Hi guys! I know i keep disappearing but dont worry my fic wont go anywhere! Ivy, wolfsong is a wolf, not a cat. Her backstory will be explained soon (shes gonna be an important character!) And thanks for the advice I-really-hope-not but i dont know what you mean by prettylake isnt a good name. Also Ah what is a trollfic? Pls explain. :( Anyway read and enjoy!

Petalpaw thought and thought and thought about the legend, but still couldnt really piece anything together. "Well, maybe I'll get it figured out at some point!" she mewed. It was night and she was tired! So she went to sleep.

When she opened her eyes, she was on a pale gray log floating in a giant ocean of water! The night sky above was empty and starless aside from two lone stars.

All of a sudden, she heard a quiet voice! "Hello..."

"Huh? Who's there!?" said Petalpaw, quickly standing up and trying to balance on the log. She turned around and saw a small white cat with a blue feather on her head and a large black cat with a dark red feather on his head.

"My name is Yin. This is my brother, Yang."

Petalpaw gasped! "Like... The legend?'

The two cats nodded. Yin continued. "We are here to tell you an important prophecy. The thousand year kin will bring the new dawn, and dreams will light the way once again. The cats of the flaming storm will return, but beware of the one of Crimson Blood."

"What does that mean?" she asked but before she could get an answer the two cats were gone! And suddenly dark clouds surrounded her! When she opened her eyes she saw a bunch of shadowy cats in a clearing! And there was a CORPSE!

Petalpaw woke up in fear and it was morning. She saw another apprentice Rubypaw standing above her looking anrgy and disappointed. "Ugh Petalpaw get up already! All the apprentices are gonna be training and youre still alseep!"

Petalpaw gasped! "Oh no! Sorry!" She dashed out of camp and into the training clearing. There she saw all of the other apprentices and their mentors waiting for her! "Sorry im late! I hope i didnt miss anything..."

Dragonstar said "Because of all youve done for us already i will let it slide but dont let it happen again." Petalpaw dipped her head in understanding.

Prismpaw went over to her. "Dont worry you didnt miss anything! Other than Redpaw and Razorpaw being meanies..."

"Maybe redpaw doesnt want to be mean and is just being pressured to be mean? Considering his mentor is clawfang..." Said Sugarpaw.

"Enough gossip, lets get onto training! They said we were going to get batlle training because of Demonicclan being hostile!" Interjescted Rubypaw.

Bloodpaw said "Well im excited for that!"

Sugarpaw turned to petalpaw and whispered "Does Bloodpaw make you fell... worried? Hes scary sometimes and love fighting a lot..."

Petalpwa didint respond. She saw Bloodpaw glaring at them! But the training went on without anything bad happening... until something DID happen!

Glasscresent perked up and looked around. "I smell...DemonicClan!Theyre tresspassing!"

"Then we have to attack them before they can attack us!" said Bloodpaw.

"No, Bloodpaw," said Midnightsparkle. "We have to scope out the situation before we act."

"YEah shes right u know!" Said petalpaw.

Bloodpaw grumbled and sat down.

"Apprentices stay back! Theyre heading towards us and i can scent bloodlust!" Said oceanwav. He turned to look at his apprentice. "You too Razorpaw!"

A DEMONICCLAN PATROL JUMPED OUT, THEIR CLAWS UNSHEATHED! THEY STARTED ATTACING! AND PRISMPAW WAS ROOTED TO THE GROUND WITH FEAR!

One demonicclan cat went over to her and siad "Whats a little kit doing at a battle? Someone should really send you home to mam." smugly.

Prismpaw said "I-i-i-i-i-i-i... Im not a kit and i-i-i will s-s-s-stop you!" She jumped at the warrior but she was flung off with no effort! The warrior grabbed her by the throat and DANGLED HER OFF A NEARBY CLIFF!

Glasscresent ran over. "Put her down right now! Or i will not hesitate to attack you!"

The warrior chuckled. "I could put her down over here!" He dangled PRismpaw over the cliff again!

"An honorable warrior does not need to kil to win battles! Especialy not young apprentices!"

Suddenly... MIDNIGHTSPARKLE JUMPED AT THE DEMONICCLAN CAAT! HE DROPPED PRISMPAW AND BOTHMIDNIGHTSPARKLE AND HIM FELL OFF THE CLIFF!

"MIDNIGHTSPARKLE! NO!"

Uh oh a cliffhanger! Anyway please give constructive critisim and explain what the problem is with the fic! Ok bye :)