Hope you like it! STAY TUNED! Near the end, TRAGITY WILL OCCUR

The whole family was sitting at the picnic table at Oak Park. Sue, Carrie, Reagan, Audrey, Rita (Ms. Desjarden), Charlie, Laura, were all eating ham and cheese sandwiches, and talking about random stuff. But something seemed off for Sue. She wasn't particularly hungry. And it was weird because she had a baby Carrie on the way. She held her hand to her stomach and grimaced in pain. Carrie caught note of that, and looked concerned. "You okay?" Carrie asked, putting down her sandwich, and turning her head to Sue, who was holding her stomach in pain. The rest of the family caught note of this, and turned their attention to Sue.

"What's goin' on baby girl?" Reagan asked, leaning forward slightly.

"Sue hasn't been eating lately, and her stomach hurts a lot." Carrie said anxiously, keeping her attention on her friend.

"I-I'm pregnant..." Sue blurted out, closing her eyes, hoping the pain will stop. Suddenly, Jinxy trotted over, and smelt Sue's stomach. Everyone watched Jinxy intently. Jinxy stopped sniffing, and whined and barked, as she sat down beside Sue, still whimpering.

"Oh shit!" Ms. Desjarden announced, as she got up from the picnic table, and knelt beside Sue, holding her back. "What's going on?" Carrie asked, in a mixture of worry, and anxiousness. Everyone looked at Rita.

"We have to go to the hospital NOW!" Rita screamed, standing up, and trying to help Sue out of the bench, as she was clenching her stomach in pain.

"WHAT'S GOING ON?!" Carrie screamed, standing up, and helping her friend walk to the car. Rita held her hand to her mouth, as she watched Sue hobble off to the car, with Carrie beside her.

All the sisters jogged to catch up to them. "What's going on Rita?" Laura asked, concern evident in her voice. Rita gulped, and forcefully ripped her eyes away from Sue, only to look at Laura with a worried look.

"Remember Sargent. P? Who trained Jinxy in the Military?" Rita said, hoping that they will pick up on what she's saying.

"Yeah?" Laura said, in an obvious tone of voice. Reagan was putting Jinxy's leash on her, and quickly ran over to the sisters, asking Jinxy to sit. Jinxy obeyed her owner, and sat on the right hand side of Reagan.

"H-he said that..." Rita gulped, and forced herself to continue. "That, Jinxy was trained to smell out death. So whenever death occurs, or about to occur, Jinxy whines and sits down..." She finishes, glancing over at Carrie, helping Sue into the back of the Chevy.

"What's your point Rita?" Reagan asked, looking down at Jinxy. All the girls were quiet, and you couldn't hear anything. The anticipation evident. Like the whole world was waiting for Rita to answer.

"She smelt Sue's stomach...and she's pregnant..."


The girls rushed to the hospital. Sue screaming out in pain, clenching her stomach. Several moments earlier, Sue's water broke. They all couldn't believe it. NO ONE could possibly give birth THAT early. It made Carrie worry, holding her friend, as warm tears sprung from her eyes in hope, that baby Carrie wasn't in any danger.

"Sue!" Laura screamed from the front seat, turning her head towards the two teenage girls in the back seat. Sue raised her head, teeth clenching together, trying to hold back the pain. "When did you and Tommy last have sex?" she asked. "Two weeks ago! But I stopped, because I wasn't in the mood, so he didn't finish! So, about a month ago!" She screamed in agony. Carrie started to cry, as she held her friend.

"ALMOST THERE!" Rita screamed, from the passenger seat. Sue was becoming dizzy, and hazy. She felt like she needed a nap. Sue was starting to see blur spots, and things became louder, booming in her ears. She started panicking, as she heard Carrie scream "YOU'RE OKAY!" But, Sue knew Carrie wasn't screaming, it was just her. Her heart sped up, as she started sweating.

Suddenly, everything went pitch black.


"SUE! PUSH!" A women's voice screamed at her, as she gently opened her eyes to find herself in a hospital bed, surrounded by Rita, and Carrie. Laura, and Reagan were waiting in the 'Waiting Room', so they could watch the kids.

She screamed as a contraction hit, and sweat fell from her forehead, to her eyes, blinding her. Carrie gently whipped the tears from Sue's eyes, forgetting about wiping them from her own. Carrie could not stop crying, as she entered the hospital. She was worried that Sue was dying. She helped Carrie with so much, that if Sue died...Carrie would die emotionally.

"Keep your eyes open!" Rita screamed. "Follow my voice!" One of the nurses shouted, but it was too late, she was blacking out again. "WHY DOESN'T SHE HAVE A C-SECTION!?" Rita screamed, trying to calm Sue down. "The baby won't stop pushing it's way through! We have no choice but to do it this way!" The nurse screamed.

"AHHHHHH!" Sue screamed, as once again, she passed out.


