I JUST posted chapter 3 of Talent Show AND Phantom Cars, I just really want reviews

ONTO THE CHAPTER!

~BOOM! TIMESKIP 5 MONTHS LATER!~

Danny slowly stalked towards the young rabbit. Tensing his leg muscles, he leaped right on top of the furry animal. It went limp as Danny bit its neck. He buried it like he had done with other prey that day, as he was on his final assessment to become a warrior. He had been training for months, waiting for this day.

Brambleclaw stepped out from the cover of the bushes "You have done well, Phantompaw. I think it's time that you became a warrior." He gave a warm expression, glad that his apprentice had reached his goal.

The two started to make their way back to camp, picking up all of the prey Danny had caught during his test. The clan welcomed them back with congratulations for the black tom. Firestar later called for a clan meeting.

"I, Firestar, leader of Thunderclan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. He has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in his turn." Firestar looked down upon the black and white cat "Phantompaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your clan, even at the cost of your life?"

"I do!"

"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Phantompaw, from this moment on you will be known as Phantomheart! StarClan honors your Strength and Bravery, and we welcome you as a full warrior of Thunderclan!"

Firestar rested his muzzle on the newly named warriors head. Phantomheart stepped forward a bit to lick his leaders shoulder.

"Phantomheart! Phantomheart!" Brambleclaw called out, the rest of the clan joining him.

~Later that night!~

Danny was on his silent vigil , thinking of the events in the past few months. Wolfkit, Cedarkit and Silverkit became apprentices, and the forest was full of prey that Greenleaf. With excitement in his eyes, he watched his first sunrise as a Warrior.

Brambleclaw came over to greet him "Hey Phantomheart, you know you can talk now right?"

"Thanks Brambleclaw. So now what should I do?" The newly named warrior asked.

"You should go to the fresh kill pile ,you deserve it. Then get some rest."

Danny smiled and nodded at this. Taking a rabbit from the fresh kill pile, he quickly ate the animal up, and padded into the warrior den for a well deserved cat nap (Sorry, had to).

Phantomheart woke yet again to find his friends and Clockwork in front of him.

"Hey Danny" The two said.

"How are you doing with clan life Danny? Or should we call you just Phantompaw for now?" The Goth asked.

"Well, not Phantompaw anymore. I finally became a warrior!" Danny joyfully said.

"Really!? What's your warrior name!" Tucker asked.

"I'm called Phantomheart now. I just got back from silent vigil, just taking a little nap." He said, letting out a yawn.

His head snapped up at Clockwork saying "You should probably wake up now Danny. There's something happening in camp."

The tom nodded "Yes Clockwork, see ya later guys!"

Clockwork pressed the button on his staff and sent the warrior back to camp.

Danny awoke with a start. He rushed out of the warrior den to see what was going on. It was a beautiful day at sunhigh. His head snapped to the side as he saw Wolfpaw rushing into the camp. She was panting and staggered over as Danny rushed to her.

"Wolfpaw? Are you okay?"

"No..." She said. "Berrynose... Berrynose is dead..."

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! CLIFFY!

Ok I am tired. Now I'm about to write chapter 4 of Phantom Cars. READ IT AND REVIEW PPL PLZ!

BloodBlossom88- Thanks BB!

Guest- That review made my day

Wolfwind97- Thank you Wolf! Hope you liked it!

Well that's it for today, I need to do my homework... *Looks at amount of words* Man not even 700? *Sigh* I'll do more next time...