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AnastasiaPhoenix1678 chapter 5: 1. Common sense: Yeah. NEVER bring up Selena Gomez in front of AP here. Her self esteem goes down five points AUTOMATICALLY.
Me: WAAAAAA! WHY MUST I BE SO BLACK AND CHUBBY!
Common sense: -_- See? And she's lost weight, too. (sighs) You can tell she doesn't use me very much...
2. Oh yeah. It's on. (swears on the River Styx)
3. (looks at picture of Trey Songz on Internet) e_e... (coughs loudly) LOGAN LERMAN KICKS HIM TO TARTARUS...whoa. WHO said that? (chuckles nervously)
4. Wow. (blushes) I feel kinda spoiled now...the only thing I can say about myself is that I'm an African American that goes to a predominately white school, so I tend to have a low self esteem. I'm also not the skinniest girl around, and guys see me as a transparent piece of glass, and my hair is always in cornrows, so, yeah. FanFiction is the only place I can feel perfect. (blushes) I dunno. I felt like I just needed to say that. I know it looks pretty wimpy compared to what you said...(looks like an idiot)...so yeah...(mutters to self) γκάμας! Why did I say that!
chapter 5
NANI? THE STUPID THING DIDNT GET TO FINISH WHAT I SAID! Grrrrr...
ANyway...
6. (I think) Nickname: Rantlers. (nods) Oh yeah. I know. I'm awesome...
Common sense: No you're not dude, dont lie...
Me: -_-
7. Do you take Latin? Because I do.
Arigato for reading! Ja ne!
(I'm an anime freak :3)
1: Selena Gomez lost my respect when she started dating Justin Bieber.
Not that anything's wrong with her. :D
2: The bet IS ON. It's the final countdown! Da da doop doop! Da da doop doop doop doop!
3: Hey. I heard that. We all know Trey Songz is supermegafoxyawesomehot. :D
4: I know some people on FanFiction can only feel comfortable on here because people can't see them to judge them.
That, my friend, is why we live in a sad, sad world.
I really don't care what you look like. I have a friend with a mustache, and she's a girl. You don't have to have an attractive face. You have to have an attractive personality. And, my friend, are hot. ;)
No homo, though. :D
I hate when people who live better than someone else always have to feel bad. You're doing better than me, enjoy it! We're all human beings, anyway. You're not better than me, I'm not better than you. It's equilibrium.
Live your life. Don't worry about me. :D
You skipped 5, BTW. :D
6: Rantlers. That's pretty awesome. :3
I haven't even looked at all the nicknames people have entered in, so be patient for me. :D
I also happen to love that song. :D
7: No, I don't take Latin. I wish I did though, even though it's a dead language. :D
I have no idea what you said after that, so I will ignore it. *whistles harmlessly*
anon 4 now chapter 5 The Hunger Games trailer comes out? Sweet! I'm glad I chose to read this fic then! And I love your opinions and rants. You would make a sensational lawyer. I'm known as Sage of Emeralds on this site, I'm just currently unable to login. Once I can, I'll gladly give you a more thorough and praising review ;)
So, you read because of the info I get out?
I see.
I'm kidding. :D
Was I the only one disappointed in the teaser? It was stupid. Just saying.
I will probably have PM'd you by now, so hi. :3
xyoung4EVA chapter 5: You, my friend, are awesome. Thank you for not hating on the characters just because you're biased or something!
I pretty much agree with everything you said. Personally, I only love Leo from the Heroes of Olympus series. He's funny, has wicked awesome fire powers, and shares a name with my Zodiac sign! :D I hold no love for Piper or Jason. I don't hate them, I just don't like them either.
I would love to see you defend Drew. :p She's a character I hate with all my being. Since she's such a female dog and has no positive qualities, seeing someone defend her would be very interesting.
