story:can you save me before it's too late

disclamier:i own nothing how sad is that?

Nathan walked in and saw lucas lying there with his eyes half open.

I've been unconcious for like a month but i'm still tired" rasped lucas

Are you feeling better baby brother? nathan asked kissing his brother

on the head

I'm okay but last time i checked i was older than you" Lucas said

well you're not"nathan sadi sitting down

"what are you talking about?"

I'm a little over two years older than you almost three and we're full

brothers but sarah"s still are half-sister. in highschool mom was

pregnant with me and her and da got married after they graduated. they had

you 3 months before i turned 3. dad had an affiar with deb adn they

ended up gettign married. they didn't want us to know dad tooke me and mom

took you. mom sarted you in school before you were old enough to start

becasue they wanted to make everybody think we were the same age. you

almost 3 years yuonger than all of us. you're suppose to be a freshman

instead of a senior. so what do hink about that?" Nathan sadi sighing

as he finisned.

Uh, i'm a little freake dout but that explains why i'm shorter than and

smaller than you. and that my voice changed last year. wait a minute

i'm 14. this si so weird."

lucas said freking out alittle bit.

nathan put a hand onh is brother's head and signed knowing than

whatever he said wouldn't make his brother any less confused.

3 weeks later

Lucas was finally better to leave the hospital. the family was finally

all together.Nathan was going to live home until he left for collage.

dan adn karen decided that lucas was too young to go to collage and

would go after he turned 18.

right now they had just arrived home and lucas was asleep in the back

seat. Nathan just unbuckled him and picked him up in his arms. this was

alot better than the last time he had picekd his brother up off the

school floor covered in his own blood.

he aid his brother on his bed and was so glad he was finally home. he

had a couple months of physical theropy but he was going to be okay.

a couple hours later

Lucas woke up and this time he ddin't hear the beaping of the heart

monitor. helaid there with his eyes clothes he was so glad to be home. he

felt something running through his hair. i felt like a hand. he could

smell the shampoo and knew that it was brooke. he opened his eyes and

saw the girl of his dreams. she had been there for him. no matter how he

felt she eother talked with him or nelped him with school work or

hummed to ihm and ran her fingers throuhg his hair while he rested. just

like she was now/

hey pretty girl

hey broody how you feelin' she asked than pressed her lips to hs

forehead checking for a fever. when she was satisfied ahe let him answer.

"i feel fine. a lto better now that i'm home" he said

"good i can't wait for you to get better" she said ans kissed his hurt

shoulder.

they just lay there with lucas's head on Brooke's chest. she looked

down and saw that he had fallen asleep.

I HOPE YOU ALL LIKED THIS CHAPTER. I PERSONALLY LIKE THIS IDEA BETTER

THAN THE ONE IN CHAPTER 5. I THINK EVERYONE ELSE AGREES WIHT ME DUE TO

THE FLAMES I GOT. NO HARD FEELINGS I HOPE. IT SEEMS TO AHVE GOTTON MORE

PEOPLE TO REVOEW THOUGH. DO I HAVE TO DO OMETIHNG ESE LIKE THAT TO GET

REVIEWS? PLEASE REVIEW IT HELPS ME UPDAET SOONER AND IT LETS ME KNOW

WHTA YOU WANT TO HAPPEN IN MY STORY.

LOVE TO ALL MY READERS,

NEMO123489