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Be-Bee: HAPPY BIRTHDAY MU-MU-CHAN! (Amu)

Everyone: Moo-Moo?

Be-Bee: No! Mu-Mu! It's the last two letters in her name

Everyone: O!

Be-Bee: Once again Happy Birthday Amu! An Happy early Birthday to me, putting that aside…

I am definetly failing at this story, and no offense love the reviews and all, but I want to truthfully know is

Is my story really, really bad to the point of deleting and starting over?

Or just plane bad to the point of re-editing them all, or just ignoring it?

Or is it just ok and fine the way it is?

That's all I know, and whoever was the one anonymous review, telling me about what they think of my story so far thank you very much, it made me look over my story to see what I needs to fix, once again thanks, sorry for this not being a real chapter but here's a preview:

So I'm still trying to figure out how I got stuck in here with him, my god my daughter, she's stuck out there in a school, with nobody to make sure she's not doing anything bad, my god! Somebody might have been murdered already! The school might catch on fire! If you don't believe a six year old could burn down a school you obviously don't know my daughter. I CAN'T AFFORD A LAW SUIT!

I started banging on the door, kicking it, anything that could get me out of there "Please! Some one open the door! I'm not paying for anything my daughter broke!" I fell to my knees slowly and softly hitting my head on the door "Damn it, all"

"Finally, you calmed down, what the hell were you screaming about?…

Be-Bee: there ya go, once again happy birthday Amu! And hopefully you guys don't abandon me, luvs ya and see ya!