- young
Thank you for calling me awesome! :D
Leo Valdez is rather awesome, is he not? :D
See, the problem with defending characters like Drew is that they are stereotypical cardboard cutouts. They have no personality or depth to them, and while we all hate them, that's the way we react to bullies like that. It would be hard to trying to defend or even go against Drew. And now you're saying, "There are SO many things that would go against Drew," those things don't count. They are a part of her cardboard cutout personality. It would honestly just be an easy flame.
I'm sorry if I disappoint you, but Drew would be one of the last characters I do. :D
Mostrawberry chapter 2: im sorry i cant read this chapter. i agree with the Rachel thing but whenever i hear Jason Grace i get this image of a wannabe Bieber unvolentarily. its just how he cause the Lost Hero to be like a soap opera. He wakes up with amnesia, a girl freind, an epic best friend, is saved by Annabeth herslef after defeating air (wtf?) and whisked away to camp half blood where every one welcomes him and he is loved and happy and all that shit. he goes on a quest takes down a powerful giant by riding on his shoulder and hitting him with lightning after bragging about defeating a seaserpent or whatever and pends over what girls heart hes going to break. He just sounds like how a garystue would be like. and no he couldnt have been another child of zeus he had to be the full sibling of Thalia Grace. the whole long lost brother whatnot made me feel like i was watching degrassi or pretty little liars or something. While he gets life handed to him on a silver platter Percy is in Califorinia being hunted hourly by gorgons who crave revenge. he hasnt bathed, eaten a real meal, or had rest for two months and he gets threatened by Juno dressed as a hippy lady who demands he carries her across four lanes of traffic when he barely has enough energy left just so he can go to a place where he will probably not be welcomed, will be hated, and will lose his achilles heel. HIS FREAKIN ACHILLES HEEL! After it took like five chapters of pain and creepy oracle victims to get it. And Hera simply adores the offspring of her husbands affair with another woman. Unlike all the other children of Zeus/ Jupiter. He makes Leo feel like an unwanted sidekick and Piper feel like shes never going to find love. all the while i love Leo and Piper's characters. Jason didnt have to go through being on the run, lost, betrayel, turning into a plant, hatred, abusive drunken mothers, or any of the shit his sister had to go through. When you look at the facts and how its hinted he craves glory and attention throughout the book there really isnt much you can do to compliment him with. It the truth. Face. It.
Gurl, you fucking KILLED my Spell Check, dawg.
This, my friend, is why you actually READ the chapter before leave reviews.
I could roast you until you're ready for a Thanksgiving meal, but I'm rather nice today, so I won't do that.
I'm about to do one of things I said I would never do to someone who read, but you thoroughly pissed me off.
First off, I will face nothing, because once again, you weren't educated enough to actually READ THE CHAPTER.
He defeated air because he's THE FUCKING SON OF ZEUS. Thalia Grace, mind you, can do the SAME. EXACT. THING.
He is welcomed because that is the nature of Camp Half-Blood. No one even had time to love him, because he went on a quest 24 hours after he arrived.
And, I'm gonna stop at this point and just said you're giving me a synopsis of a story I have already read.
Gary-Stu comment: ACTUALLY READ THE CHAPTER YOU COMMENT ON.
Yeah, because going on a quest with people who just actually met and a whole bunch of shit is happening that you can't even comprehend is a FUCKING WALK IN THE PARK.
If you actually knew the timeline, you would know that Percy had been on the run for 2-3 days. And he hadn't even been hurt because he had not yet lost his Achilles' Curse.
Thalia and Jason being long lost siblings thickens to the plot line.
Jason and Percy have both been threatened by Juno.
Again, you're repeating shit I already know. This is not helping your argument.
READ. THE. CHAPTER.
You have NO IDEA what Jason has went through, literally, because all we know about his past is that he went to Camp Roman.
When you look at the facts and how its hinted he craves glory and attention throughout the book there really isnt much you can do to compliment him with.
This is what you just said.
