Art is a…girl explanation time XD
While rereading my story I realize I have tons of typos and grammar mistake. I would like to say I'm sorry for that V.V. I do reread my stories but because I'm so eager for my readers to read I post it up way too quickly. Even with all the typos you guys can see the point. My grammar is off and would like to thank people for not flaming me about it. I'm sorry but I'm trying.
I would like everybody to know Yuki may seem Mary-sue but those who have read the second chapter know that she is seen as snow white. She is seen as beautiful, but if you remember snow white was seen as the fairest of them all so she has to be beautiful but I have given Yuki some negative trademarks such worrying about her age and beauty, can't communicate with people so well, hated by most girls for her look, and she has a quick temper (though it is comical). She is also smart but that is because has photographic memory, yes she can play must instrument and speak several languages and has graduated college at age 16 (a mistake I must say I'm going to alternate it through the story so be prepared). But Yuki can't cook, clean and do normal house work without messing up she has photographic memory but no matter how hard she tries can't do it. She will still try when some wants to compete with her. I know I took a big gamble on making her beautiful and of course smart but I can assure you there is a reason, she is snow white the fairest throughout the land but also the curliest, you will see Yuki's cruel side at times and watch her suffer with it. No she doesn't have a split personality that would be going over bored she is just trying to find out who she is. (If I say too much it would reveal the story to you ^.~). Why snow white as Yuki? You see I chose snow white for Yuki because I'll be making a chained story with fairytales, making them darker then how we normally read them and of course real curl people. You will learn all about when you read more. Oh yeah Yuki isn't perfect she is going to mess up a lot and she is going to say things you guys won't like they aren't my view of life they are just how she thinks. Oh yeah Yuki is going to change. Any question I'll give you guys the answer.
Now I'm going to give you guys the parts I foreshowed in to help you guys guess I have moments in my story where I foreshowed they are settle but important.
Chapter 1
2nd paragraph I gave you guys a hint that Yuki I'm going to have many more of that.
"and nature has no artist" for those really deep in religion Yuki is explaining her view on god in just that sentence for those who realized give yourself a pat on the back. Later on in the serious she is going to say the same thing but it will go more in depth.
"The painting" the one Deidara looked at with disgust…yep you guys guessed it Itachi drew it.
The man and his assent pay close attention to the random people that appear and disappear, I'll explain everything after chapter 7.
The old lady and the young girls are just talking about the Hunnutsuka's bad blood.
The whole flirt with Deidara and Yuki you guys can see what's going on.
As for Sasori's theory on her knowing the Kyuubi is just a theory. I have no idea if does or doesn't depending on how the story goes.
Chapter 2
Yuki was proven weak but still hard head does Itachi have an attraction to her no he Just finds her amusing.
The conversation from where Yuki is from…I'll tell you guys she is from an Island that speaks Latin originally but as she explained she is adopted once again when you read father in the story you will learn everything.
Itachi loosing amusement in the conversation him and Yuki were having is because Itachi knew the press was there.
I already explained the Dark Snow White to you guys.
There is a whole bunch of foreshowing in Sasori and Yuki's conversation if you guys can see it give yourself a pat on the back.
Chapter 3
The bus boy someone important.
The conversation with her brother you guys can guess. And Akito (hint hint wink wink)
Nothing important with her dance with Itachi and Deidara just getting the basic down.
The king's blood that was foreshowing what happens later in the chapter but also what happens later in the story.
Fairytale: Yuki doesn't see fairytales as happy endings because they don't have happy endings the ones she has been raise with. One she is snow white.
"The dark more twisted the story the more crimson the wine gets" Yuki is referring to guy that dies in the end of chapter but the basic of fairytales and of course she is referring to blood.
The rest in chapter 3 you guys can guess.
Chapter 4 the name change from their last to their first
Chapter 5
""Kozo?" Yuki scoffed staring at the dark haired boy". He is a villain a really bad villain but a villain none the less
"Please be careful when you're with him, make sure I'm always with around un," For the warning from Deidara I give thanks to sky girl from quizilla on this idea it helps adds to Yuki's guilt giving her more of a human emotion and it adds stress the story.
Yuki making a comment on Itachi smoking Yuki never seen Itachi smoke in front of her so she is surprised to see him smoke though he does smell like nicotine.
The name shift Yuki and Itachi did remember Yuki use to call him Uchiha even in her thoughts till now. Itachi now sees her as Yuki and gives her permission to see him as Itachi and call him that. In Japan its respect to call people by their last name, calling them by their first is sign of a close relationship? Again, this is another thing I'm not too sure about I just got this idea from reading manga and I could be wrong. Another idea that you could get from this is the business partners or (something another) they call each by their last name. Though technically Yuki because she doesn't have as much power Itachi should still call him Itachi, but I'm not too sure on this either on this. I'm only trying to show the Yuki and Itachi's change towards each other and the fact that they are more comfortable with each other then they appear. So yeah if you guys were wondering why Yuki was getting so excited when Itachi called her name I hope this explains it. Give yourself a pat on the back if any of you guys noticed the shift in name change.
Yuki teasing Itachi's for his name is basic foreshadowing of the chapter and Masashi Kishimoto's original purpose for the reason why Itachi's named Itachi. Weasels are bad luck in Japan so why name your child Itachi obvious foreshadowing? I think so
The house yeah it's a settle insight on how Itachi originally views the world but a very confusing view on how Yuki sees the world. Well it's one way how she views herself the house and how she reads stories with happy endings
Itachi ordering her meals is going to become repetitive…why? I have no idea…
Broken glass another hint that it could be an important character breaking the glass
Yeah, yeah Yuki and Itachi mocking each other
THE WHITE RABBIT clearly someone who is going to be important. Yuki's whole conversation on wonderland is important is important. It's skim on who Yuki truly is and on her past.
"Layla," Itachi's ex and Yuki's I guess you can say friend, yeah foreshadowing for chapter 6
The nursery rhyme of Pop goes the weasel…yeah I do have an addiction to adding nursery rhymes to my story. Nobody does it really and I have no idea why? So yeah that's a little tease on Itachi's part foreshadowing into Yuki's mind by the way.
The murder that follows Yuki will soon appear I know who I'm going to kill
Oh yeah I'm changing the percent Yuki wants it's to unrealistic for her to ask so much and a drug lord to agree. So that's a mistake I have made reading my story I have made a lot of mistakes and will try to fix them.
So yea chapter 5 was overrun with foreshadowing sorry I just really like foreshadowing
Chapter 6
""Sasuke!" A red haired girl and a blond haired girl screamed." Why I don't have Sakura in this scene? I hate her and have plans for her. –Smiles-
Yeah no foreshadowing chapter 5 hogged it all. There you have it folk's explanation on art it is a girl.
Truth be told everyone I'm kind of getting depressed with the lack or reviews…I would really like to hear your guys thoughts on my story. So please I beg you review I would really like that as an author.
Miko Yami
All of you guys waiting for the really mystery to start. I have the idea of you the first victim is and how he/she is going to Die I just have to fit it into the story. Please my limited fan please review and tell me what you think, thank you Silverwolf for your reviews I swear when I get the time I'll be back to reading your stories and reviewing (My fans should really read her work) along with Fanatsy Madline's work. Any way thank you fans who even made it this far reading my story. :}.
