This is what I think would of happened of Yellowfang had raised Brokenstar and not Lizardstripe. And YEAH! My first what if! There will be others coming up sooner or later, but I mostly be doing parrings ;3
A dark gray she-cat lay in a nest in the nursery, with another queen Lizardstripe and her two kits. She had tried everyday to make Brokenkit fell unwelcome, saying a kit born of a medicine cat was no good. I knew she didn't even want her two kits, so I would take care of them. Raggedstar was shocked when I said I was the mother and that I had nothing to hide. Over the moons Brokenkit had become friends with Lizardstripe's kits and they where soon made apprentices. Brokenpaw's mentor was his father Raggedstar, I had a felling that if I had let Lizardstripe raise Brokenpaw then a great darkness would fall over ShadowClan. Then when Brokenpaw got his warrior name, Brokentail, he was latter given his first apprentice. Then he was made deputy, after the death of Raggedstar's last deputy Cloudpelt. ShadowClan had many moon of peace with the other clans. As time went by Lizardstripe had died of green-caught some time before Brokentail became deputy. Everything seemed to being going by so fast, that when Raggedstar died it was almost a shock. He died in his time, around the time ThunderClan got a new apprentice. When Brokentail went to moonstone to get his leader name and nine lives. StarClan had let him become leader and for me to stay medicine cat. Brokentail, now Brokenstar had become a great leader. Almost as great as Crookedstar leader of RiverClan. Then when it was my time to join StarClan, my son had become good friends with ThunderClan's new leader Firestar. They had been friends before that when Firestar was known as Fireheart ThunderClan's deputy. He had told Brokenstar that about Tigerclaw and when the former ThunderClan deputy came to ShadowClan trying to take over it didn't work. To thank Fireheart for helping my son I give him one of his nine lives. Then some moons later Tigerclaw had come back with the help of some rouges from twoleg place that call themselves BloodClan. The clan leaders thought it was best that they joined together to fight them. Firestar, Tallstar, Leopard star RiverClan's new leader, and Brokenstar. They had won the battle but Firestar lost his first deputy Whitestorm and had lost one of his none lives, along with Brokenstar. Then when it came time for Brokenstar to join StarClan, I had the felling that if I had never toke Brokenstar as my own he would of become a monster and had gone to the Place of No Stars... the Dark forest.