You have just described part of Thalia Grace's fatal flaw. Her fatal flaw is ambition. She craves power and glory and attention even though she knows she doesn't need it. That may be a quality they share as siblings.
I have never flamed anyone. EVER. I don't even count this as a flame, because I ave you supporting facts and details for what I said.
I will probably regret putting this up, but at the moment, I don't really give a shit.
If you plan reviewing on my story again:
1: Use proper grammar and spelling, please. You know, in every sentence.
2: Use facts and details to support your opinions.
3: Don't give me the synopsis of the story. I have read it, thank you very much. Unless it helps support your opinions, I don't need a summary.
4: READ. THE. FUCKING. STORY.
I'm sorry if I flamed you. People like you piss me off, when you blatantly ignore the rules of debating, and make a deficit of intellect in this story. Give me smart answers, please.
Krazykat Koolkat chapter 5: That made my day, thank you. I took your advice my ex boyfriend called me a and I quote 'jacked up white skanky bitch' and cheated on me so he and his friends or freaks started picking on me. I couldn't take it anymore so on natural instincts I kicked him... straight in the balls with a large kick that took him down then I got in his face and said 'back off dick or ill kick you when I have steel toe boots on' and walked off. Now i'm some god to everyone because A) I had enough guts to do that B) hes maybe captin of the wrestling team. Thank you for the encouragment and tell your father something 'your fucking ass is bigger than the capacity of your brain' that shut my mom right up. I enjoyed the silence. Oh and this one kid slamed a door in my face and I told him to fuck off or ill kick it where the sun don't shine. Hope you survive school and pray for Hurricane Irene and *sobs* Joplin people. Why I sobbed is I live in St. Louis and I can't even look at the pictures.
Thanks again,
Krazykat a.k.a kick ass,bamf,girl who took down the wrestling captin with a kick to where it counts and has eventful ways to shut people up.
Don't care about perfect brothers, I have a perfect sister. Straight A's, perfect look, great writing. Find something you don't have in common with your brothers like for example: when my sister sings its like a dying walrus, I was the lead in the school play. My sister only speaks english and french. I speak English, French, German, Italian, Latin, Spanish, and Sarcasam. I play the cello and my sister plays the... ipod touch. SHOCKER! This is my faverite quote I made "don't care what the others say, it's probably fucked up like there face" and the famous ones that aren't mine " I never new words hurt till I got hit by a dictionary" and "i'm not easily dis.. Oooo a penny!" and "hey wanna go see twilight?' 'sorry i'm getting my face punched in". Yeash, I realized i'm talking about how perfect I am. YAY! FLAW TIME!
I'm provoked easily
I hate myself
Sometimes I belive what people say
I think i'm ugly
I think i'm worthless
I think i'm stupid
I may be strong on the inside but i'm weak on the inside
I'm the loser, no friends, no caring family, no life, writing andyour encouraging words are the onlything that keeps me alive
I am a mistake, a peice of shit no one cares about but i'm going to stop that i'm going to be heared!
I'll tell you all about it,
Krazykat
*starts crying* I'm sorry to say this but my best friend, Krazykat, has been put into the hospital for a few days. She will be able to type a bit on her iphone. She was in a car accedint. Put her in your prayers please. She wanted me to write this: Fuck you bfs
. chapter 5
I'M BAAAAAACK BITCHES!
You, my friend, are a BAMF.
Now, I did not give you advice to stomp people in the nuts and tell them to go fuck their mother, remember that.
But, again I say:
You are a BAMF.
