Kara's big day
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Weeks after the death of their parents... the day of the funeral arrived! The date was on a memorial day of 'Sam', the day she died. Sam hasn't been around since Kara's parents died; it looks like Sam was enjoying her second life while the two children suffer from the consequences. Kara wrote her little note for her parents:
Dear Mum and Dad,
I miss you so much and I wish I had never been so selfish! If I had a chance to turn back in time, I would honestly change all my words on that plane when I was a child! Tori and I will always look back on you and you will always be in our hearts forever and always. I will never forget every good memory we had and I will keep it in my safe, where no one can take it from us. I don't want to go to care, I just want to be in a new home with Tori and take it from there. Hopefully you will be proud of us! We will have a memorial room in the house so every night I can pray! Every dream I will have, will involve you in it.
LOTS OF LOVE
KARA
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Waiting for the cars to arrive in the street, on a rainy day, Kara and Tori huddle together while everyone else couldn't stop moving. Jamie, their uncle, came over to them and gave them a massive hug "We are all going to miss mum and your dad! It is sad to say goodbye to them but that does not stop us from loving them. We love them too much; it is time to give them more love than we normally do."
"Yes Jamie, we all agree! My world fell apart over the last couple of months and today I just want to fix it all" cried Kara "I feel so closed and I never felt this way before"
"...and she is a very bubbly person and now she has changed because of all this" interrupted Tori "I love her, for who she is and I don't want her to change!"
"I won't change, but it will take awhile to put me back on track moaned Kara "I can't help my feelings"
"I know how you feel babe!" said Tori in a sad voice.
"Darling we are all here for you and your sister!" said Uncle Jamie "Kara, just cry it all out"
"Okay, thanks Jamie, I appreciate everything!" smiled Kara "I know I'm going to have a breakdown when the cars arrive!"
"Yeah same!" cried Tori "It is hard to say goodbye to someone your really close to!"
It is time where everyone is quiet and a sound of teardrops hitting the ground! The amount of tears in the street is like a bath full! As the cars drive through the drive way everyone couldn't bare to look what's in front of them...the two children huddled tighter and tighter and wouldn't let go.
The car stopped on an end and the driver welcome them all to the memorial service and letting the close ones in to the limo. As they drove on to the main road, Tori and Kara cried on Uncle Jamie's shoulder.
The limos arrived to the place where the parents lie. Everyone who drove to the memorial service was queuing up while the doorman lets the close ones out of the limos. As Kara and Tori came out, no one could hear them speak because, of how much they cried.
The coffins are carried and the close ones follow and then the others follow on after. The music played and the memorial services started.
At the very end of the service Kara and Tori went up to the coffin and blew a kiss. As they leave the most stressful moment of their lives the whole room went black and Kara found herself alone. She looked on her right and saw a hand on her shoulder and there she was, Sam in her clothes that she wore when she died. Nothing could have been worse that day.
There you have it! The end of this tragic tale. Please review so I can tell my friend how to improve her story! She loves to get peoples opinions on her work! :)
