Wishesdreams: I am glad you like the characters as I am always worried that they are too far off. Don't worry I will clear everything up as the story progresses.
daithi4377: So I am going to answer all your reviews at once. So yes Harry is slightly weaker but he is still courageous to a fault. It is what I made his mortal fault. The two other headmasters don't play to large part in the story but I thought I should show that Dumbledore is not just completely believed and people do question him. Yes I also found great irony well writing Ron. His character though easy to hate on is rather complex and I hope I did him justice. The Neville and Charlie pairing is completely adorable but unfortunately they don't really come in until later. I am happy that you are happy with whom I am not killing and the two founders will come into play near the end. Remember Ron and Hermione threatened to kill Colin if they didn't do what they wanted or if they told anyone of their plans. Colin however found a loop whole when Seamus and Dean went to go and attack Harry. Ron and Hermione never said they couldn't show someone their plan as Colin did with Severus. Yes the plan Ron and Hermione had as punishment was taking away Colin; however Colin's attempt suicide was from depression and insecurities not because of Ron and Hermione. Draco was not allowed in the room because if a patient is being taken care of they do not want other people getting in the way. Draco as a dominant would be fussing over his mate distracting the healer. I am glad that you like the story and I hope you continue to read.
Padfootette: I am glad you liked it.
Kitty tokyo uzumaki: Your wish is granted
viridianaln9: don't worry Harry will be alright in the end
Kigen Dawn: Because it's not.
Warning: this chapter jumps between P.O.V because it was originally three shorted chapters, but I will clearly mark the changes in P.O.V so no worries.
Also the following characters will be/ or will stay alive:
- Regulus Arcturus Black
- Sirius Black
-Cedric Diggory
-Godric Gryffindor
- Salazar Slytherin
Background information:
Harry: is a water elf so emotions and high stress affect him in a very bad way; because he didn't not have a connection with his parents he is not able to bond with many people; it was only when he found his mate that he began to be able to cope with stress and negative emotions.
Draco: He is a dominate male Veela; who's family saves Harry with the help of the Diggory's.
Cedric: Hogwarts champion and Harry's adoptive brother. He is also a wood elf and has adopted Harry and helped him through his inheritance.
Seamus: Dominant Veela; mated with Dean and Colin.
Dean: Dominant Veela; Mated with Seamus and Colin.
Colin: Submissive light Fae; mated with Seamus and Dean.
Fred & George: Dragon inheritance. George is dominant and Fred is a submissive
Viktor: a submissive wood nymph who is being courted by George. He is rather self-conscious about being a submissive because his parents are always saying that he is a failure because of it.
Percy: Submissive dragon inheritance was to be mated to Oliver but medalling from his mother, Penelope, and Dumbledore prevented him from doing so. Will once again be mated to Oliver.
Oliver: Dominate wood elf who is going to be mated to Percy. Due to meddling from Dumbledore, Molly, and Penelope they were broken up.
Penelope: evil bitch who broke up Percy and Oliver.
Dumbledore: Was bonded to Grindelwald, and because he was the one to defeat him he has lost most of his mental capacity to grief. He is currently responsible for all the stress and abuse that has been placed on Harry.
Charlie: Dominate Dragon inheritance; will be mated to Neville.
Neville: Submissive day walker (Original Vampire).
Blaise Zabini: Demigod son of hades. His has a very intelligent nature and is very protective the ghosts of Hogwarts protects and guide him. Soul mate is Regulus Arcturus Black.
Regulus Arcturus Black: dark Phoenix. Was killed by Voldemort, but do to his Phoenix blood he was able to be reborn as only a natural death can kill him.
Sirius Black: Dark Phoenix like his brother. He is on the run because of Peter Pettigrew. He is hoping that he can clear his name so he can help protect Harry, his godson. He know that the Malfoys are good and is hoping that they can keep harry safe for the time being.
Godric Gryffindor: Mated to Salazar Slytherin and is Grim Reaper. Currently trapped in a prison of Dumbledore's creation with his mate. He is immortal.
Salazar Slytherin: Mated to Godric Gryffindor and is a Guardian Angel. He is currently trapped with his mate in prison of Dumbledore's creation. He is immortal.
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Summary: harry must deal with the tri-wizard tournament all well trying to make his bond with Draco stronger. DracoxHarry; SeamusxColinxDean; OliverxPercy, and many others. Dumbledore, Molly, Ron, Ginny, and Hermione bashing. Good Snape and Malfoy's.
Elven Hero
Chapter 6
Oliver's P.O.V
(one week after first task)
"Oh Percy," I whispered as Percy thrashed about in his sleep. He had been having nightmares since the first task, and the howlers did not help either. They had come from his mother, Clearwater, and surprisingly Albus Dumbledore himself. His mother was angry that he broke off the relationship with Clearwater to be with me, and she firmly believed that I had somehow brainwashed my sweet Percy into breaking things off with the bitch. The Bitch, Clearwater, just degraded him and reinforced any negative thing she had ever told Percy. Dumbledore was the most shocking, he stated that Percy must judge fair and not give Harry any special treatment. It sickened me that Dumbledore had plans for not only Harry, but for Percy as well. I know that he was the one that told Clearwater about me and Percy as it was the only way she could have found out, after all the girl was rather dense when it came to things like this. She was more book smart then she was street smart. Looking back down at my mate I vowed to bring down Dumbledore so we could have a bit of peace in our lives.
