"I'll give you one more chance, Trixie" said Evil Twilight. "I've got better things to do than to fight wash ups. Give up, join me and together we can maintain order and keep these ponies under our total control."

Trixie was stunned by her offer, but also enraged. Did she not hear a single word that she just said? Oh yeah, she was trying to beat her with reason.

"Sorry, Evil Twilight" said Trixie. "You will not beat me like that. You can't talk your way out of this. It's magic duel time!"

"It doesn't matter to me" said Evil Twilight. "I'm going to make you my slave either way."

"Don't count on it" said Trixie. "Snips, Snails step forward."

"Uh okay" said Snips as he and Snails stepped forward to Trixie.

"Let me guess, age spell?" said Evil Twilight.

Trixie didn't say a word, she just widened her eyes. How could she have guessed that?

"Yeah, I know all those noobish spells" said Evil Twilight. "While that last battle between you and Twilight never occurred in my universe, I still was able to figure out what "brilliant" scheme you'd try. Plus I read some of Twilight's journal."

"Prove it then" said Trixie.

"No!" said Granny Smith in the background. "Take it from me, she can do it. I don't want her turning Big Mac into a baby again!"

"Okay fine" said Trixie nervously.

"Time's up" said Evil Twilight. "It's time for you to feel the wrath of... ME!"

"What?" said Trixie.

"Take this!" said Evil Twilight as she started shooting magic beams at Trixie.

Snips and Snails had to duck and dodge them all as well.

"What's the matter Trixie?" said Evil Twilight. "You don't like this game?"

Trixie wanted to give up, but she knew that if she did it would be game over in her attempt to stop Evil Twilight. However, her struggling was to be in vain as she, Snips and Snails were all hit with a magic beam, thus making them her slaves... it was a mind control spell.

"I can't believe I didn't think of this sooner" said Evil Twilight, as her thinking led her to zapping Big MacIntosh and the Cutie Mark Crusaders with it. "Now you will all be my commanders, get the rest of these insubordinate ponies in line. I have a feeling things are finally going my way!"


With Twilight finally back in the game, the ponies rushed back to Ponyville to see what Evil Twilight had done.

"So what exactly has gone on since I was out of commission?" said Twilight.

"Let's just say that Ponyville is a big crazy mess, with a wannabe tyranical version of you... stinking things up" said Rainbow Dash with a small hint of anger in her voice.

"Well then, I guess we need to make sure we don't lose against her then" said Twilight.

"But Twilight" said Fluttershy. "You are still in no condition for fighting and niether is Rainbow Dash."

"Speak for Twilight only" said Rainbow. "I've never felt better."

"I don't have a choice, Fluttershy" said Twilight. "But I do appreciate Pinkie Pie for carrying Spike for me."

"You kidding?" said Pinkie Pie. "I've got more energy than I know what to do with."

"Oh my!" said Spike. "I think I'm going to..."

Pinkie Pie was ahead of the others. She got so excited that she forgot to see how far she got ahead. She had reached the Welcome to Ponyville sign, then she opened her eyes and stopped. She hit the breaks so hard that it flung Spike right off of her. Spike went flying off her back and into a mud puddle.

"Pinkie Pie!" yelled Spike.

"Ooops sorry Spike" said Pinkie Pie.

As the others caught up, they looked at the devistation that Evil Twilight caused. The one who was affected the most was Twilight.

"You mean to tell me that I have the potential to do all this?" said Twilight. "This is horrible! I would never in my right mind think of doing anything like this!"

"That's the problem" said Rainbow Dash. "Evil Twilight isn't in her right mind!"

"She's been Discorded, which means in her universe the 'other' us must still be Discorded too" said Applejack.

"Hey Rainbow Dash" said Derpy. "Can I go in there and see if I can find my muffins?"

"NO!" said Rainbow Dash. "You'll blow our element of surprise!"

"Oh alright!" said Derpy.

"I know what we need to do!" said Twilight.

"What is it?" said Spike.

"We must do what I did while you were all Discorded" said Twilight. "We need to pin her down so I can do the memory spell on her."

"Well that won't be easy!" said Rarity. "I mean, she's already high wired up by now. She's going to be tough to catch."