Sue gently fluttered her eyes open, to find Carrie sitting in a chair right beside her, and everyone else was out of the room. Carrie had her hand in hers, and had her eyes closed, praying.

Sue looked around, to find the whole room was white. There were machines hooked up to her, with a tube under her nose, and some on her wrists. She gently sighed, and grimaced in the burning in her lungs that came along with it. She looked at her hospital gown, that was plain and smelly.

Carrie stopped praying mid-sentence, and looked at Sue, who was putting in an effort to breath, without pain. "Sue you're up!" Carrie shouted excitedly, whilst she stood up eagerly, and looked at Sue with wide-doe eyes, waiting for her to say something. Anything.

"W-what happened?" She muttered softly, stretching her neck in circles. Carrie looked down, and warm-fresh tears were starting to form. She inhaled sharply, and forced herself to calm down, for the sake of Sue. She looked up at Sue, with blood-shot eyes, and whispered "she's gone..."

Sue's eyes widened. She couldn't breathe. She looked down and starting gasping, trying to take in what Carrie just said to her. Baby Carrie couldn't be dead! She didn't even LIVE! She was only 4 weeks pregnant! She couldn't have went into labor that early...it wasn't possible...

"What?" Was all Sue managed to get out, in a bewildered tone of voice. Carrie inhaled sharply, and tears were in her eyes once again. She couldn't bare to tell Sue that her baby was dead when she came out.

"No...no, no NO!" Sue screamed, as she quickly ripped herself off the hospital bed, as a sharp-dull throbbing pain, was enhanced. She didn't care about the pain, she wanted to see her baby. She ripped all the tubes off of her, and tried to get up, but the dizziness fell down upon her like a million devils. Carrie ran over to Sue pushing her back on to the bed, trying to calm her down, but it was no use. Baby Carrie was dead. Sue fought from Carrie, and finally Carrie let her go, as Sue ran through the door, and flew down the hallway, with all the nurses chasing after her, yelling at her to stop. She finally found the room, with all the incubators, and searched for her name. She glanced at the last one on the left, as it read "Sue Snell." Sue ran over to baby Carrie, and looked at her, with tears in her eyes.

Baby Carrie was blue, and purple, with all different tubes hooked up to every part of her body. She had a pink blanket under her, with a small yellow duck on the side.

Sue dropped to her knees, with her hand over her mouth, as tears sprung to her eyes. "NOOOOO!" She screamed. This scream, was different than any other. It was louder, stronger, more powerful, and very emotional. After she screamed, a male nurse came in, and pulled her back. Sue was screaming, and trying to get to her baby. Everyone gathered around. Carrie rushed in, to help the nurse take Sue away. Sue screamed louder than ever before. "NOOOO!" She screamed before crying "that's my baby!" Carrie told the nurses to get out, as she would take care of it from here. The nurses disagreed before Carrie shot them a death glare, causing them to wince, and leave. Carrie gently brought Sue on to the ground, and into her arms.

"That's my baby!" She screamed, tears rushing down her face like a waterfall. Carrie brought Sue's head into her shoulder, and put her chin atop of it, gently rocking her back and forth. "It's okay, shh..." Carrie cooed. Sue brought her eyes up to the incubator, with her daughter lying in it, lifeless. She closed her eyes in Carrie's chest, as more tears flowed. "She can't be dead!" She screamed, bringing her head up to look Carrie in the eyes, with a pleading expression. Carrie just looked back at her, with a face full of hurt. Although she was trying to help Sue calm down, it was hard to ignore her own emotions. Sue's face was red, and streaked with tears. "She can't be dead..." she repeated before continuing "I would have been feeding her!, and- and I would bathe her!, and, I would wake up in the middle and rock her! This can't be happening! Please.." She cried, as Carrie brought her back into her chest. Carrie started bawling her eyes out too. She tried to hold Sue as tight as she could, as she rested the side of her head, on top of Sue's, and closed her eyes. "I-i've..." Sue sniffled into Carrie's chest "It's too late! I've already fallen in love with her!" She let out an exhausted cry. Carrie couldn't handle her emotions when Sue said "I've already fallen in love with her..." she lost it right then, and there. She cried with Sue, as they both tried to get air into their lungs. The Desjadren's stood outside the room, staring at the two girls crying in each other's arms. They had warm tears gently brushed down their faces, but nothing near Carrie, and Sue's.

"I want her back!" Sue cried, into Carrie's warm sweater. "I know, I know...it'll get better Sue. Remember what you said to me? 'it always get's better.' and it will. Trust me please..." Carrie cried, gently rubbing Sue's back.

Sue kept on crying on the cold hospital floor, with her best friend Carrie. Letting each other soak up their problems, and try to fix them. It was going to be hard, but both of them knew they had to do it for each other.

STAY TUNED: Ending will leave your mouth dropped!:o