okay sorry for the shortness...

my mom is limiting me on

the computer!! i hate stupid

curphiews!!!

heres the story!!!

disclaimer: i dont OWN MAXIMUM RIDE!!!!

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Chapter 5

Max's POV

As I woke up I looked at the clock and it read 11:45. Oh my gosh….. I had never slept that late since, well, since never. I jumped out of the hotel bed and I realized that fang wasn't there.

Oh my gosh, again, where did he go what if the erasers came and took him or what if he died or what if he got up in the middle of the night to get water then he slipped and fell and di.. I quickly shut myself up because I realized I was starting to sound like nudge.

I glanced over to the couch by the television and sure enough there was fang laying strewn over the tiny couch.

I walked over to him and kissed his cheek and said, "wake up fang, its 11:45." His eyes snapped open before I even finished my sentence. "Really??" he asked slightly confused. "umm, yea…"

I answered. I tried to pull him up off the couch , but he looked at me like I was crazy, and said, "GET off OF me, NOW!" "Jeez," I said and quickly looked away. I knew his eyes were burning a hole in my back as I walked out of the room.

"I love you fang," I said as I stood at the doorway to nudge. "yea whatever."

He replied. What the Heck was up with?!? When I looked at the door it was slightly open. I inspected it and it looked like there were claw marks next to the door handle on the outside.

What the… then when I saw the lock on the outside of the door it was completely destroyed.

When I was in the hall and closed the door behind me I tried to open the door again and it opened with ease.

It looked like something got to it… kind of like an eraser, but different because I knew those were retired, and I knew that this defiantly didn't look like flyboys claws.

What happened. When I went back in the room, I noticed fang was watching… SPONGE BOB SQUARE PANTS?!?!?! He's told me a million and one times that he absolutely hates that show!!

What did he do to his hair?!?

It looked way too many shades too light. It looked, like, brown.

This just keeps getting … weirder. What the heck was going on?!?!?

Real Fang's POV

Where am I?

I looked around the room and I saw I was on a bed, in a dark room the size of a closet.

The last thing I remember was being taken away from max's side and I saw a clone of me coming in my place.

The people that were taking me away were like a mix of a lion and a human… with wings.

I got up and banged on the door. I needed to get out of here fast because I knew Max would start to get pissed off at clone fang or Fang II. i remember how i got pissed of at Max II.

I screamed as loud as I could.

When I looked up I saw a skylight window… how dumb could these people get?!?!?

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-UPDRAFT