You can list your flaws here, I don't really give a shit. Not in an unkindly way, though. It's just if you decide to speak awesome about yourself enjoy it! As long as you're not shoving your accomplishments down people's throats, it's all cool. :D
You, my friend, are an awesome person. :D
I'm glad I encourage you. :D
Your quotes made me laugh. :D
I'm sorry you got into an accident. I really, really do. I'm glad you're back, and I hope you're okay now. :D
soul61 chapter 5: OKAY NO MORE APOLOGIES! Just one thing to say...yes. Yes Percy does seem more sexy and mature in the Son of Neptune preview! Wow I seriously cannot wait for that freaking book to finally come out. Also, I have a qUestion for you. Are you an actual debater? Like on a debate team? And I shall vote in your poll! K' bye
THANK YOU FOR NO APOLOGIES! :D
I'm glad you agree with my idea of Percy's sexiness. :D
I am gonna pee in my pants when it comes out. :D
Unfortunately, my school does not offer debate teams. I just stick to debates with this story, family and friends.
I consider myself a debater, but not on a debate team or anything.
I'm glad you voted! :D
God1801 chapter 3: Darco Malfoy. And Trey Songs. I'm really liken this story :)
chapter 4
I got to say. I liked this chapter. But I dont really care who Jason ends up with. If he goes for the Pipe girl. Or the maybe girlfriend from rome. But good chapter
chapter 5
I like this alot :) On the Rome Vs Greek. I Like Greeks Better. I dont how the Romans do things. My dads like the romans. Hes a fighter. He knows all these awesome moves hes shown me. Its cool, but he doesnt care for my feels or how much it hurt me. LOVE!
You get to make your character! :D Details in A/N in "Replies to Reviews!" at the end. :D
Thanks for all the compliments. :D
I am personally a Roman Empire kind of gal. :3
I think your dad sounds epic. :D
redwaves9 chapter 2: Personally, I don't think his character is developed enough. I mean, when he didn't gave his memories, we didn't know much about him. I think being really strong and muscular is your typical male hero. Percy grew-and we watched him turn from a scrawny middle schooler to a 16 year old fighter. Truth be told, the HoO characters have PJO counterparts:
Jason,Percy:Male protagonist
Annabeth,Piper:female protagonist(very different personalities!)
Leo, Grover:Male best friend that provides comic relief.
What I do like about HoO is that there is no main character. Everyone looks to Jason, because of his parentage and because he appears like Percy. PJO is in Percys POV, but he's not a Gary stu, so its fine. Personally I like the fact it's in first person, and I wish Rick had done that with HoO.
Overall, I like Jason, but wish Rick had done two girls and a boy or something. I definitely like Leo and Piper because they are miles different than Annabeth and Grover.
chapter 4
I honestly think the whole piperxjason thing is very typical. Think about it: Really handsome muscular blonde guy meets Pretty rich girl. They would be fine if the other want there. Honestly, I have less against Piper then I do to Jason. I like that Piper is very different from Annabeth. She and Jason need to be developed more. Leo is the only fully developed character.
The thing is, he's not developed enough because we have limited information on him. It's only been one book, ya know? We know very little about his past, so we're just gonna have to chill for a while. :D
The whole counterpart thing was largely correct, except for one thing: Grover was a smaller comic relief than Leo. In the PJO series, it was completely in Percy's POV. His silliness was the major comic relief. Because of the third person changing POV in HoO, Leo was full on comic relief, letting Jason and Piper be more serious.
I think Jason serves as the main main character, if that makes since. :D
The fact that Piper and Leo's personalities are different than Annabeth and Grover's os very refreshing. :D
I don't care much for Piper, as you have hopefully noted, but the relationship is very clichéd, as I think I've said before.
Neither Leo nor Piper and Jason are fully developed characters. You may like Leo more because he's more realistic, lovable, and awesome than Piper and Jason, but he's not fully developed. :D
bestgyrl chapter 4: Dammit! My cousin hit send when I wasn't finished!
I wanted to say about chapter five, that was a lot of reply. And I'd completely forgotten about Jason's new weapon. You wouldn't believe how many hoops I had to jump through to read TLH.
Also, everyone has different celeb obsessions. My friend is actually obsessed with Robert Pattinson, which I don't understand. And I'm 12, not Mindless Behavior. They're 14. BUT I'M ALMOST 13!
