Jacob's POV

We were swimming as fast as we could, not really sure if the factory we were going to was the right place. But then we all heard it...

"MUMMMM! DAADD! JAKKKKKEEE" Nessie's tortured plea screeched and we heard more strangled screams after that.

I don't think any words could really describe the unbelievable pain I felt, hearing her scream; the way I felt at that present moment just made me want die. We all started swimming a lot faster. We could now tell where she was, in the factory Edward had described. I tried not to let my thoughts interfere with the focus of saving her, I couldn't think about what those murderous bloodsuckers were doing to her.

I heard more screams; each one like a stab in my heart. We were only a minute away now. Edward could hear her thoughts now. He snarled as he swam.

"They're giving her the illusion of being burnt alive..." He said with a lot of struggle "She's really believing it... she thinks we are going to die as well" If vampires could cry I'm pretty sure he would be now. But we all had to focus. I'd noticed that some more wolves and vampires were following us even though Edward told them not to.

Instead of just Jasper, Emmet, Carlisle and Bella, there was blondie and Seth and Sam. We finally arrived at the island and the factory was only a mile or two away. Edward and I were running the fastest and when we got there we saw a huge area filled only with a chair with Nessie's still body, lying across it. The bloodsuckers were nowhere in sight. Her heart was beating, but barely...

Were we too late?

Renesmee's POV

I felt as if I were floating. I floated up into the sky among the heavens, floated right above the moon, the stars, past the planets, I felt content.

Was I dead?

I'm not sure. I think there was a chance I was alive, because as I'm floating; higher and higher... there was something that was keeping me to earth. Like there was a string attached to me and if I got too high, the string would stop me from floating any higher. But the string was old and weak and I wasn't sure if it was strong enough to keep me from going any higher. I was scared. I wanted someone to pull the string down, so I could go back to earth. But was the string strong enough to be pulled on? I waited to see what would happen, but nothing did. I just kept on rising higher. Was there any reason for me to go to earth, anyway? I couldn't quite remember.

Then I remember my mother, and my father. The reason I was here... alive (if I was). My parents were the ones who always looked out for me; I don't think they could live without me... what would happen if they found me dead? They probably couldn't live with themselves. I didn't want to happen and promised myself I wouldn't let it. The string got stronger.

My loving aunts and uncles; Alice and Jasper, Rose, Carlisle, Esme and Emmett! I loved them so much, they were my best friends, and each day I spent with them I got closer to them and learnt more about them. I wasn't ready to leave them yet. The string got shorter.

And then Jacob. How could I forget him? The way he looked at me... as if I was the only thing that mattered in this life, the only reason he kept on breathing. I remember the good times we had, laughing and playing together. And when he told me that he loved me and he kissed me and at that moment everything was okay. I couldn't live without him and he couldn't live without me. I loved him. The string started pulling me back down to earth...


Short and sweet! Im exited to see how this turns out.

I'm a bit dissapointed in this story... I dont know why. I think I made it too short.

I might make a new one, with similar events but more well thought out :)