Colin's P.O.V
"Dean, Colin! Guess what!" Seamus shouted as he came sprinting towards Dean, Lee, and myself. We had been talking about Harry's performance and the first task in general, but Seamus' shouting caused us all to freeze and look at him.
"What's wrong?" Dean asked as Seamus plopped down beside me and placed his hand on my knee; causing a blush to creep onto my face.
"Well I was talking with Viktor Krum and he mentioned that he had Nymph blood, but that's not the interesting part. He mentioned that his blood called to one of the twins!" Seamus stated rather excited, and all while he was talking Lee's face kept getting redder.
"Well they won't give him the time of day!" Lee spat and stormed out of the common room.
Draco's P.O.V
"Dray!" Harry shouted as I pulled him into a hug; according to our family healer the stress and fear had been far too much for his system to handle causing him to pass out. In response his magic locked him in a sort of stasis that he had just woken up from.
"Hello my beautiful light heart," I whispered softly and placed a kiss on Harry's ear.
Fred's P.O.V
I laughed as my twin tackled Charlie. It was the first time since we found out what Percy has been through that they acted like children and it was truly a nice sight.
"FRED!" Lee shouted as he came running towards me, his face as red as my hair, "Why the fuck are you talking to Viktor Krum!"
"E-excuse me?" I stuttered as Charlie and George stopped wrestling.
"You heard me I don't want you near that ass again!" Lee shouted grabbing my shoulders forcefully, "if I see you talking to that bastard again I swear I will lock you in our room and never let you out again!"
"W-what are you talking about Lee?" I asked as more pressure was applied to my shoulders causing me to wince and begin to struggle.
"Let him go!" Charlie shouted as he marched over to us and ripped Lee away from me. I sank to the ground as George wrapped his arms around me and whispered calming words as I began to sob. "What the hell is your problem?"
"MY problem! What's Fred's problem he is the one fucking the bloody enemy!" Shouted Lee giving me a scathing look.
Charlie's P.O.V
I was appalled by this kid's behavior. According to the twins Lee was one of the nicest people in Hogwarts, but here he is calling my baby brother a slut. The heart broken expression on Fred's face didn't make me feel any better about the kid. Out of our whole family we only had two male submissives, Fred and Percy, and we were very protective of them.
"Stuff is Jordan!" George growled and pulled Fred closer to him, "you have no right to talk to him like that."
"I am well within my rights to talk to him however I want to isn't that right slut!" Jordan shouted causing Fred to flinch.
"ENOUGH!" I roared lifted Lee Jordan off the ground. That was the last straw calling my brother a slut, "You will shut up and listen! I will not just sit here and allow you to insult my baby brother anymore. All he has done is be your friend and yet you belittle him and call him derogatory names, this is not going to flying with me!"
"B-But he is fraternizing with the enemy!" Lee cried out as he finally broke free from my grip and pushed past George and stalked away. This left George any myself with a crying submissive.
"Let's get him to Percy."
Percy's P.O.V
I laughed as Oliver, once again, throw out his toast. He was trying to make me a nice light lunch but it seemed that every time he went near the simple appliances in the kitchenette they just seemed to stop working and spaz out.
"Percy!" Charlie yelled as he and George came running into the apartment, with Fred in Charlie's arms, causing both Oliver and myself to jump.
"What's wrong?" I asked in a panic as Fred was set down on the couch, instantly I was at his side pulling him into a hug, "What happened to Fred?"
"Lee said some pretty nasty things to him and we haven't been able to calm him down," Charlie whispered looking absolutely furious.
"What did Jordan say?" Oliver asked coming into the living room with a steely look on his face as he spat out Lee's last name. He was obviously very protective of my brothers who had protected him on the pitch as his most in sync beaters.
"He was spouting some nonsense about Fred fraternizing with the enemy and a bunch if other derogatory names," George growled and I tightened my hold on the shaken submissive.
Cedric's P.O.V
"STAY AWAY FROM FRED YOU HARD HEADED JERK!" The Gryffindor announcer bellowed as he socked Viktor in the nose.
"What the hell man!" I growled helping Viktor stand up, "you don't just go around punching people!"
"He is trying to steal Fred away from me!" Lee snarled glaring at Viktor.
"I have no interest in Fred," Viktor said surprisingly softly, "a submissive cannot court another submissive."
"What are you talking about…? Shit S-submissive!" Lee stuttered going slightly pale.
"Da a submissive wood nymph and Fred's twin brother George is courting me," Viktor whispered sadly as he left; leaving me alone with Lee. The Gryffindor at least had the sensibility to look ashamed.
George's P.O.V
I quietly snuck away from Percy's apartment to go searching for Viktor. It was a very big shock to discover that Viktor was my submissive mate; most people would place him as a dominant. Viktor was actually rather insecure about his inheritance so it took me forever to get him to warm up to me.
"Hey George wait up!" Cedric yelled as he and Lee came running towards me. See Lee made me want to destroy him for my twins' pain, but one look at his frantic face held me back.
"What do you need Cedric?" I asked.
"H-have you s-seen Viktor h-he ran o-off when I y-yelled at him?" Lee stuttered.
"WHY THE FUCK WERE YOU YELLING AT HIM? HAVEN'T YOU DONE ENOUGH DAMAGE!" I roared grabbing Lee by his collar. Lee gave a squeak, but didn't struggle he just cast his eyes down in shame.
"He understands that what he did was wrong so calm down, and help us find your submissive mate," Cedric snapped stressing the word submissive greatly.
End of chapter 6