Why am I ranting to you about this? And why did I just add to the amount of people saying "rant"? That just shows not to drin soda before bed!
G'Night!
I decided not to add your other review, as all it was was your character. :D
Robert Pattinson= ewh.
There's this girl in my class who is OBSESSED with Mindless Behavior. It's madness. :D
Is it weird that I don't drink soda? :D
kittyhawk09 chapter 5: I agree with Serenade of the Water it never said Reyna was a girlfriend it was just said " that he defiantly remembered a girl named Reyna and that she kinda made him his feelings for Piper." Another thing I think another reason Piper thinks about Jason is that she's been wanting attention so when she met Jason and then she started to get attention from him. Then her dad went missing and then her boyfriend was all the mist. I think she would remember him a lot and still have a big crush. Also we get to read in her perspective and Pipers secret thoughts and we didn't for annabeth. Annabeth could have had some similar thoughts but we wouldn't know because it was in a oblivious seweedbrain perspective.
Even though I had to read your review carefully, I understood what you said. :D
I understand and mostly agree to everything you said. :D
Silents-in-the-Library chapter 5: I don't know about Leo. He's okay, but not as funny as he thinks he is...
What don't I like about Jason? Try nearly everything. He's just not realistic. Yeah yeah, I get it, he pretty much grew up in this harsh Roman camp blah blah blah. But he DOES NOT REACT LIKE REAL PEOPLE DO. Just sayin'.
-Silents
Your review made me laugh. :D
Not that it's funny, just the way I read it. :D
I really wouldn't expect him react in a normal way, as he's a demigod, a Roman demigod, a Roman demigod son of Jupiter, and has amnesia.
And what are you comparing normal to? That's a key point. :D
The God Of FanFiction chapter 5: Sorry for the small rant the other day. I just really like Percy. So again-Sorry
It's okay, dude. :D
I understand. :D
Serenade Of Water chapter 5: Thanks for replying.
I did read the first book of the Hunger Games. It's amazing.
If you need a nickname for me, just call me Serena. It's a name in my pen-name.
Read the fic known as The Good Wife from the Perspective series by StarlitReader. It's not an order but it help hate Hera less then before if you hate her.
The series talks about the Greek Gods and how they became who they are like Hades, Dionysus, Hera and Apollo. Those drabbles are an eye opener to the ones that hate them.
P.S: Did you read the Kane Chronicles? Because there is an awesome crossover story between PJO and KC that I recommend you to read.
It is known as the Alliance AU where Nico Di Angelo, the son of Hades, becomes the host of the God of Corpse Desecration in the name of Enbalming, Anubis.
The first story of the series is called The Death God Alliance, followed by Escape From Camp Half-Blood and Nico's Quest written by Asilda.
In my humble opinion, those stories are amazing and I think you should also read the other drabbles from the Perspective series.
P.S.S: I would not, for my sake, create a character. I'm scared of making a Mary-Sue or a Gary-Stu.
You are welcome. :D
Is The Hunger Games not amazing? I love it. You might get tired of Katniss' inner monologue though, as I did.
I have chosen not to read the Hera fic yet, because I want to do a Hera chapter to see how well I can test my skills without biasness. :3
I haven't read the Kane Chronicles yet, but I plan to.I am actually reading the Mortal Instruments series right now. It seems really clichéd at the beginning, but my best friend promises it gets better. I hope it does, because if doesn't he will be murdered with his own French horn. :D
I would like for to create a character. If you make it a Gary-Stu of Mary Sue I get to make fun of it. That's why I did the make a character, to see how you guys' imaginations work. :D
AuroxTheLander chapter 5: Percy didn't give up the curse of achilles. It says that the gorgon's teeth keep bouncing off or breaking when they hit his skin. I really don't remember which one, it might have been both, but I downloaded it onto my iBooks app on my iPod then lost said iPod.
I have a link to the second chapter where he loses his Achilles' Curse on my profile. :D
Check it out. :D
Cashii11 chapter 1: "Percy Jackson is supposed to be hot.