"Not to mention, she's probably hiped up after eating all my Cupcakes!" said Pinkie Pie angrily.

"Please tell me you remember how to do that, Twilight" said Rainbow Dash.

"Of course I do" said Twilight. "Thanks to you all, my memories are completely restored. Oh and seriously, Spike? I snore! I so do not snore!"

"Oh you still remember that huh?" said Spike as he chuckled a bit.

"Twilight, Spike!" yelled Rarity. "Please try to focus!"

"Alright girls... and Spike" said Twilight. "Let's go."

Twilight led Spike, Derpy and the other five members of the Mane 6 into town as they prepared to face their enemy. Twilight's emotions almost got the better of her as she looked around at all the sad ponies. Some glared at her because they mistook her as the one doing all of the damage. One pony even threw a rotten apple at Twilight's head.

"Ow!" said Twilight as the apple exploded all over her head and put a small bump on it. "What was that for?"

The pony just turned his head and walked away.

"I'm afraid they think that you are evil Twilight" said Rarity.

"Oh... yeah" said Twilight disappointed.

"Don't sweat it, Twi" said Applejack. "We know that you would never do anything like this."

After walking for another few minutes, they finally got to where Evil Twilight had her throne set up. The statue of her was almost finished and she appeared to be preparing to do her 'Evil Twilight Style' dance thing again.

"Alright Ponies" said Evil Twilight. "I finally found some enforcers to help me make sure that 'Evil Twilight Style' is danced by everyone... and that whatever I say goes!"

Trixie, Snips, Snails, Big Mac and the Cutie Mark Crusaders all lined up on the stage in front of her and started to do the dance.

Twilight and the others, hidden in a bush, were so horrified by what they were seeing.

"Ah can't believe she's making my brother and sister do that stupid dance!" said Applejack. "I'm about put to put the rodeo into to this rodeo clown!"

"Um Applejack" said Fluttershy. "You don't think she'll hurt my animals do you?"

"Girls, stay put!" said Twilight. "We don't know what's going to happen yet. It's not yet the moment to strike."

"And where are you going?" said Applejack.

"I need to get a closer look" said Twilight.

"Oh... please be careful Twilight" said Fluttershy.

Twilight nodded as she carefully snuck around to get behind the stage.


"Come on everypony!" said Evil Twilight. "The sooner you learn to follow my orders, the easier things will be for you!"

"And why should we?" said Granny Smith.

"I beg your pardon?" said Evil Twilight.

"I'm sick and tired of bullies like you coming to our town and threatening us!" said Granny Smith. "You're not the first tyranical bully to come through here, and they always get kicked out of town! You young whippersnapper! I have half a mind to come up there and give you an old fashioned spanking!"

"Finally got some courage eh Granny?" said Evil Twilight. "Does anyone else have anything to say?"

All the other ponies grew quiet. They were surprised that Granny Smith had the nerve to stand up to her. But they couldn't muster the strength and the courage to do it.

"I do!" said a voice from behind.

Evil Twilight turned around to see who her other challenger was; you can imagine some epic music playing in the background like from the thrid Live Action Transformers movie.

Twilight Sparkle had only been there for a few minutes and she was already sick of Evil Twilight ruining her good name. It went against the plans she made with her friends, but she was ready to stand up to her now. As Evil Twilight kept looking for the source of the voice, she paused as a small shadowy area from behind the stage had the sound of hoofprints and they were getting closer. Gradually Twilight Sparkle revealed herself to her alternate dimensional copy.

"You!" said Evil Twilight nervously. "How on Equestria did you escape your stone prison?"

"You're memory must be further off than I thought" said Twilight. "The power of friendship got me out of there. So I owe my life to my friends."

"Oh don't go on about the Elements of Harmony!" said Evil Twilight. "I outgrew those pieces of jewlery months ago!"

Twilight tried to keep her cool, it really frustrated her that another version of herself was acting like this. She knew she had to stay strong and that Evil Twilight just needed help, but it was taking every inch of her pride not to lunge after her.

"You're wrong!" said Twilight. "They are a part of who you are! Who we... I... ooooooooooh you get the idea!"


"What is she doing?" said Rainbow Dash from behind the bushes. "This wasn't the plan!"

"What was the plan exactly?" said Applejack.

