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The Andilite bandit aren't Andilites, they're humans. The Yeerks know they're name, they're school, even they're blood type, they were right under the Yeerk noses the whole time: Jake, Marco, Rachel, Cassie.

My brother and my cousin and they're friends are the only chance Earth's got.

"Mom? Dad? You here?" I yelled as I entered the room.

"Tom?" my dad answered.

"Is mom here?"

"Yes," my mom called.

"Good, get them!" the Yeerk yelled to the Hork-bajir behind him.

NOOO!

They fought against the might of the aliens, but in vain.

"Put 'em in the van!" I commanded.

"Why Tom?" my dad gasped.

"Tom isn't here any more fool welcome to the Yeerk e... NOO! LEAVE MY PARENTS ALONE YOU SCUM!...mpire.

"Tom?" my mom asked.

"I'm so sor... Get them in the vehicle!"

NOOO! LEAVE THEM ALONE!!!

The Hork-bajir had knocked my parents out cold and placed they're limp bodies into the van.

We drove them to the hidden Kandrona facility.

NO! NOT HERE! YOU'LL HAVE TO KILL ME!!!

The Hork-bajir carried out my parents.

"Put they're heads in the pool!" the Yeerk commanded.

NOOO!

They my parents were dunked head first into the pool.

NOOOOOOOOO!

They Hork-bajir helped them up.

"I have complete control of my host," my parents said in unison.

"Now let's pay Jake a visits," my mouth laughed.

We reached my house in time to see Jake looking with anger.

We got out.

"Filthy humans," my mom cried.

"Mom, dad, Tom, this is for you, keep fighting," Jake wept as he morphed tiger and ran.

JAKE! I PROMISED TO FIGHT FOREVER AND I WILL!!!