Not Logan Lerman hot.
Percy Jackson hot."
I just fell in love with you, dude! :D
chapter 2
I just realized; the initials for Son of Neptune are SoN... Get it? The acronym is the first word, as written by a blind squirrel!
chapter 3
I realized something else; I don't really know for sure if Jason would win that fight. As stated by a previous reviewer, Romans are more organized and unflexible when it comes to battle, but that could be the downfall.
There's actually a point in history where that - the apparently flawless strategy, the seemingly perfect placement of troops and weaponry - turned against them. I'll even say it in normal-people terms. Three Roman legions marched in a German forest. It was supposedly conquered territory; they just needed to cool down some native rebellions and head back home. They marched in the standard formation that was usually pure WIN. But the forest was way to dense, so they had to march in a slimmer formation, leaving the heavy troops scattered at the front and the soldiers at the very back, undefended. The natives were allegatedly very primitive, but that was an understatement. The natives built a SEVEN FEET TALL, FIFTEEN MILE LONG MUD-AND-STICKS BARRIER. They hid, and waited for the Romans. When they came, the natives jumped out like 'SURPRISE, BEYOTCH!' and totally whooped their Italian asses. Out of the three legions, only twenty men made it out alive. The emperor never forgave the general who took them into battle, neither did he forgive himself for allowing his men to die. From that battle on, the numbers 16, 17 and 20 were never used to name a legion. It'd be like buying a boat and saying 'LOOK AT MY BOAT, Y'ALL! I'M CALLING IT TITANIC 2!'
In other words, excesive training and inflexibility and incapacity to use changing situations in their benefit has come back and bitten Roman ass before, and it could do so again.
But I still think Jason would win. 'Cause, you know, it makes sense. Still, maybe Percy would have a chance, if Riordan decided to make fair game. It'd be a pretty close match with the current situations, but... Circular logic is circular, dude. At least for me. The supressed fangirl that's buried somewhere in the deepest, darkest, girliest parts of my brain feels the compulsive need to just say 'ZOMG, like, Percy, totally!'. But the rational, un-girlified part of my brain tells me to 1)fuck it all, just eat with your hands, princess and 2)look at it with an objective perspective. I decide to go with second, but I always find arguments. Then I come to the conclusion that this review is pointless and having arguments with myself is a syntom for most mental illnesses. And then I start again.
It's a circle, see?
Do you know I love you?
I DUCKING LOVE YOU. 3
Your review(s) were so awesome. :D
You made complete sense.
I'm glad you shared that story with me. It was amazing. :D
I agreed with everything you said.
I hope you review more.
Again,
I DUCKING LOVE YOU. 3
artyfan chapter 3: Piper is the beautiful, talented daughter of Aphrodite who doesn't "fit in" with the rest of her cabin, because she's not as shallow. That's the impression that I got from the Lost Hero, and I didn't like that. I liked Silena better because she seemed to have more flaws. She could be shallow, and she could be influenced. I liked that about her-she had the courage to get past that and try to do her part in the war effort.
Annabeth, I think, is a borderline Sue. She's pretty, talented, and smart, not to mention confident and a natural leader. However, Annabeth can be arrogant and possessive, which makes her less of a Sue than Piper.
Jason seemed to me a very bland character. He didn't have much of a personality, but was good-looking, smart, a leader and all that jazz. What flaws did he have? Amnesia? That hardly counts as a flaw in my books. In fact, it makes him more of a Stu. That seems like a very cliched storyline-waking up unable to remember anything.
I agree with your opinions on Piper.
I agree with your opinions on Annabeth.
I don't agree with you on Jason. We, again, have limited info on him. You can't judge him that harshly. I think I sound like a hypocrite right now, but hey, who cares? :D
A/N: I semi-intellectually roasted someone today. :D
I will probably regret that, but whatevs. :D
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