So generally, I type my review replies on the document at Doc Manager. But this time I typed it on Microsoft Word, and it was a lifesaver! Am I the only one who finds the Doc Manager annoying? It messes up my typing. And they deleted all of my TMotM documents! I am very confused as to why the system deletes documents after 90 days. Does anyone know the reason?

Anyways, happy holidays! Sorry for the late update. I should have updated before, but... never mind, I'll just skip my excuses and get on with the replies.

Snowfall16: Yeah, I think everyone hates school… though thankfully it's finally break. Well no, I don't exactly hate school, but it can be dull at times. You had midterms already? I don't think that we have until January or February, and we only have for math. That's cool that you're visiting family. My aunt came over to stay with us for two weeks. It's pretty awesome having her over. Who in your family are you visiting?

Moonbeam141: It is very creepy. I do not like this website at all. I saw my profile up there too. I also saw my story The Music of the Mist (TMotM). And then, if you stay there for too long a time, weird pop-ups start showing up. I don't know what it is, but I'm guessing that it is either a spam website or made to rip off FFN. But what's really creepy is that when I post this chapter, it'll also show up on TFN as an exact mirror image. I wonder who made that site…

Opinionater2001: I think that they're both at fault. But at that point, I don't think that Dovewing was bullying Ivypool. Sure, it was wrong for Dovewing to say that, but Ivypool led her on and provoked her to say it. Ivypool was kind of spoiling for a fight. Having said that, I do feel bad for Ivypool. I think she would have been a better third cat than Dovewing. Ivypool did much more than the three put together. And I can completely understand how Ivypool feels. Being a twin myself, I often get jealous of my brother for having higher grades and things like that. I often feel like the shadow. But I still don't think it was right for Ivypool to be so mean. I'm not really on either side, because like I said before, they're both at fault.

Amberstorm233: In the Bluestar rant, yeah, I agree, Thistleclaw and Bluestar were both being jerks to each other. They were both at fault. I completely disagree with what you said about the third and fourth point. It was kind of Snowfur's fault for running off and getting offended at what Bluestar said. Bluestar never stopped Whitestorm from seeing his father. And for the first fifth point, I do agree with what you said. Bluestar should have stepped in sooner. I also agree partially with the second fifth point (btw I didn't realize that there were two fives, thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it.) Crookedstar did have it worse than Bluestar. However, no one ever betrayed Crookedstar. I believe that made a difference. And for point six, I agree with that too. She should have waited for the blizzard to pass. And now for the Dovewing rant. 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 5th points I agree. But the 1st point I disagree. Dovewing was only six moons old at the time. And she did only whine for that one book. Wow, that was a long review reply! Sorry if it was hard to follow.


Warrior Cats Fan Article #5: Yellow x Ragged x Fox

*MAJOR SPOILERS FOR YELLOWFANG'S SECRET*

Let's start off with Ragged x Yellow. In the beginning, I personally thought that this couple was really sweet. Yellowfang really cared for Raggedstar and would do anything for him. He was very grumpy in the beginning, but then he opened up to her and we saw a sweeter side of Raggedstar. I thought it was really sweet that she went to Twolegplace for him to find his father (were they looking for his father? I haven't read the book in a while) I felt bad for Yellowfang that she had to convert to becoming a medicine cat. Of course, Raggedstar was pretty useless by then. He kept shouting at her and accusing her of not loving him anymore. I understand if he was mad, but if he really loved her, he should have let her go.

Then they started meeting in secret. By then, I had started to like the couple a little less. I kind of wanted Yellowfang to ditch Raggedstar. But of course, then Yellowfang had kits. Raggedstar was all like, "Oh yeah! You're having kits!" Raggedstar, you idiot. He was mad at her two seconds ago, and now he's all happy. He is completely ignoring the fact that medicine cats can't have kits! He made Yellowfang promise that the kits would never know their mother. That was very cruel of him. I understand that was the most logical thing they could have done, but if they don't know their mother, they shouldn't know their father either. Raggedstar was pretty much saying, "Oh, you made the problem, so we'll erase you from the problem and everything will be alright." It was partly Raggedstar's fault too. He should share in the blame.

So, my overall status on Ragged x Yellow: In the beginning, I loved it. It was well developed. But then I started hating it towards the end. Raggedstar was not being a good mate or father. If he really cared about Yellowfang, he would have found a way to solve the problem without entirely erasing her from it. That's just not cool.

I know this is off-topic, but I'm going to stray a bit here. When Yellowfang had her kits, she named the only surviving kit Brokenkit. Brokenkit? Now I understand why he was so evil… No seriously, think about it. This is the only thing that I really dislike Yellowfang for. Her excuse was "Oh, it's because of my broken heart." Brokenkit is about the cruelest name for a kit. Almost as bad as Crookedkit. Yellowfang, are you implying that there is something wrong with him? No wonder he got teased in the nursery! I'm not saying that this was a valid excuse for Brokenstar to go around murdering kits, but I feel a little bad for him. No one deserves a name like that.

Now, we're back on track: Ragged x Fox. I'm going to be honest, this really isn't a couple. I disliked it a lot because I personally found Foxheart to be very annoying. Actually, I'm not so sure. They could be the perfect pair; they're both idiots! Nah, not really. What I really wanted to talk about was the reason why people keep hating on Foxheart.

Like I've stated several times before, I don't like Foxheart. But I disagree with all of the Yellowfang fans that keep saying, "Foxheart stole Raggedstar from Yellowfang!"

Let's take a look here. Yellowfang has already vowed to give up Raggedstar for medicine training and because he no longer cares for her anymore. Raggedstar treats her as the 'Clan medicine cat' and nothing else. They let go of each other, therefore Foxheart stole Raggedstar from no one.

And Raggedstar didn't even like her! He never returned Foxheart's love! Sure, he made her deputy and all, but only because he thought that she was a good warrior! Not because of anything else. So how in StarClan's name can she have stolen Raggedstar?

So my final analysis is: Yellow x Ragged started off with potential, but went downhill after Yellowfang became a medicine cat. Fox x Ragged wasn't really a couple, and I also found that very annoying.


I'm sorry this rant was so short. I'm not really proud of this one.

Next will be a Hollyleaf rant. And after that will most likely be about StarClan.