"You forgot the plan?" said Rainbow Dash.

"Don't feel bad, AJ" said Pinkie Pie. "I didn't know there was a plan either. Ha ha."

"Someone's gotta stop her before she gets killed" said Rainbow Dash.


"If you're friends are so great, where are they now?" said Evil Twilight. "Did they abandon you just like my friends did me?"

"They abandoned YOU?" yelled Twilight. "I hate to say this, but you abandoned them when they needed you the most!"

Twilight stopped herself before she went any further. But it was too late.

"That's it, this time I'm going to do more than turn you into stone!" said Evil Twilight.

"No! Wait, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to..." said Twilight as she flinched.

Evil Twilight charged her horn and prepared to fire at Twilight, but just when she was about to do it, Rainbow Dash came out of no where and tackled her to the ground.

Twilight was relieved that Rainbow Dash showed up.

"What were you thinking, Twilight?" said Rainbow Dash. "You could have gotten yourself killed! What happened to laying low?"

"I'm sorry Rainbow Dash" said Twilight. "But I had to do something!"

Before Rainbow could argue, she was hit with a magic blast from Evil Twilight. Rainbow got sent flying back and then rolling a few times on the ground before she stopped. She started to get back up, when Scootaloo (who was under Evil Twilight's control) held her down.

"Rainbow Dash!" yelled Twilight as she turned and glared at Evil Twilight.

"Did you really think you could come here and challenge me?" said Evil Twilight. "You're so weak! If you had ditched your loser friends, like I did, you'd be twice as powerful as you are now. And look at you, even without your injuries, you couldn't stop me if you wanted to. I don't care if you are me!"

Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rarity and Fluttershy ran out of the bushes and stood in front of Twilight.

"Twilight is not weak!" said Applejack. "She's the strongest, hardest working, most hardcore pony we know!"

"Yeah!" said Pinkie Pie. "And don't you dare say that about her!"

"So we're losers huh?" said Rarity. "Do losers put away Discord, Nightmare Moon, the Queen of Changlings and several other bad guys? I don't think so!"

"Oh quiet you noobs!" said Evil Twilight as she used her magic to fling Applejack, Rarity and Pinkie Pie into a mud puddle.

"Ooooh my beautiful hair!" sighed Rarity.

Fluttershy began to get angry.

"HOW DARE YOU!" said Fluttershy. "HOW DARE YOU HURT MY FRIENDS! HOW DARE YOU INSULT TWILIGHT! HOW DARE YOU!"

"Am I supposed to be scared?" said Evil Twilight.

Fluttershy's facial expresion changed to a mischeivious grin.

"You should be" said Fluttershy.

Fluttershy grabbed Evil Twilight and started to push her around. This caught Evil Twilight by surprise. She took her and threw her up in the air(kind of like in Dragon Ball Z), then she flew up in the air and knocked her back down to the ground. She grabbed her leg and started swinging her around and then she let go when she realized what she was doing. Evil Twilight flew a couple of feet, then she hit the ground and pushed up a little bit of dirt.

"Oh no... I'm so sorry" said Fluttershy. "I don't know what came over me."

Evil Twilight had gotten a little hurt from Fluttershy's seemlingly brutal attack, but she just dusted herself off and laughed at the yellow pegasus.

"Well, well, well" said Evil Twilight. "Look who finally got some spunk!"

Fluttershy got scared and started to flinch again.

"That's quite enough, evil me!" said Twilight. "This is between you and me!"

"We'll see how long you last, Twilight" said Evil Twilight. "I doubt it's long! Those injuries are too many and they are weakspots! Taking you down a second time will not only be satisfying, but easy."

Twilight knew she was right, and she also knew that fighting wasn't the answer. She had to reason with her, but it was going to be a challenge.

Meanwhile Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash found themselves facing off with Trixie, Big MacIntosh, Snips and Snails and the Cutie Mark Crusaders, they had to figure out how to snap them out of the mind control spell.

The story is close to being wrapped up. I expect maybe 1-2 more chapters, plus the Epilogue before this is completed.

As always, feedback is appreciated. If you have any suggestions on what should happen, let me know. Also constructive critisism is welcome, just please don't be too harsh. Thanks fellow Bronies!