Hi.
Please read this. Not this sentence, the paragraph under it
This is my entry to a contest on DeviantArt where you have to write a story or draw a picture about what happens next in a picture provided. In the picture Winry is in a kinda awkward position, crawling under a desk to retrieve her wrench and Edward is staring at her ass like a perv. I also am going to submit a pic to go with it.
So what do you think? I haven't submitted it yet so if you see any errors or if you have any suggestions I would be so happy to hear it. Criticism welcome!
Once again it's Al's point of view. Oh Al, how much I love thee. XD
Alphonse peered over the top of his book for probably the hundredth time to watch Winry kneeling next to his brother as he filled her in on where he had been the past few months. She was busy with his damaged automail but always managed to laugh and comment on what he was saying. In turn Edward, although busy with his story, managed to watch every movement she made, every time she tucked her hair behind her ear, every time she reached for another piece for his leg.
Al was truthfully shocked that Edward had managed to find the courage to tell Winry how he felt. Two very excited letters had reached him in Xing, one from each of them, describing a conversation at the Risembool train station. He smiled at the memory of he and Mei laughing until it hurt at Ed's unique way of proposing.
Now Al just couldn't get enough of the two of them. He loved watching the way the two of them talked to each other, whispering and laughing, the way the two of them would hold hands when Pinako wasn't looking, the way they would come back from a walk blushing like children leaving Al to guess exactly what they had been doing. The way the two of them were happy.
"Hey Al, have you seen my wrench?"
"Oh, It's under the table there."
"Thanks." Winry finally moved away from Edward to retrieve the violent tool from where it had fallen earlier. The mechanic got on her knees and crawled under the desk reaching for the wrench. Al's eyes widened and he switched his attention to Edward blushing slightly at the position Winry was in. Edward however wasn't looking away, instead a smirk went across his face as Winry struggled to reach the wrench. "Got it!" Winry's voice rang out in the silent room as she straitened back up to a smirking Ed and blushing Al.
Al relaxed when she didn't appear to notice the reason for their expressions and continued to work on Ed's automail repairs. As Winry started up her own story about what had happened in the past months Al caught Ed staring at him. He sighed knowingly and gathered up his book glancing back as he opened the door in time to see his brother pull a surprised Winry into a kiss.
Thanks for reading! Remember to review and tell me what you thought!
