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Chapter 6 : Birth of the Vermillion Flash


-in Naruto's/Tayuya's apartment-

Tayuya just finished eating an instant noodles she created for herself. She's now on her way to take a bath, when suddenly...

'Hey kid, can you enter the mindscape for a bit? It's about the Flying Raijin training' said Minato.

'Sure. Hold on lemme just sit down on my bed so my body can get comfy while my soul or whatever is entering that place' thought Tayuya. She then walk toward her bed and sit down on the edge of it and proceed to perform a meditation, in order to focus her mind and entering the mindscape.

-inside Tayuya's mindscape-

Tayuya is now in the middle of her mindscape, still the same old giant hallway, covered with water from unknown origin. Suddenly, Minato shows up Infront of her, surprising her in the process.

"GAH! What the heck father!?" exclaimed Tayuya, as she's jumping backward.

"Haha, sorry about that. Anyway, I need to show you about something" said Minato, as he's extending his hand in the air. Suddenly, a scroll summoned on his palm, with a word "Flying Raijin" written on top of it.

"A scroll about the technique? You want me to read that?" asked Tayuya.

"Well, you need to know about the basics of it first before we can start the training" said Minato.

"Fine... I'll read it... hopefully it's not going to take me an entire night to read this, or I'll miss my sleeping time, which later on going to screw up my "body time" really badly" said Tayuya, as she take the scroll from Minato's hand.

-mini time skip-

"That's all? Really?" said Tayuya as she's seeing a huge empty space on the scroll.

"Unfortunately, it is. You see, I have tried to improve this technique even more, but I failed and instead I'm stuck with the basic of it, which is just teleporting to one place and another that's already marked by the user" explained Minato.

"Aaaand... you want me to improve this technique?" asked Tayuya.

"Yes, I want you to help me improving this technique, so when you use it you can also teleport to another place that you don't mark" said Minato.

"So, it's going to be "Body flicker Technique" but without the smokes and leaves and also make me able to teleport to the farthest place?" asked Tayuya.

"And much faster, correct!" said Minato.

"I'm in, now let's get to the basic first. It said in this scroll that I need to make my own mark before I can use it. Also if a mark already used by someone else, then I cannot use that mark to use the technique... that seems easy enough" said Tayuya as she's re-reading the book again.

"But our chakra are fused together, meaning that you can also use my marking" said Minato.

"Really? I didn't think about that... but what if you suddenly dissapear from my mindscape alongside with your chakra, meaning that I won't be able to use the same marking as yours anymore?" said Tayuya.

"That won't happen, the Nine Tails has agreed to give me some of his chakra every now and then, so I can stay with your for a very long time" said Minato.

"That's... good to hear, I guess. But how are you suppose to use his chakra? I mean, human chakra and Tailed Beast Chakra are completely different" said Tayuya.

"I'm not a human anymore, I'm basically a living chakra being, meaning I can use any chakra I can get. I could also absorb your chakra but I don't want you to run out of chakra out of sudden when you're in a middle of a mission. So I decided to ask the Nine Tails to share some of his chakra with me every now and then to keep me alive" explained Minato.

"Ohhhh, neat! So uh, did the Nine Tails ask something in return?" asked Tayuya.

"Nah, he didn't. All he said was "I can generate chakra easily so you can get all you want. Just don't take too much or I will be entering my sleep mode to regenerate chakra faster"" said Minato. Tayuya heard a loud snoring from behind her. She turn around and see a sleeping Nine Tails laying down on the ground. She then close her eyes halfway and look back at Minato.

"And you just took most of his chakra?" asked Tayuya.

"Hehe, yeah..." said Minato as he's rubbing his head. Tayuya then sighing to herself after hearing his reply.

"Let's just hope he doesn't sleep for an entire week, seeing that the next chapter my squad is going to get a mission" said Tayuya.

"Why are you so certain about it?" asked Minato.

"Because the author was planning to skip this chapter entirely and jump straight to the next part, but he decided to just scrap that idea and write this chapter as the new chapter 6, whilst the old one become chapter 7" said Tayuya.

"I see, talk about having moral conflict" said Minato.

"Now, enough fourth wall breaking, let's jump straight into the training" said Tayuya as she spawn a piece of paper and a brush out of thin air.

-mini time skip-

Tayuya has recreated Minato's Flying Raijin mark on the paper she just spawned, and now she sticking it to a regular Kunai handle.

"Wait a second... hey father" called Tayuya.

"Yes?" responded Minato.

"Why don't I just use your special kunai first before I use my own, see if your theory is true" said Tayuya.

"You sure about that? My Kunai is a lot heavier than a regular Kunai you know" said Minato.

"I'm sure, now give me you Kunai" demanded Tayuya. Minato then take a maple leaf shaped kunai out of his ninja pocket and lend it to Tayuya, which Tayuya grabs and lift easily. She then proceed to throw it to a wall near her.

"Now to focus my chakra on my entire body and think of teleporting to that Kunai..." said Tayuya softly, as she's imagining herself teleporting toward the Kunai she throwed. Shortly after, she got teleported to the Kunai's location.

"You did it on first try! bravo Tayuya!" praised Minato as he's clapping his hands.

"Well, at least now I know that your theory was true. Now to try it on my own Kunai..." said Tayuya. She then simply focus her chakra again and think of teleporting to the Kunai she left on the ground near Minato. Shortly after that, she got teleported back to Minato's side.

"Huh, that was easy" said Tayuya.

"Now that you've known the basic of it, let's start on improving it!" said Minato.

"How about if I rest first? I'm getting really tired..." said Tayuya.

"Uh... sure why not? When you're ready, talk to me and we'll start on the technique improvement!" said Minato.

"Cool, bye then" said Tayuya. She then dissapear from the mindscape, returning back to the reality, leaving Minato and a sleeping Light Kurama behind him.

-at Naruto's/Tayuya's apartment-

Tayuya then open her eyes slowly, and observe her surrounding carefully. She looked at the clock and notice that the time only moved 10 minutes from the first time she entered the mindscape.

"Wow, time sure goes slow out here when I'm inside my mindscape. I wonder why..." said Tayuya. She then stand up and proceed to the bathroom, cleaning herself up, and go straight to bed after that, marking the end of the chapter.

Sorry if it's kinda short, but as Tayuya said before I was actually didn't plan on this chapter, but after thinking about it twice, I decided to do it. Now if you excuse me, I need to write Sasuke's dialogue on the next chapter, ciao!


End of Chapter 6 remake