji said shaking his head in denial, but she ignored him too, the blonde girl was bordering hysterical by this point, and the Konohamaru corps had taken refuge behind Naruto as the crazy female went on a rampage.

"No one cares about Ino anymore, She's all alone while you all have parties, and learn awesome Jutsu's and Ino Is left alone because you all are hanging out with your COOL! NEW! FRIENDS!" she yelled, bits of spittle hitting their faces, she gave Naruto a middle finger as she finished.

"Naruto-Nii what's wrong with her, is she possessed?" Konohamaru asked, his voice quaking in fear. Immediately Ino rounded on Konohamaru.

"What did you say to me you little Bitch!" Ino slammed the end of her bottle against the wall making a make-shift weapon out of the jagged edges. "Ill cut you!" Naruto immediately knew that she had to be stopped

"Guys stop her already" he commanded, the other teens in the room quickly spread out and tried to subdue her. Kiba rushed in from behind hoping to catch her by surprise. Unfortunately for the dog loving Genin it was not meant to be, with lightening fast speed Ino had turned around and unleashed a devastating kick to the worst possible area…right between his legs. Kiba let out an unearthly scream of sheer and utter pain immediately going down, his eyes rolling into the back of his head. Every male automatically cradled their own packages when they say the one hit move.

After offering a silent prayer for his fallen friend Naruto and the rest of the still functioning Retriever's immediately rushed her together this time, hopefully avoiding to be in Kiba's situation.

It wasn't easy, the blonde girl proved to be incredibly strong, escaping from their grip several times, the drunk girl had managed to run all around the house smashing random things and cursing their names while yelling out 'COOL! NEW! FRIENDS!'

After a long and harshly fought battle that left them all injured and breathing heavily, Shikamaru had finally managed to catch her in a Shadow bind and Chouji had taken the opportunity to knock her out.

Now the 5 friends and teammates sat on the front door of the Sarutobi compound watching the retreating form of Inoichi Yamanaka taking his daughter home in his arms. Naruto, Shikamaru, Chouji, and Neji had so many bruises and lumps on their faces that they were almost unrecognizable, while Kiba laid beside them unconscious with drool escaping from his mouth and twitching sporadically.

"Guys" Naruto said as the wind blew, there was a shocked silence between them

"What just happened?"

i already have chapter 7-9 written and by this time they are in the village, now im going to warn everyone right now, when they get to takeshi village they will be going through alot of things and jumpstart their journey for several reasons that i will reveal in time. next chapter will be put up as soon as i feel like it, oh and tell me if anyone would be interested in listening to my podcast. yeah thats right im going to make a podcast =). oh and also Naruto: hangover will probably uploaded soon if people are still interested, i like writing that story because i can do practically anything i want.