Okay everyone, I'm sorry, but this is not an update. I have heard some confusion. If those people that were confused are still reading this, here are the answers:
DEReAderRE;
My only real problem with this: America says "Bloody Wanker" after discovering that his glasses were broken. The issue is that Alfred would probably never- and that is never ever- say such a British phrase, especially to England's face and certainly not with the original meaning as his intention. Americans usually only use British terminology to a Brit's face if they're mocking them in some way or attempting to "blend" in with the culture- which often ends poorly...
He said Bloody Wanker because he was raised by England and took on some British habits. He kind of slipped up do to anger and confusion, otherwise, he would have not said it in the first place.
Reader;
Why can't anyone disobey Russia? Um, is this actually a part-dystopia where Russia has that kind of power? In Hetalia canon everyone refuses his offers/demands to "become one" with him and he is constantly in fear of Belarus, and I haven't even brought up the cold war... which the USSR (Communist Russia) lost to America- leading to America becoming the superpower of the world...
No one can disobey Russia because he is pretty much a character that could destroy another. Russia could practically be its own continent, so I would be quite strong, or at least, the stereotype of Russia is. No one would like to be involved with Russia in the canon Hetalia, except Belarus. That is why when they reject, they normally run away in fear. Belarus is simply only mentioned in this fanfiction, and she wouldn't disobey him anyway because of wanting him to love her. The Cold War hasn't taken place yet. The only reason that there is television is because in canon Hetalia there is when the Axis is formed.
Confused;
I'm not sure what happened in this chapter. Did Peter just die? Or was that Arthur throwing himself into a comma? Both? Is there a reason that HetaOni and the mansion have suddenly been introduced?
I advise a cautionary turn to the original premise. In the summary you promise:
1-America breaks Texas and England has to take care of him
2-Russia planning war on the Axis
3-Sealand feeling neglected
4-Mysterious man
So far we've seen some of #1, a bit of #2, nothing of #2 aside from everyone fearing Russia (unless Gilbert was hit by Russia's car, in which that would be quite evil of Russia), and #4 has made one mildly-memorable appearance (holding Wy, who came out of nowhere).
Yes, Peter died. Arthur was in too much shock to realize what was going on around him clearly. The HetaOni mansion was introduced because he had not felt that much pain since then. It might have a flash back, but it was merely a reference. Russia did hit Gilbert. Gilbert is technically part of the Axis as well, as is Romano. That concept has appeared by the many times Russia has called a meeting. Concept number one has happened, and takes place in the first few chapters, and it will reappear in the later chapters. Concept number three explains why Sealand jumped off of the tower. He did it out of neglect. He didn't want England near him because he was the one that caused him to feel neglected. Concept number four has only appeared a bit so far, but I am still in the early stages of this story. I am sorry if I had caused any confusion, and I hope you continue reading.
Please tell me if that helped you, and if anyone else has any questions, please tell me. You will receive an answer as soon as I can manage. I hope you continue reading, and there is no more confusion. Be expecting the next chapter soon!
